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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: lourel24
Superb

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: swathin
superb...
i really hope this really happen in serial too

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it and I would have loved for Raman to not go for the surrogacy in the show as well!

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#32

Originally posted by: janani_divan
Brilliantly written prabh baby..

ha ha ha cv's never show the way you portrayed raman inner turmoil about to lose her by his lies .his relationship with ishu is more important than a baby..

Show main bandheka sochane ka mouka kab diya cv's ne..his mistakes are increasing day by day that he not recognising what he is doing?is he selected right path to make his wife happy?she already clearly explained she dont trust in miracals and she dont want third baby..she already satisfied what she have in her life ruhi,adi and most importantly raman...

offcourse she blindly trust raman that the big cause she signed the paper before asking him what was that?or not checking the papers..she trust him blind.love is blind, the caption very much apt to ishra couple now..

She has been running from all she faced to lose their baby but her surroundings giving more pain...raman is not helping her to heal the wound...

And atlast i know she will forgive him.it is her nature ,that is a big weakness of ishita,people are taking advantage of it..atleast this time she questioned him,why he break her trust.

Continue soon prabh baby..thanks for pm

p.s:technically my mobile is not working properly,my like button not working ..so bare with me..and add my like in your list..

Thank you so much Di! I honestly at this point really don't care about what CVs show anymore, but the Raman I knew would really think before doing such a thing. Especially if it meant he may lose Ishita. Anyways I really don't think there is a point in discussing the show anymore. I just wrote this TS for my own satisfaction and happiness, to see what possibly could have been instead of the actual surrogacy. Not only Ishita, I think no woman or no person in general should sign anything so blindly! I thought the same when Raman does that with custody papers and I think that now with Ishita too! I showed what I wanted to see her, Ishita telling Raman how much he has hurt her and how she hasn't forgotten her baby! Let's see if she will forgive him here or not! Thanks again for liking and commenting. Am trying to update soon, maybe in a day or 2!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: DivAnian
It is beautiful dear! I really wished this could have happened in YHM. I loved this! Plzzz continue soon dear! And plzzz update the next part of Contract Of Love soon! Can't wait for it alr! Love u loads! And most importantly how r u dear? How's ur health? I really hope ur better! Take care of yourself! Health comes first! Love you🤗

Thnak you so much! I wish this happened too, but oh well! Will try to update soon in a few days! And I'm fine now, thanks for asking! Thanks again for liking and commenting!

Originally posted by: desire_nikki
It was fab sush...
U write is too well..
Atleast not like cv's...
Thanx for pm..
Do continue soon

Thank you so much Nikki! Glad you liked the writing and found it better than the CVs, means a ton! Thanks again and will try to continue soon!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Shre28
I am disgusted with the current track in the story. I have this gut feeling that soon the lead actors charm also will not be enough to resurrect the old YHM feel. I am glad that the writers in the forum are trying in their own way to show what a blunder is being committed.
Coming to the story, I so wished during that hospital scene that Raman realizes that he is breaking his wife's trust. Alas! I am glad you turned it that way. I really love how Ishu recounted the number of times she was broken because of Raman and his rash decisions. From Amma's accident to Daffa hojaao to the recent col storage. This surrogacy is the last nail in the coffin. I really want Raman to repent and Ishu to act hard and make him realize as life partners they are partners in everything and anything. Love and trust go hand in hand!
Thanks for the story. Really needed at this juncture!

Maybe the leads can keep a few people holding on, but really I doubt if anyone will see YHM the same as before, because I know I can't. I'm just writing what I wanted to see, and it really helps get away from the show. About the story, glad you liked seeing Raman realize he is breaking her trust and Ishita telling Raman how much he has hurt her with his lies! Let's see what happens next and whether they will make up or not! Thanks again for liking and commenting!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: yhmmylife
Love it prabh ..the maturity in your story 😊
Kaash cv"'s mein itni hoti 😭

Thank you so much! Glad you liked this one and found it mature! Means a ton!

Originally posted by: sininhp
Awesome..
Please continue..
Also PM me

Thank you so much! Will try to continue soon and PM you!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: ...Forever...
This is exactly what we want to see. Ishita taking a stand for herself is what we want to see. As I told you earlier, I will give short replies for the next weeks due to my exams, so chhotu comment. Awesome update. Continue soon.

Thank you so much Sonal! Glad you liked this and it was what you wanted to see especially Ishita standing up for herself! Thanks again for commenting even though you're so busy! Will try to update soon! Thanks again!

Originally posted by: heemasomani
Amazing part

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: rufana10
amazing update Prabh
this is what we all wanted to see in d show
but alas!
we YHM fans r not so lucky...
through this disgusting surrogacy track YHM CV's have officially
killed my most fav character raman 😔...i really miss my old RKB so much 😭😭😭
i have stopped watching YHM coz i'm unable to tolerate d recent surrogacy crap they r showing
ok leave it...
thank u for coming up with this TS...at least we will be able read
what we wanted to see through your writing 😃
loved d first part 👏
will wait to read d next update
hope u r fully recovered now
take care of yourself dear 😊

Thank you so much! This is what I wanted to see personally as well, but we didn't so I wrote it out myself. Raman was my fav too and the old Raman will always be the one character from Indian TV I love, but not this Raman. But glad you liked this TS and saw what you wanted to see in it! Thank you so much for liking the first part and will try to update the next part soon! And I'm fine now, thanks for asking!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: pcnsb
hey...
Amazing start... loved it!!!
The show has become such a disappointment these days... 🤢!!
We cant expect a logical track from CVs...
Raman needs to understand what he is doing is not correct... it is not going to do any good!
abb toh forums ki story se he kaam chalana padega!
Do continue soon...!!
Thanx for the PM
Nandini...

Thank you so much! I really am not affected by this show anymore because it's at a point where it disgusts me! I've not liked it at times, but have never been disgusted by it before, this time it's too much! I wish Raman understood, but he didn't so I wrote it that way myself! Glad you liked it and will tri to update soon!

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#39

Originally posted by: avni_19
Prabhhh ths is really awesome. How I wished Raman redeemed his mistakes in the serial..but no point I guess their kid is already in the vamp's womb! Shittt!

But this one..I loved it esp Ishita's breakdown n outburst. Raman alwys took advantage of her...! Not fair at all... I wud love if ishu forgives him once more n tht raman does promise he won't lie or hide anything.

Cont soon...

Thank you so much! I wish Raman would realize what he was about to do, but guess we can't have that! Anyways glad you liked this one especially Ishita's breakdown and Raman realizing what he was doing! Now let's see what happens next, whether she forgives him or not! Thanks again for liking and commenting!

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#40

Originally posted by: florine_20
Really nice.
something I wanted to watch in the show.
raman realising wat a grave mistake is has committed. Its all because of his deceiving habbit he has put his marriage at stake

Thank you so much! This is something I also wanted to see so I wrote it out! Glad you liked it especially Raman realizing how he put his marriage in danger because of his lies and hiding