Tujhe Bhulaa Diya....!? ( Did I forget you?)- An Ishra OS

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nahtani88

@nahtani88

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Superb

Lovely OS

Thank You For The PM

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Awww it was such an emotional os yr..
I wish cvs had showed something like that...but they just ended that topic..
but u showed it beautifully... loved it

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Sunita

@avni_19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

OMG OMG OMG Pankhuuu..Rula dia mujhe...sach mei... those lines which ishita told raman, her breakdown ws soo palpable tht I could not stop crying.

Kash kash yeh scene hota serial mei. Trp toh baadh jayega! Indeeddd one beautiful breakdown of a mother. The relationship between a mother n an unborn baby is simply beautiful n magical, tht if nythng happens to the unborn baby, its just the death of that mother. I so loved how u explained all that emotions here...

So glad tht Raman was with her!

Lovely attempt.

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nafnaf

@nafnaf

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Oh wow that was absolutely amazing - you nailed it totally - this would have made the show perfect!!!!!!!

You have amazing insight and so wonderfully expressed "dil ko chuliya" 😉the show writers should read YHM forum and get their ideas from here and not spoil YHM by doing their own thing!!!!!!!

Please continue in this way with more Oss🤗

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Amena Syeda Hasan

@amenaApuMona7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Exactly what I wanted to see in the show yaar. Sad & cute , I hope u can continue this or write something similar but no shagun in the story plz

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NeetuThakur

@NeetuThakur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Don't know what is happening with the show so after I read this I went back to watch a few episodes before commenting

And when I have seen the episodes I would say it is better to read here than to watch on TV

From where do you bring so much strength so write such things yaar

i guess this is your 3rd piece revolving around the similar topic and still you have come up with something new always

While reading this I didn't remember the previous two which means you justified it truly

If any of the episodes had half the emotions you portrayed here then the level of show would have been different

But itna achhaa luck kahan

Anyways brilliant job done Pankhu

so proud of you

and about the outing hope you had a good one 😉😉

Special mention for the beautiful song you have used

i need it my music box

always love you 🤗🤗

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rufana

@rufana10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

it was amazing 👏👏👏
beautifully written
loved it so much di 😃

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NeetuThakur

@NeetuThakur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

When someone praises you, you need to reply miss busy

sorry mistaken

mrs. busy

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Pankhuri

@DivanIsh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: aarohi26
Res
Chalo as I promised, I am back with my unres😛

i am back late haalanki islie maafi dedo madam

When u told me ki aap ishita ki feelings own down karna chahati ho so I was thinking ki kya likhogi but mujhe kya pata tha ki aap yeh likhogi.yaar matlab kaise likh leti ho? It was simply beautiful and shaayad vaise hi scene tha jaisa main chahati thi

awww thank you so much 😳

OK let's start from beginning...

Actually ishitas POV are needed but these cvs😡 Bas faaltu ki cheezein dikhana aata hau kaam ki toh aata nahi hai but aapaka POV was simply beautiful di 👏

me blushing 😳😳😳 thank you thank you...cvs ka toh naam mat le...nikamme kahin ke

Her POV was actually needed as she is a mother after all and ek baby ko khone ka sabse zyada dukh maa ko hi hota hai. They can portray this scene beautifully and DT will be best but I don't know why they spoiled this scene. I hope baad main aisa scene mile dekhne ko

Dt ko toh bhootni bana daala ab kya dekhegi tu yaar...cvs se kuch expect karna hi waste hai

Shower scene was simply awesome Didi.
They way she sat, sat while hugging her knees was too good brilliant Didi
You deserves all praise

eeshh thank you thank you thank you

After that my fav one is when raman came in bathroom.
He told her to cried out her pain. But is it possible??
Kiske kandhe par sar rakhke roegi jabki woh jaanti hai ki saamne wala khud hi kamzor hai. Pain uske saamne hi nikaala jaata hai Jo strong ho. And raman was himself broken here.
you are right...you need a strong shoulder to cry on...

glad you liked that part...love ya

He always told her we really don't need a child to prove our love then ab kya?
Why he is so much desperate for child?
He wanted to give her feel of motherhood and kya yeh surrogacy se possible hoga? And is there is any need for third child?
This attitude is still in expectable for me

unacceptable by all of us phir bhi cvs ne woh surrogacy crap toh dikhaya na 😡😡😡 damn you cvs

And after that my best part came.
Main khud chahati hoon ki aisa scene show main ho. One simple promise from him that she don't want another child.
Main khud chahati hoon ki aisa ek scene ho jab ishita kahe ki bas ek chheze chahiye mujhe, mujhe humara baby nahi chahaiye Raman. I want to live normal life.

normal kya yeh toh ab bhootiya life jee rahi hai...abnormal se bhi jyada abnormal...hum jo soche cvs waisa dikha de aisa hua hai kya aaj tak thapathap

Di shaayad words kam ho but this os was simply beautiful and u nailed this Didi.
And as I said, aankhen khulne se pehle unres hoga, so I Did it 😛
Thanks again meri petal didi

arre thank you so much for itni saari taareef cutieee

thanks a lot

love you