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usaonly

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Posted: 9 years ago

#411

OMG Hansa it is going to be crying update. what happen to Abhi don"t keep for to ;long to update.😭😭

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Posted: 9 years ago

#412

Originally posted by: rufana10
nice teaser di
now ishra will be together 😃
but feeling bad for abhi...
where is shagun?
waiting for d update 😊

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smala

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Posted: 9 years ago

#413

Loved the story.

You have written it well.

Kudos for a job well done.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#414

Originally posted by: AttitudeQueen13
Oho teasing bhoot 😆 bahut hogaya yeh lollipops 😆 give our full full update... Please waiting waiting

you will get it tomorrow pakka thx for comment

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Posted: 9 years ago

#415

Originally posted by: nahtani88
Awesome Teaser
Continue Soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: usaonly
OMG Hansa it is going to be crying update. what happen to Abhi don"t keep for to ;long to update.😭😭

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: smala
Loved the story.
You have written it well.

Kudos for a job well done.

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thank you yo read this ss

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Posted: 9 years ago

#418

HELLO GUYS THX TO LOVE THIS FF IM SO GLAD FOR THIS N PROMISE YOU TOO GIVE YOU GOOD UPDTS TOO 😃.

NOT PROOF READ N IGNORES MISTAKES TOO.

NOTE : DURING PRAYING I WILL USED BOTH ISHRA TALK BY TURN

DIL KA RISHTA

PART 7

LOOSE EVERY THING

It start with dargha

Where ishra enter along with shravu in raman arms , when they reach where to praying place , they bent while they pray, the holy man cover them with the shadar n bless them while ishra was praying ... from their mind n heart ... for other happiness n for their families.

Raman prays ... " Give ishita all happiness n love which she deserve in her life ... for me my happiness lies in her happiness " .

Ishita too was praying ... " Raman means a lot for me ... please always keep him happy n let him be with his love whom he love ... I know it not me but for me my happiness is lies in his ".

R " We both need each ever side n our bond is so strong ... now she is close to me even not same house ... I know I will see her ".

I " I can leave without other person but not without raman side ... we dont share a lover type relation but ... our friendship has more meaning n power which it never broke even being far from each ever ".

R " On seeing her happy n smile I feel happy ... if needed take my part of happiness n give her ".

I " Give me his sadness n give him my happiness ... want to see him always laugher n teasing way ".

R " Her naughtiest small small thing ... which make her happy ... I always want it see her always. like this ".

I " In next birth make me his life partner ... n accept all his prayer please take from my side too ... he has a good wife like shagun who love him n soon will have a baby keep them always happy ".

R " In next birth make her my life partner ... which I always wanted to have in my life n accept her prayer if needed take mine ... she got a good husband like abhi who love her a lot n a baby keep her happy with her family ".

Both lift their head n two flowers fall on them as blessing they stand n went to tied a thread for both famillies happiness .

Both mothers too pray for their kids happiness n to keep all of them happy n together always with love.

Abhi n shagun enter n they pray from their heart ... to keep ishra always together n happiness n also to bless them ... abhi say ... " If needed take his life but dont separate ishra again in this life.

Shagun say ... " She know she will not live longer with raman ... but she is happy n thankful to god of six months of her wed ... she got her in Laws love n a good husband like raman ".

Both fathers did same wishes too.

Once outside all meet ... abhi take shravu from raman n play with him n all go back in station for train ... they shared food they enjoying with talk laugh jokes once in train ... unknown to them what is waiting them in next hour which will come.

Abhi tease ishita ... " Ishu you know what I pray ? , your happiness which I always wanted you to be ... ishu you must take care of our shravu properly ".

All was staring him why this type of talk ... ishita was feeling weird in his talk ... " Mani of cause I will n you too will be with me to help me right ... or you are planning to run away ? ".

Abhi stares her ... " God knows but if im not there then raman is there na right raman ", hide his sadness he was getting a heavy heart .

Shagun who reply on behalf of raman ... " It not a question to ask abhi ofcause he will ... n our baby he will take care ... you did not see how he handle shravu ... I must say he has a talent ", with normal tone n smile .

Raman who smile ... " Shagun what you think only me who will handle baby not you where you are planing to leave han n abhi im always there to help Jkr you know that " .

Ishita tease raman in laugh ... " I got a new job for you Ravan kumar n it baby sister ... what say good na ... you handle shravu n will handle yours yeah that good baby sister ", with laughing .

All burst out of laughing n look at raman.

Raman who was happy to see all happy he thx god in heart for this happiness moment ... " Oye Jkr atleast I can take care of baby not like you who cant stop her baby carrying yes if needed I can become baby sister for shravu if you cant handle him ... abhi im telling dont make another child other wise you will do every things " , he too laugh n throw popcorn on ishita.

Both parents was please to see how both their daughter n son are happy in life ... madhvi get tears in eyes ... toshi wipe it n make a no sign to her both hugs.

Amma announce them that next week they will do name ceremony for shravu as there was no any auspession months until after his six months ... they accept to be part of it.

The train arrive at a station ... raman was going out to gwt water for shagun ... abhi who was carrying a crying shravu to stop but ... it was not abhi who was tired n feel weakness suddenly ... he hand over shravu to raman n ask him to handle shravu now he cant any more n go to sit while shravu hand was going away from him ... he felt like his life is going away n will not see n be with shravu again he kiss him n let ask raman to take shravu out with him .

Ishita who saw abhi not feeling she take care of him both have an eyes lock ... abhi told ishita to take care of her self n for shravu too .

Shagun was staring raman going away she felt it his last clips which she is going to see his smile face ... ramsn turn to het n do a what sign to her with smile n she did nothing as sign to him .

There was the last time of sharam clips n ishbi last time eyeslock .

Another train who was coming in full speed ... which was burning too could nit spare the other train n

BOOM an explosion fire every where even raman fall down with shravu in arms ... every where there was fire n dead corps around ...

On seeing this raman was lost his mind he was unable to believe all has been vanish in a second he loose every thing ... he shout n cry loudly

Nooo...😭

SCREEN FREEZ ON HIS SAD SHATTERED FACE

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Edited by --HANSA-- - 9 years ago

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Divanru

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Posted: 9 years ago

#419

Yipee hansu me first again.👏 nice and emotional update dear.felt very bad for abhi and shagun .abhi and shagun both truly love their partners and willing them to be happy always though not with them.

Edited by Divanru - 9 years ago