Will you forgive me? An IshRa FF- Chapter 5 updated Page 28 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awesome start
i loved it
abhi simmi i jst loved this pairing
for d chamge abhi is raman's bff nice
awww raman was chasing him so cute was that
lisa wow she is so sweet i like her
update soon n if possible do pm m

Thank you Prachi, hope that's ur name. Abhi is Raman's close friend & he will be instrumental in making them come close again. I will PM u. Have a great weekend..
With regards-kaarthikk.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sarayasriya

hi karthik,
nice update😊
but we wont forgive u if u wont give long updates😛😛
continue soon iam waiting to know what made raman to hate ishitha

Thank you Sriya. I swear I will give a long update today.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
No words to say only one request
Update soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

No words to say only one request

Update soon 😳


Sure Asha. Will update today.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 2

Raman was grinning like an idiot in his Cabin when Lisa was serving Coffee to him.

Sir, what why are you smiling like this?

Huh! Nothing. Said a straight faced Raman.

Bhai!

Arey, kuch nahi yaar. Just like that. Bus ek aadmi hasi nahi saktha hai kya?

Kuch toh hai. May be it involves some special person said a smirking Lisa.

For gad sakes why are you bringing Ishita in this matter?

When was I bragging about Ishita? Acha ji I understood now, Lisa said teasingly.

Its nothing yaar. She made that guys shut up after listening to crap they are gossiping. It was nice.

Yes bhai. Ishita gave them lecture & after that they are not even looking at my side.

Haha! JKR aur uski lecture thought Raman in his mind.

Whats your story bhai? Plz tell me.

No Lisa. I am busy today.

Oh Plz! Delegates are coming @ 2 pm only. We have more than 3 hrs for that.

I think I should hire a new P.A chuckled Raman.

C'mon bhai.

Ok ok...

We were old friends. I mean both of our families are known to each other for years. If you would ever witness a crazy gang, believe me our families are epitome of it. Whenever Bhalla-Iyer clan joins for a party hell break loose for sure. Ishita & I were close friends then. My father always consider her as a daughter. Appa is a good guy. He treats me as his son even now. I was a short tempered guy even then. One time we both(IshRa) had a fight. In anger I said that I would screw her life at any cost. Next day I woke up late & when I came down it was a ruckus. Everybody seeing me with rage except Appa & Simmi. Ishita was crying on my mother's lap. My father came & slapped me. I was blank. Nothing is clear to me. Suddenly police came & my father happily handed me over to the police. Then I come to know that somebody morphed Ishu's photos in some bikini models & they posted it in our colony walls & coz of that she had to quit from the association & her new project was scrapped by the authorities in our college after this scandal. Irony is the photo which was morphed was there in my PC including Ishu's photo. Then Appa & Abhi came to police station, bailed me out. I tried to reason with Papa, Mumma & Ishu. None of them budged. Ishita told me not to come in front of her again. They bet me in police station & even my parents accused me of doing such a shameful act.

But nothing affected more than her words. The one whom I thought knew me inside out broke me into pieces that day. But Appa & Abhi didn't leave the matter. They found the real culprit behind that act within next 6 months. By that time Abhi & I were planning to start this company. Ishu & my parents tried to apologise many times but I never listened. Its been five years since I had a word with my parents, said RKB with tears flowing down his cheek.

Lisa was moved to tears after hearing his story.

I am so sorry bhai. I shouldn't have asked you to do this.

Hey, its nothing. Sometimes we need reality check in our lives.

But bhai I have never seen Ishu's father till now.

Oh! Appa, I used to meet him every weekend. I will introduce you to him this time.

Meanwhile in ishu's house,

Aiyo Viswa! Ishu Lunch box bhool gayi.

No problem Madhu, I will give it to her in person.

Appa came to the Office & was waiting in reception.

Appa, aap yahan? Come lets go to our cabin said Raman after seeing him in the reception.

Its ok Raman. I just came to give this lunch box to Ishu. No problems for youna!

Arey kya Appa? U cud never say no to me. He dragged Appa to his cabin.

Lisa called Ishu & said that Raman wants her in his cabin immediately. So both Simmi & abhi accompanied her to avoid any problems with Raman.

There Appa gave Ishu her lunch box & inquired about Simmi & Abhi too.

Abhi & Simmi when u guys r planning for marriage.

I am thinking uncle. They are many good boys in our community, why should I marry a silly vegetarian guy? giggled Simmi.

Uhh! Watch your mouth woman said Abhi.

Grow up darling! If I am not here I bet u that there will be no girl ready to marry.

Who said. Wait a minute. Lisa u like me na.

Yes Sir.

Will u marry me Lisa.

Sorry Sir I always consider u as my bhai, said Lisa & with this the whole cabin burst into laughs.

What happened my darling? Chances r slim, huh? Winked Simmi.

You guys never change said Appa.

Ok Raman I will leave now, don't want to take your previous time.

What Appa. Anything can wait when it comes to you. By the way how you came Appa?

I came by auto. I will go by bus Raman.No problems.

No ways Appa. Main hoon na. I will just ask my drive to drop you. C'mon.

All this time Ishita was drooling over the sweet RKB who is unknown to outside world.

Ishita! I think its time to stop drooling over my bhai. It was like u r making love through your eyes said an excited Simmi who is full mood to tease Ishita & she turned red to her comment.

U r shameless Simmi. I am going out escaped Ishita.

Meanwhile Raman & Appa came to his Audi.

Well Raman I need ask one thing. Hope u won't mind it.

Arey kya Appa, poocho?

Please talk with your parents. I can understand your pain Raman but you gave them enough punishment already. Even yesterday they were crying to me & madhu in the phone while we were talking about you. Its high time Beta. I know u r a matured guy. Hope u do this soon.

Sure Appa. I will try.

Meanwhile foreign delegates arrived & soon RKB was in action. They were happy regarding this project & raman was in jubilant mood after the confirmation of the project.

While Raman was pacing down to his cabin he collided with Ishita. Both of them fell down. They had an eye lock. Their chains got stuck together. Ishita was moved to tears after seeing this chain which was presented to him by her in their final year of engg. Raman scolded him mentally for wearing that chain infront of her. Somehow he took it out of the mess.

I am sorry said Raman.

No actually I was the one who didn't see you & collided. So sorry.

Hmmm. Are you ok in this office?

Yeah fine Sir, no problem.

Your cabin is comfortable na!

Of course Raman. I mean yes Sir it is comfortable.

If there is any problem just gimme a heads up.

Sure said a visibly happy Ishita.

While Raman was walking to his cabin his inner soul started talking to him,

Raman1:- Dude W*F r u doing? U suppose to hate her.

Raman2:-Oh plz she did a mistake but she asked apology many times. U should forgive her Raman.

Raman1:- No ways Raman did u forget how cops played football with your bare body coz of that woman.

Raman2:-Oh C'mon on the previous day u lost ur temper & said some harsh words. So anybody would have doubted you man.

Raman1:-yeah but how she? She is the one who suppose to support him at that moment.

Raman2:-So even u accept that she is special to him.

Raman1:-Don't listen to him. He is manipulating you.

Raman2:-Its high time Raman forgive her & take this relationship forward.

Raman1:-Don't listen to him. I am giving you final warning.

Raman2:-Stop your bullshit & let him have a life.

Both of you shut the *uck up before I go on a killing spree.

Whole office look bewildered with the mighty RKB's sudden outrage.

RKB composed himself & said "what are you looking at, continue your work".

Meanwhile Abhi & Simmi planned to tease him in his cabin.

While RKB was checking files in his cabin with two of his employees both of them entered.

Simmi U like this office na! asked Abhi.

Of course Abhi.. I mean Sir I like it very much.

Your Cabin is comfortable na!

Yeah, ita fine!

If there is a problem gimme a heads up. I will attach your cabin to mine said a grinning Abhi.

Raman understood they are teasing him. He sent the employees out after signing the files & yet agin started to chase Abhi...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Oh the past is disclose.who did this creep thing to ishu?
Iyers ,bhallas not trust him ..except appa,abhi..
hmm raman melting like chocolate in the presence of ishu.interesting update and u give long update too.
Lisa is hilarious..
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Karthik it was a bang on update.
So he is angry because she didn't trust her.
But he is a sweetheart ,he still cares for her
The chain scene was good
Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Res
Yeh kya tha 😲
Double treat 😳
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Edited by Gaya3sb - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
hi karthik,
so now the reason behind hating ishitha was cleared
now waiting for their union😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
ye track bahut maza de raha hai seriously😆

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