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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is too good! Please continue soon. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: joliveira

Awesome... Waiting for part 2

thanks! will update very soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nahtani88

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thank you! next part will be up soon. will pm u 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I love the idea..! Waiting to see Puttar's antics to score 10 on 10 from biwi!
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Here is Part 2 guys. I am yet to do the english translations, I promise to do it by tonight. 😊

Part 2

In the evening, the entire family was sitting together for dinner at the dinning table.

Ruhi was sitting next to Ishita, she was sharing the happenings of her day with her mother excitedly.

Ruhi: "Ishima, aaj na humne phir Kshitija ke saath bhi khoob saara khela! Mumma wo abhi thodi badi bhi ho gayi hai na! wo itna smile karne lagi hai , aur respond bhi karti hai thoda thoda"

Ishita: "Hmm..you are right Ruh!"

Ruhi: " Jab mera bhi bhai ya behan aayega na phir main uske saath bhi saara din khelungi! Phir wo jab dheere dheera bada hoga to kitna mazaa aayega!"

Ishita: " Ruhi.. maine aapko samjhaya tha na, ki itne high hopes mat rakho beta..aur vaise bhi aapke paas to already apne Adi bhaiyaa hai na.. to apko aur brother ya sister ki kya zaroorat hai! dekho Shravu ke paas 1 sister, Ruhi ke paas 1 brother! To same to same to hue!

Ruhi: " No No ishima! Ruhi wants a little brother or sister! Ruhi wants to become a big sister!"

Ishita: " Ruhi! Bahut bolne lag gaye ho aap aaj kal. Aur khate tym vaise bhi baat nahi karte. Ab chup chap khaana khao aap"

Ruhi made a grim face, but Raman's face was grimmer.

" high hopes mat rakho beta... Matlab ab mujhse bachche hone par bhi shak bad gaya iska.. 2/10..hey bhagwan!"


Later Ishita was chatting with Toshiji in the kitchen at night, and they were contemplating leaving the kids with Raman the next day as the ladies go for a treat at the spa.

Ishita: " Nahi Nahi mummyji, nahin ho paayega Raman se"

Raman suddenly caught sight of them and overheard only the last bit of the conversation, where Ishita said Nahi Nahi mummyji, nahin ho paayega Raman se..

His heart sank.

Nahi..Nahi ho paayega!???

WTH. Ab to confirm tha. Nahin ho paayega usse. 2/10. Maybe now he had to continue with his bramacharya for the rest of his life!

He headed to his room with gloomy looks and later laid down on his bed on one side.

***

Ishita later changed into a sexy white satin nightie with a very revealing neckline.

She was expecting a warm reception from her hubby when she came out of the bathroom clad in that nightie, but to her disappointment, he was curled up on one side of the bed, lost in his thoughts, apparently not even bothered about her.

Ishita: " Raman! Aap aise kyun lete hue ho ek side par? Kya hua..koi pareshani hai kya?"

Raman: " Nahin..ahem haan.. wo thand lag rahi hai mujhe"

Ishita: " Thand lag rahi hai? Par AC to band hai.. Infact main to soch rahi thi AC chala kar..."

Raman: " Arey Dilli mein itni baarish hai aur tumhe AC ki padi hai!"

Still disappointed with her hubby's lack of interest in her, she headed to other side of the bed.

Raman turned inadvertantly, and the moment he noticed her, his eyes widened.

He squeezed his eyes shut, slowly turned back to his side and started muttering "Ram Ram Ram Ram Ram Ram Ram Ram Ram.."

Ishita laid down on the other side of the bed.

" Inhe kya ho gaya hai. Pura mood kharab kar diya mera. Ab mujhe hi kuch karna hoga.."

She turned her body on one side to look at his head which was turned away from her.

She started caressing his arm with her hands.
He instantly had goosebumps, but he was struggling his best to control himself.

"Ram Ram Ram Ram Ram Ram Ram Ram..." he continued in his head.

She tried pulling him so that he turned to her side and looked at her, but apparently was refusing to do so.

" Beta agar tu mud gaya na to usse dekh kar teri saari hawa aur saare controls ud jaane hain! Isse pehle ki dobara tujhe 2/10 ya 1/10 milen aur teri izzat ki dhajjiyaan uden, beta tu control mein reh.." he told himself.

"Raman!" she pulled him really hard this time, he had to turn around.

The warmth of her body was driving him insane. He opened one of his eyes only to realise that she had pulled his head right into her cleavage.

He instantly shut back that eye and continued the loudest this time..

RAM RAM RAM RAM RAM RAM RAM RAM RAM!

"Ye kya bad bad kar rahe hain aap Raman!"

"Cummon baby..look at me!" she continued, as she pulled his head up with both her hands.

" Cummon baby! Cummon!"

"Cummon! I wanna see the tiger in you..Like the other day! Cummon Raman! f**k me Raman..take me on!" this tym even trying to rub her bosoms against his chest as she spoke.

"Mmm..." she groaned, and pulled him into a deep, claiming kiss.

KYAAA????!!!!!!!!!!

Only by the time his mouth was in hers did his brain completely process what she had just said.

She wants to see the TIGER IN ME?! LIKE THE OTHER DAY!?!!!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!

Mann me kitne laddu phute Raman ke, usko ginti hi nahi thi!

Wah WHAAAT - A - RELIEF!!!

" What baby? Did you just say you want to see the tiger in me? Like the other day? " he spoke as he set his lips free from hers.

Ishita: " A..amm..Yes ofcourse darling!"

Raman: "To phir us din das mein se do kyun diye the?"

Ishita: " Das mein se do? Maine kab diye aapko das mein se do...ACHCHA WO!!!"

" OMG! " she continued, got up and sat cross legged, and started laughing uncontrollably.

"Oh my god! Oh my god! Raman.. hahhahahahaha!"

Raman: "Itni hasi kyun aa rahi hai tumhe! Yahan aadmi ki haalat do din se itni kharab hui padi hai..aur aap madam non-stop hass rahi hain..! Kuch bolo gi bhi! "

Ishita: " Raman wo 2/10 maine idli sambhar ko rate kiya tha jo humne wo breakfast mein mangvaya tha hotel mein"

Raman: "Achchcha wo! OMG!"

He started laughing loudly along with her this tym.
"Hey bhagwan..meri to jaan hi nikaal di tumne!" he continued.

Ishita almost had tears in her eyes laughing.

Ramam: " Chalo ab bas karo itna hasna. Band baja di tumne meri. Pagal kahin ki. Aur tumko har baat khaane ke baare mein kyun lagti hai..aur wo bhi madrasi khana? PAGAL MOTI MADRASAN!"

Ishita: "Aiyyo! chup Raman! Aur aap kya karte hain..! sach mein..ek dum stupid wali harkatein kar rahein aap subah se..bekaar mein itna pareshaan bhi hue aap..seriously..kya soch kya rahe the.. 2/10..hahaha"

Raman: " Ab aur mazaak mat udao. Bas karo ab..abhi Tiger wali performance chahiye na!"

ishita: " Achcha achcha" but she continued laughing.

They finally controlled their laughter and settled back in some time.

Raman: " Chalo ab shuru karein ?"

Ishita : "Ofcourse.. "

Raman :" But one sec. Pehle ab rate to karo us raat ki performance ko!"

Ishita: " Achcha...mmm.. ok i rate you 7 on 10. Chalo 7.5 diye."

" 7.5? Itne kum! Mujhe laga tha 10 nahin to 9 to dogi tum mujhe" he made a sad puppy face.

" Kya Raman aap bhi na!" she pulled his face up and kissed him on the cheek.

"Chalo 8 on 10 ab khush?" she smiled naughtily.

Raman :" Kya hai.. 9 to do!"

Ishita: " Arey baba there should be scope for improvement na! Abhi to we have to try lots of things..you still have a lot to prove!"

Raman: " Ab tum aadmi ko challenge mat do haan! Chodunga nahin tumko..soch lo! Kha jayeega ye Tiger tumhe!"

Ishita: " Hmmm..thats exactly what i want baby!"

Raman: " To phir der kis baat ki.. Sher apna shikaar shuru karega ab.."

Saying that, he pushed himself on top of her, and in no time, started to torment and devour her body..

***

30 minutes later..

"Come on Raman! Come on! Aur fast! Aur fast!..M..aah! aah! baby! like that..aah just like that!..yes yes.. this one is a 9/10! you wanna score higher right? Keep going..Keep going baby..Yes! yes! Just like that! Just like that!"

*** End of TS***

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Edited by peace.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Part 2 updated above. English translations for both parts will update by the evening.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Lol, Raman chanting "Ram Ram Ram" to stop himself was hilarious and I'm glad that the misunderstanding was cleared finally.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Ram...ram...ram...ram...
Like seriously...
It was hilarious and hot
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
there is nobody better than you when it comes to mature humor...you are just THE BEST
totally loved the update...you took me on a laughter ride...there is so much i want to copy down but will control and try copying the least

" high hopes mat rakho beta... Matlab ab mujhse bachche hone par bhi shak bad gaya iska.. 2/10..hey bhagwan!" 🤣🤣🤣🤣

He squeezed his eyes shut, slowly turned back to his side and started muttering "Ram Ram Ram Ram Ram Ram Ram Ram Ram.."🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

" Beta agar tu mud gaya na to usse dekh kar teri saari hawa aur saare controls ud jaane hain! Isse pehle ki dobara tujhe 2/10 ya 1/10 milen aur teri izzat ki dhajjiyaan uden, beta to control mein reh.. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Arey baba there should be scope for improvement na! Abhi to we have to try lots of things..you still have a lot to prove😳

ending 😳

please dont go missing again...we all miss you...be around and keep writing more and more


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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG this was hilarious..
'Ab mujhe bache hone pe bhi shake bad gaya iska' ROFL...
🤣

Brilliantly done..
Superb

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