My first ss# FROZEN LOVE,part-7, updated on pg.49 - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago
this is not fair dear,u r giving very short updates,
and coming to the story its very interesting,i think so shagun played some tricks on ishitha😊
continue soon
and congrats for starting first FF
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: janani_divan


raman love's shaguniya and ishu.he want both in his life.chelo ab toh suspense kula abha.cheer up.u are not in my buddy list,so i send request.add it...:-D

dono kaise...i know u hate shaggy...so is she raman sister like gaya made in her many story😆...
kuch locha h...yeh wo wala pyar nhi h...
but suspense nhi khula...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sarayasriya

this is not fair dear,u r giving very short updates,
and coming to the story its very interesting,i think so shagun played some tricks on ishitha😊
continue soon
and congrats for starting first FF

thank u sriya baby..
update is on the way
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --abha--

dono kaise...i know u hate shaggy...so is she raman sister like gaya made in her many story😆...
kuch locha h...yeh wo wala pyar nhi h...
but suspense nhi khula...

locha... locha 🤣 cracking me
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART-II

Hi my lovely buddies😊
Not proofread , please overlook spelling/grammatical errors.😳
enjoy reading😛

"Think about your family! Think about Shagun, you disgusting man!"😡

"Chup ek dam chup...tum mujhe seekaougi kya karna hain kya nahi karna hain?" He yelled at her.😕

You are repeating the same mistake again Raman, Just go away from here. I know shagun is in pain and we are equally responsible for her pain. Don't blame me!" Ishita yelled back.😕

"Shagun...Shagun ..Shagun! Kya lagake rakha hain.tumari muh se uska naam be math lena...samjhe!" he retorted.😡

"Raman...Shagun is my friend, how can u say that to me?"😭

Now you remember she is your friend! When she was in pain and wanted your support, why did you leave her?😲

"Uss waqt mujhe vohi sahi laga." Ishita answered.

"Kya sahi laga...hmm? Bolo ..kya sahi laga!"😡

"If I didn't leave Shagun in that day, our loved ones would have been more hurt than us."😲

"Wow...madam you are taking our life decisions. I must say you are master in playing your cards."😕

"Raman!" Ishita shouted 😭

"Don't shout on me" Raman voice raised as he continued...😡

"Yeh sab teri wajhese huwa hain Ishita, you are the one who responsible for whole fiasco. Just because of u and that Subbu!"😲

She just kept silent as tears were flowing from her eyes. She didn't know what to say...she was already blaming herself and thinking she was responsible for Shagun condition...But Subbu?😲 Why was Raman accusing Subbu..it is not his fault, but may be Raman is right. But then she thought to herself...😕

This is not the time to regret Ishita...you shouldn't listen to Raman's words.😕 Anyways you have already solved problem ,right? Maybe Raman doesn't know about it?😲 Or he knows everything and he doing this to me on purpose...but why? Did Shagun not tell him? I think I should tell him now. No! Ishita, he is not in sense or he is tricking you?😳 Is he tricking me again? I should be strong now and then face him...

She recollected herself and then shouted back on him...😳

"This is not my fault Mr.Bhalla! You are the one who is hurting me and Shagun!"😡

Raman became more furious now. He couldn't tolerate her accusations on him. and was not ready to take damn shit anymore as he thought to himself...

How am I responsible? Why she is blaming me? Is she playing with my feelings again? No! 😉

"I wont leave u ishita,abhi nahi toh kabhi nahi..."he thought to himself.😉

She felt herself being pulled very hard by him. He pulled her so vigorously that she hit into his chest he immediately held her hand tightly.😆

ouch...raman that's hurting me, in a fear voice.😭

He ignored her words, he pulled her in a rough manner.😲

Raman you hurting me...she spoke up almost tears in her eyes. she is sweating badly. He just kept dragging her from one end to another end . she not breathing properly, his proximity suffocating her . she hate him, yes she hate's his behaviour. she can't take it anymore.😲

she yelled him loudly" what the hell is wrong with u Raman? tears streaming down her eyes. 😭He ignored her words, his main motive is to hurt her b'coz she hurting him. He held her by her waist, pushed her back to the wall behind and rested his head against her neck firmly...she gasped her breath for one second. slowly he held her face in a tight grip with his hands,while his another hand encircled her waist . she melting like chocolate.😉

Raman... stop...this is not right " she said breathing heavily, his touch making her go weak in her knees . He made his grip more tighter.😲

"i don't know why but he had an effect on me . He sucked my neck and nuzzled , putting wet kisses over my jaw line, I moaned in pleasure, but still hesitated to accept him.😲

she closed her eyes to feel his love but it doesn't work 😕 , she remembered shagun and her family.😲

without any second thought... she pushed him hardly.😳😕😡😲

TO BE CONTINUED...

BUDDY ME FOR PMS

Edited by janani_divan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I somewhat got the plot 😉
I won't tell it out 'cause I love the way you're writing it Jaanu ❤️
You're an awesome writer of mystery
Hooked up...
It was also short 😔
I wanna read more ☺️
Update soon 😊
Edited by Gaya3sb - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

Res
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I somewhat got the plot 😉
I won't tell it out 'cause I love the way you're writing it Jaanu ❤️
You're an awesome writer of mystery
Hooked up...
It was also short 😔
I wanna read more ☺️
Update soon 😊


u got the plot wow:-)
i struggled to post this update ,its take me 3 hours.yeh par server problem hota hain.
U wanna read more,i will try my best..
thanks for encouragement kanna.


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: janani_divan


u got the plot wow:-)
i struggled to post this update ,its take me 3 hours.yeh par server problem hota hain.
U wanna read more,i will try my best..
thanks for encouragement kanna.



Arey... You're giving tiny-tiny updates and asking if you want more 😡
Lengthy...update dedo...
I'll give you a
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb


Arey... You're giving tiny-tiny updates and asking if you want more 😡
Lengthy...update dedo...
I'll give you a


i will try next time re..
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Posted: 10 years ago
mysterious update andu wrote amazingly dear👍🏼👍🏼...what's going between them...ye shuubu shagun kya jholjhal hai didn't understand...next update zaldi do then that we will know ke akhir chal kya raha hai ye😉
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