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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: aisha_ranbir8
Hey beautifully written ... Loved it.. :) waiting for 2nd part.. Continue soon... Take care.. Love aish :)

Thanks Aish! 😊

Not sure though, whether I'd be able post a 2nd part or not, or when (if I do) 😳

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#22

Originally posted by: DivanIsh
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this is simply beautiful...dont have much too say but this was just perfect

Sunday i was watching a show and Anupam Kher said something beautiful about writers...i would want to say the same for you

Aap kalam se shabd nahi ehsaas likhte ho

i hope you know hindi waise *hiding my face*

to be on safer side in case you don't what i mean to say is you don't pen down words but feelings and emotions

eagerly waiting for Raman's point of view and then the two of them together 😊

Thank you so much Pankhuri 🤗

Hindi is my 1st language, so I understood everything 😳 That's such a huge compliment! 😳

I am still speculating about the 2nd part (Raman's POV), and you're already looking for the both of them together 😛

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: s_kavya
That was very beautifully written Nidoo 👏 loved ishu's emotions it was heartouching.. how she was happy and feeling complete.. that shyness remembering there beautiful moments.. that happiness and bliss being in his arms... really lovely writeup... Will be waiting to read Raman's thoughts his emotions.. 😳

Thanks Kavya! 🤗

We're all so attached to the characters, hence tend to think deeply, and such situations and words pour out 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: mayraa
Very beautifully written...
Loved it...
So calm and peaceful...
Waiting for Raman's POV...

Thanks Mayraa! 😳 Appreciate your comment 😊

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: ..Mehak..
Awww. It was amazing. Loved Ishita's POV her feelings for him what she felt last night. Super amazing.

Thank you Mehak 🤗

P.S. Your siggy box is making me go crazy 😆 You have ALL the moments in there ☺️

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: anisha960
beautifully written
loved it !!

Originally posted by: divazfankau
beautiful

Originally posted by: yhmmylife
Beautiful 👏👏👏

Thank you guys 🤗

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: mayasundar
Beautiful.
Waiting for Raman view.
Please pm if possible for the next one

Thanks Maya! 😳

Don't have a PM list yet, but will inform if I can 😳

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: cloudy24
it was always meant to be, they were always meant to be. There was no embarrassment, just an acceptance... i love these more👏👏

Thank you 😳 (Sorry, don't know your name yet 😛)

That is how I saw the morning after play out, so naturally 😳 😳

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#29

Originally posted by: florine_20
Nice one

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
it was simply beautifully written

Originally posted by: ashni0905
Beautiful!

Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder 😉 Thank you so much 😳 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Aru.Divan
Nidoo.!! People did ask me to write on their thoughts after the blissful night and morning. All I could say is I don't have the guts to even write a word but you have done this so so beautifully. her thoughts along with his hug once again followed by a kiss and their entwined hands. Ufff, I blushed all over again.

Thank you for this beauty 🤗. Would love to read something on his thoughts as well 😳

I have not stopped blushing ever since I saw the morning after for the first time 😳 😳 And that is what gave way to this 😊

Thank you so much Aru 🤗 Capturing his thoughts in this state is more difficult, hence not sure of penning it down yet 😛