The night after - IshRa OS | Final Part: Page 13 [23/08] - Page 11

Originally posted by: .TIA.

I just read all 3 parts in one go n loved the story 😳

U have written both their feelings and thoughts so beautifully 😛

I loved the small little touches of how he went back to hang the towel 😳Lovely

Puttar and his thought process (swimmers) 🤣 🤣

N him still wanting to know why he scored so less ☺️ ☺️

Loved that scene..😉 ☺️

PS...I'm so glad u sent me that pm 😃

Thank u 😛

Originally posted by: momb24

Beautiful and romantic 😳 ❤️
How i wish the show followed up with scenes such as what you wrote.
Please write more when you have time 😊

Originally posted by: rutu83

that was perfect!

there was humor and love- perfect ishra

this is exactly how it would be, except for the vomiting 🤢

lovely update

thanks for the pm :)

Originally posted by: Badtameez_Dil_1

How perfectly you weaved a world and captured my heart! This is par excellence, I tell you!

I've a request Niddo ... could you pen a work on Ishu's struggle to get pregnant... Honestly, I'm dying to read something about Ishu's internal struggle and low self esteem and her discussing it with Raman!

I know that it doesn't bother Raman whether Ishu will give him their love child... cos she herself completes him but I wanna read something along those lines!

I don't think I make any sense .. hope you understand what I'm saying!

P.S. You're genuinely the finest writer I've read... so intricate!

Originally posted by: Anum_says

Awesome..

Brilliant

Originally posted by: usaonly

Beautiful update hoW Raman thinking his swimming is super fast, it was like they undo all the excuse they had weave all of that from first meet together and now they can't live without each other. Hope you will come up with new story and new concept again. Thank you for writing this story.😊

Originally posted by: sidivyapall

Thanks for the PM, Nidoo!!

omg, he actually asked about his swimmers and even referred to them as such??🤣 🤣 Very RKB ☺️ Now my mind is wandering to how a scene like that could play out on the screen, when/if Ishu is preggers for real

Nidoo, prefect end to an awesome story! I LOVE how you incorporated their earlier convos into their present situation... reminiscing about IshRa's journey makes me go weak in my knees. You write about feelings quite well and hope you continue to write other such pieces, but now what about "pheelings"... 😆 if you catch my drift ☺️ I'm waiting to read some hardcore (or softcore 🤣... sorry, one track mind is still going strong from the LU discussions, I'll stop now 😆😳) romance from you, yaar!

Originally posted by: nafnaf

That was exactly right - this is how the show should have handled it! You have done a great job - so loving and romantic and rounded the whole track so beautifully!!!!❤️

You even tackled the 2 out of 10 issue - very cutely☺️

On the show the actual night was great loved it - and the morning started off beautifully but should have been extended and the 2 out of 10 issue should have been cleared then and there!! There should have been a little bit more romance before he had to go to work and just as you have continued it the day after so it should have been done on the show!

Anyway you have now made up for it - thank you so much!!!👍🏼⭐️

Originally posted by: SA1234

Nidoo Nidoo Nidoo !!! Just perfect!!

Thanks for that much needed conversation after the deed.

Quite recently I started watching the old episodes again and this particular convo is still fresh in my mind..the hate and venom they spewed at each other...so getting to read this now is like wow!!

Needless to say you are an amazingly talented writer..!! Do write more!

Originally posted by: mayraa

Wow perfect ending niddo...loved it...👍🏼

It's ishraliscious update every essences of ishra was there in update... And of course ishra's humour...

"Just wondering, how fast are my swimmers?! You've already stared vomiting!"

This line crack me up🤣