The night after - IshRa OS | Final Part: Page 13 [23/08] - Page 12

Originally posted by: lourel24

Nice

Originally posted by: kaa1202

Hi Niddo,

How perfectly u penned the story. This last part is my fav of all. U emulated both their emotions & feelings beautifully.

P.S:-If u try to write something in future write about Ishu's struggle to get pregnant. This line has got greater potential.

With Regards-Kaarthikk.

Originally posted by: DivanIsh

as soon as i saw ur PM i was dying to read it but something or the other kept coming my way

now finally when i have read it i am speechless

it was beautiful bas

i know i have blabbered this and that in my previous comments but today i really have nothing to say

i am glad you came back to this forum warna now i realize what we all were missing

it was perfect and i am in love with it

P.S. You didn't forget to add KP/Raman's guttery touch here 😳

his swimmers 🤣 when he can think of having a baby out in 6 months then surely his swimmers are capable of such a fast action ok i will shutup here only 🤣

Originally posted by: s_kavya

Nidoo That was Amazing... Beautiful... Lovely ... 👏 👏

You girl was saing you can't write romance then what is this... What you written was so romantic... Beautiful 😳 ❤️

Really loved Raman's teasing... and thank you for continuing that performance ratings of Raman here... You really done justice to that sequence ... The redder they are.. the higher my score is bang on really loved this words of Raman 😳

And finally ishra words to each other... Raman just remember one thing my jhansi ki Rani..no matter what turns our lives take.. you 'll always find yourself wrapped with me.. catching my arms hold on to.. every single night of our lives.. and ishita just remember one thing my Ravan Kumar you 'll find me encased in your embrace forever.. my hands entwined with yours every single morning of our lives That was really Beautiful loved it ❤️

Nidoo would really love to read more of your stories... Thanks for the PM dear 🤗

Originally posted by: nish161

Hey
nidoo,
This my very first os on this forum,I jus read all the 3 parts in one go.
I am actually am not getting the apt word 2 describe this piece of work.
Brilliant and Beautiful 😃
Plss do write more and pm
me...once again awesomeawesome 😊

Originally posted by: anisha960

hey
u beautifully potrait their emotions
though emotional
I loved itt
plzz write more
u r a fab writer!!!