IshRa OS - A family is what you make it - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SA1234

Beyond beautiful Nidoo!!

Where were u all this while? Why did u take a break from the forum?
We need more stories like this.
And yeah..I welled up a little..😭

Loved the way u have penned his trail of thoughts..the name Shagun reminding him all that Ishita has give him.
Brilliantly written👏




I was hiding in the closet, soaking in all the inspiration I could, from all the lovely things written here 😊 😛

Personally, I don't think Shagun will get out of his mind so easily. Every time he sees Ishita and his kids, I like to think he's reminded of how Shagun and how he's so thankful that she's not his life partner any more 😳 Tried to bring a li'l element from the same line of thought.

Thank you so much 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update dear
U have written each and every words amazingly
The way u have portrayed Raman's thought was just awesome
And the last hug was superb
Continue ur writings dear
All the best for ur future works
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Nidoo,
I will update it once I read it probably in a week as I am on my vacation and limited net access I cannot read it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: super_cutie

Awesome update dear

U have written each and every words amazingly
The way u have portrayed Raman's thought was just awesome
And the last hug was superb
Continue ur writings dear
All the best for ur future works



A big thanks all of you 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayasundar

Hi Nidoo,

I will update it once I read it probably in a week as I am on my vacation and limited net access I cannot read it.



Pankhuri, Maya, Aru - Will be waiting for your comments 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Nidoo-




Pankhuri, Maya, Aru - Will be waiting for your comments 😊


Commented just now...our timings match 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: DivanIsh



Commented just now...our timings match😆



Missed this time 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: DivanIsh

RES 😊😊

UNRES finally...sorry for the delay
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i feel a lil shy to comment at this OS...you are a brilliant writer and i feel i am no one to comment but then at the same time i know the feeling each comment gives me on my stories so i thought i should comment...all good things need to be appreciated That is so over-whelming to hear on the first ever OS 😳 Thank you so much 🤗 But your stories are equally amazing, I read and love them all 😳 😃

the first para itself was beautiful...how we are attached to non living things around us and how much important they are...we only realize when we lose them...missing the room and the bed was just too real and your description made the scene perfect Because I think people are also attached to the physical elements of a home, it is their abode. Like how Ishita was disoriented when Raman sent her to Amma's house after the earthquake accident, she missed her room. Here he was deliberately out of her home, and sadly at that. He was bound to miss his abode.

Raman's inner turmoil...anger recalling his family's behavior with Ishita and then guilt for indirectly and unintentionally hurting the woman who was right in all ways...you were just brilliant there 👏...each emotion was depicted using the perfect words

She was his family now. His Ishita, and their kids ❤️

Ishita's pain to see him crying silently was heart wrenching to read...your description brought it out very well and i could feel the pain

finally the last para when they share the pain stole my heart...i dont have words to praise that particular section

ogether, they just crossed another milestone. They made a new family, their own little family, because a family is what you make it.❤️

This was a beautiful OS...there are so many beautiful moments that go missed on the show but we all are so lucky that writers pen down those scenes and fulfill our wishes...Ishra get beautified with such OSes

thank you so much for penning this down


My inspiration for this has come from the forum itself. Time and again I have seen people here take the existing plot and give it a much needed spin, which most of the times does not get portrayed in the show, because, we, as audience, connect with the characters at a much deeper level.

Thank you so much for the wonderful comment 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow lovely os
I loved ishra togather
to share each others pain
it was awesome

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