Originally posted by: DivanIsh
RES 😊😊
UNRES finally...sorry for the delay
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i feel a lil shy to comment at this OS...you are a brilliant writer and i feel i am no one to comment but then at the same time i know the feeling each comment gives me on my stories so i thought i should comment...all good things need to be appreciated That is so over-whelming to hear on the first ever OS 😳 Thank you so much 🤗 But your stories are equally amazing, I read and love them all 😳 😃
the first para itself was beautiful...how we are attached to non living things around us and how much important they are...we only realize when we lose them...missing the room and the bed was just too real and your description made the scene perfect Because I think people are also attached to the physical elements of a home, it is their abode. Like how Ishita was disoriented when Raman sent her to Amma's house after the earthquake accident, she missed her room. Here he was deliberately out of her home, and sadly at that. He was bound to miss his abode.
Raman's inner turmoil...anger recalling his family's behavior with Ishita and then guilt for indirectly and unintentionally hurting the woman who was right in all ways...you were just brilliant there 👏...each emotion was depicted using the perfect words
She was his family now. His Ishita, and their kids ❤️
Ishita's pain to see him crying silently was heart wrenching to read...your description brought it out very well and i could feel the pain
finally the last para when they share the pain stole my heart...i dont have words to praise that particular section
ogether, they just crossed another milestone. They made a new family, their own little family, because a family is what you make it.❤️
This was a beautiful OS...there are so many beautiful moments that go missed on the show but we all are so lucky that writers pen down those scenes and fulfill our wishes...Ishra get beautified with such OSes
thank you so much for penning this down
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