Tum Mere Khwabon Se Jaa Na Sake: FF (Created New Thread) - Page 82

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

Kyu app kya raman aur ishu ki death ke bad un ko heven mai milana chathey ho ya fir un ki love story sirf unke khawabo tak hi simith hai 😉

Originally posted by: maanvir

Thnx kanda...

So not fair...naanu maadida parishramakkella credit Jijuge...

Katti😭

Originally posted by: maanvir

Are baap re...ab to mujhe tumhare thoughts se dar lagne laga hai...tum to koi alag hi tangent me chali jati ho baba😆

Originally posted by: asma18

Hii Di 😊
Kaise ho aap. ..
main bilkul thik hoon. .
sorry late comment kiya na.
Par busy thi iss liye.
Ab update ki baat karte hai.

" Part 11 (b) : Tera Rasta Mai Chodun Naa"

superb update 👏
abhi bhi jari hai Mission
""ISHITA patao """""
Good good sahi jarahe ho.
Ishita ne khud se kiye hoye wade ko bhol
kar raman se kiye hoye wade ko ehmiyad di
aur uss ne bilkul thik kiya. .

Thnk u ishu ko samajhne keliye

Raman ka accident hote rehgaya agar
ishita nahin aati toh?
Par uss track driver ne kya naam diya ishra ko
roadside romeo Juliet!
😆

Hehe...tujhe pasand aya?
~~"Joke kehkar is haseen ishq ka mazaak na banao ae haseen"
~~"Deewana Nahi Aashiq Hoon Tera
Ishq Ke Siwa Kya Kaam Hai Mera " [/ COLOR ]

Oye hoye ye raman galib bante jaraha hai
Majnu kumar. ...par ishita hai ki maan ti nahin
Kya kaha ishita ne

[COLOR=magenta]"Is waqt tumhe apna nahi sakti. Par ek waada karti hoon aaj tumse...jis din mere dil ne mujhe kaha ki tum hi mere Raman ho us din main nahi rokungi khud ko. Khud aage badhke apna lungi tumhe. Lekin tab tak tuplease mujhe force mat karna"
Yaar jab se banda manaye jaraha hai.
Aur ladki hai ki maan ti nahin
Phir toh yahi baat hoyi. .

Thoda waqt do ishita ko...prayo ke cmnt me maine detail se is pr reply kiya hai...dekh lena...

tujhko mane k liye kiye lakhon jatan phir bhi na mani tu

Par raman ne kya jawab diya usse. .
"Phir toh mera bhi ek waada hai tumse...
Kafan odhne se pehle tumhare naam ka sehra zaroor pehnunga...
Jab tak meri rooh tumhari rooh ko na choole,
tab tak ye dil dhadakna band nahi karega"
superb lines Di. ..
Thnk u

""TUM HARE NAAM KA SEHRA ZAROOR PEHNUNGA """
Haye ..In lines mein raman ne sab kuch kehdiya. ...

Ishita k liye toh ye lines banti hai

Mera dil bhi kitna pagal hai .
.ye pyar toh tumse karta hai samne jab tum aate ho
kuch bhi. ..kehne se darr ta. .
Oo raman
Oo mere raman raman
Oo mere raman

Hehe...kya joda hai raman ko is gaane me
Par ek din toh haseen maan jaye gi. .
woh din bhi jald aaye ga.

CONGRATULATIONS
DI!!!!
TMKBSJNS k 100 pages complete hogaye .

Thnx asma

maine aap ka reply pada. ...
maine bhi kai bar notice kiya humara comment sabse
last hota hai. ...aap jitna intezar karte ho. .hum bhi
intezar karte hai aap ke reply ka. ..lamba wala reply
k liye. . Itni izzat n awaz ishita aur hume twins kehne k liye. .
thnk you :)
prayu ne sahi kaha. ...IKNMP !!!!!!!
ka kya hoa. .I know aap busy ho. .
.par time mile toh.

Haan baba...tym ka hi masla hai
LOVE YOU DI ❤️

Love you too
Thnx for PM,
Aap ko pata aage kya kahongi. .
continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: munira053

CHAAR KADAM. Im never going to forget that tale. ❤️ N I again found this ff so late like another ff of yours. But I M GLAD better late then never I found this another 'unpredictable' fiction by you 😳 maanvir di, I just want you to know that you are one of my most favorite writers of all the 100's whose frictions I have ever read! ! 👏 the SUSPENSE in your writing!!!!!! My god keeps us on the edge of our seats man!!! I still remember the suspensen moreover "confusion" between Ajnabi & Raman 😆 how we wished for them to b "one"! But never mind, you made us fall for Raman & it eventually ended on RAMAN & ISHITA ❤️ after all we are here for these two beautiful names we love unconditionally 😉 😳 ❤️ (sorry thoda zyada emotional ho gayii)
Coming back to this new ummm not so new but another unpredictable story by you, the description of Angat itself made me think like 'chalo yaha se emotional torture nhi chahiye bhayi' but then I read a comment mentioning that this ff is by the writer of ChaarKadam 😲 so I had to continue reading it 😳 and yupp I found this awesome 👍🏼

For the last update I would say Im gonna continue reading till the end for these lines by Raman "Phir toh mera bhi ek waada hai tumse...Kafan odhne se pehle tumhare naam ka sehra zaroor pehnunga...Jab tak meri rooh tumhari rooh ko na choole, tab tak ye dil dhadakna band nahi karega"

Hope that wasn't too long 😆 thankyou for reading. Waiting for updates from now on 😳

Originally posted by: maanvir

Suku as i mentioned earlier dis entire ff will be from one person's pov...so dnt expct Raman's POV...

Regarding his chngd attitude u will cm to knw soon...

Thnx fr liking it

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

Vaise just for clarification teacher ka naam kya tha😉miss suku ya fir miss s...

Originally posted by: maanvir

U followed CK?

I dnt rmmbr seeing ur presence der...

Iska matlab u hd been a silent reader???

Agar aisa hai to fine lagega...

CK pe cmnt karna padega

PS: Pyaz wale bhaiyya aapne updt ke baare me kuch bataya nahi...bas khichdi, pyaz aur investment uljhe rahe😆

Originally posted by: maanvir

Thnk u so much munira...u knw i ws wondering wer dis gal disappeared as i hvnt seen u fr a long tym nw...

I rmmbr hw u hd cmpltd reading all my write ups within a day...

I am truly honoured...

Hehe...emotional torture se bachna na mumkin hai baba meri stories me...

But I am glad u found it intrstng

I dnt mind getting long cmnts...i enjoy reading dem...the problem lies in replying to dem bcz i go totally blank wen it cms to dat...

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Di I think he was among the Ikka dukka comment karne wala

Pyaz wale bhaiyya 🤣 ...
Aww... Tum toh bure phase chotu...