Tum Mere Khwabon Se Jaa Na Sake: FF (Created New Thread) - Page 8

Heyy Manny...🤗
Blue...His favourite

Does he admire me the way I admire him?

Does he feel the way I feel for him?

As soon as the answers dawn upon me, my galloping heart stops abruptly & breaks into pieces.
My craning neck comes back to its original size catching a lump in between the throat.

Originally posted by: DivanIsh

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<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Mannu first of all welcome back🤗</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">the day you made this post with the title of the story i was just so excited...the title in itself is just so beautiful and today when i read part 1 i was amazed</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">this is going to be such a beautiful and different story i m sure</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">the way you started it was more like a mystery...to know whose words are those whom she is waiting for...the whole build up was beautiful</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">his dialogs were so poetic...i just loved them so i would say brilliant writing it was plus how you incorporated the song</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">most of my stories have songs incorporated as i just love doing that and so when i saw something similar here, i toh loved it</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">"Hum to aye the ye sochkar ke aaj us khoobsurat pari ko apne baahon me panaah denge, par wo to humse door jane ki koshish me hai"
Seene se lag jaa tu
Balkhaake meri jaana</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">"Ye gumsum rath, ye gupchup badal, ye khamosh fizaein, ye madhosh kar dene wali hawaein. Ye sama bhi hamare milan ke intezar me hai"
Gumsum sa hai
Gupchup sa hai
Khamosh hai
Madhosh hai
Ye sama haan ye sama
Kuch aur hai</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">all the lines above were just so beautiful and romantic</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">it was like a dream...sorry not like it was a dream actually...as i read ahead it came out that she was dreaming...now she is married to not him but someone else but he could not go from her thoughts, her dreams</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">i feel this is the crux of the story...just eager to know how you take it ahead</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">this was lovely and i totally loved it</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">please continue soon and do PM me</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">P.S. I read about your mother...i will say you are really lucky to have got the chance to live with your mother even after marriage...it is very rare and i know the pain of living without your mother...i know it is tough but i would just say just cherish the beautiful time you spent with her and let her go happily...ofcourse you can visit her whenever possible and phone is obviously there to keep you connected...be strong girl</font>

Hey Pankhu!

Thnx f the long & lovely cmnt...
I am trying my best to keep up with the promise of replying to evry cmnt...
Feels gud yaar...thnx fr the advice...

PS: Yeah I know dat & I consider myself lucky to hv gt got an opportunity to stay with her fr so long...its just dat she s going to hv a dfclt tym staying away frm us...dats wat kps me constantly worried...kp her in ur prayers...

I wrote a poem few days ago...want it to share with you...😳

Originally posted by: asma18

Hiii manu di 🤗
Welcome back. .
Kaise ho aap. ..akhir kar aap aahi gayi ...pata hai aap ko kitnaaa yaad kiya. ...
Waise kaisa raha family k sath vacation. .Full enjoy kiya hoga na. ...CK gang aap ka wait karrahi thi. ..
..pata hai. .aaj hi maine aap ko yaad kiya aur. .prayu ne bataya ki aap wapas aagayi hai. ..
Dil garden garden hogaya ...
Aur aap apni mamma ko miss karrahe ho na. ..koi nahin phone par baat kar lijiye. ...magar mamma k paas baith kar baat karna aur phone par baat karna dono alag baat hai. .but aap sad mat hoyi ye. .smile plzzz haan aaise hi smile karte rahiye ...

Now Coming to the story. ...
"Tum mere khawbon se jana sake "
...naam padh kar hi laga... ..ishra sath nahin hai.
.par jab first line padha. .mamma ne bola liya mujhe k kuch kam hhai bol kar. ...jab free hoyi tab network nahin tha. .
Mera kisi bhi cheez mein maan nahin lagraha tha. .

DIMAAG KE KIDHE. ..
Ne kuch sonch me na diya phir jab network aaya pray kiya ki ab ye network na jaye. ...sorry agar bakwas sun kar bore hogayi toh ...
Haan toh main kahan thi
Hhhm story padhna start kiya. ...
...pehle thoda confuse hoi k. ..kya? Kya chal raha hai. ..
Par jaise jaise padha. ...ishita kisi ka intezar karrahi hai. ..
...kis ka? ?
Par ishita ne farrari ki awaz suni. ...
Aur kisi ko blue sherwani mein dekha. ...Blue means raman ka fav colour. ...
Kyun bhag rahi hai bhai jis ka intezar kiya ussi se bhag rahi hai. .
Phir laga chalo ramsn toh aaya ishita se milne
..laga chalo ishra mil gaye ..
Par jab. ..maine ye lines padhi. .

open your eyes Ishita" I heard his husky whisper.

I took a long deep breath when I felt his arms going around me from less than an inch away

And...

I slowly opened my eyes in the arms of my sleeping husband, """""Angad Malhotra."""""
Ooho, yes sab dream tha.
Ishita ne kya kaha. ..my sleeping. .""husband"
Kya?
Ishita ki shaadi hogai hai. .??????
Woh bhi kisi aur se? ?
...aaisa kyun hoa. ..???...
😭
Ab ishra kaise milenge. .par koi nai aap hona unhe phir se sath lane wale
😊

Waise"" tum mere khawbon se jana sake ". Intresting story hai dekhna hoga ki ishra ek sath kab aur kaise honge. ...ab uss k liye aap ko. .next part jald update karna pade ga. ...
😊
Continue soon. ...

Hey Asma!

Wow itna lamba cmnt...love u re...

Aww so sweet...u r mkng me feel spcl..n I hv the smile intact...

Ohho itni interruptions to IshRa ki Love story me bhi nahi aye honge jitne tumhare is story k padhne ke beech aye...

Thnx asma...aise hi lambe cmnts dete rehna aur mai jaldi jaldi updt karti rahungi

Aha...surprise for Jiju lovers??😳😉

Originally posted by: .Harshita.

I wrote a poem few days ago...want it to share with you...😳

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<font size="4" color="#ff0099">Life is a journey that goes on...</font>

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<font size="4" color="#ff0099">Has its own pros and cons..</font>

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<font size="4" color="#ff0099">Strangers become an essential part...</font>

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<font size="4" color="#ff0099">While few loved ones leave a void in heart... </font>

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<font size="4" color="#ff0099">Some hurt you with unkind Words...</font>

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<font size="4" color="#ff0099">And few loose everything to become your World...</font>

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<font size="4" color="#ff0099">Friends notice even the Unshed Tears...</font>

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<font size="4" color="#ff0099">While others believe the mask of Fake Smile that u wear...</font>

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<font size="4" color="#ff0099">Failed Relations are worst Nightmares...</font>

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<font size="4" color="#ff0099">Lucky are the ones Blessed with Unconditional Love n Care...</font>

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<font size="4" color="#ff0099">For Unattainable Stars, we Pine...</font>

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<font size="4" color="#ff0099">The Ones who Truly love us, we Undermine...</font>

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<font size="4" color="#ff0099">Hard times become the Moral Stories...</font>

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<font size="4" color="#ff0099">Good ones add up to Sweet Memories...</font>

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<font size="4" color="#ff0099">Le douleur exquise nd unbearable pains...</font>

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<font size="4" color="#ff0099">Winter Love and Romantic Rains...</font>

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<font size="4" color="#ff0099">For Perfect Romantic Dates, stupid strives..</font>

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<font size="4" color="#ff0099">Beautiful are the simple long drives...</font>

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<font size="4" color="#ff0099">Past is foggy, present messy n future absolutely unclear...</font>

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<font size="4" color="#ff0099">But dear when the soul is ready its mate will appear...</font>

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<font size="4" color="#ff0099">When in Love-</font>

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<font size="4" color="#ff0099">Head tells you will Die...</font>

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<font size="4" color="#ff0099">Whereas Heart assures that You can Fly...</font>

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<font size="4" color="#ff0099">Hurts n joys and Truths n lies...</font>

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<font size="4" color="#ff0099">Everything depends on beholder's Eyes...</font>

<font size="5" color="#cc0066">~~~H@r$h!t@</font>

Wow...Just Wow...
So deep & soulful...
Every line touches the heart...
And with every line few faces flash in front of the eyes...
Lovely...
U r really very talented gal...
kudos to u Hersheys

Originally posted by: aarohi26

finally unres on page 1
kya surprise for Jiju?????
kya surprise hai bolo na
aapne bataya bhi nahi ki woh kaise hai.
lol...joking cheak my comment

Hey Arohi!
Will reply to ur cmnt on Pg 1 after dis...

Surprise kya hai bata diya to surprise kaise rahega?

Originally posted by: aarohi26

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finally I unres my comment. you are thinking na why I am commenting here. actually I want to comment for chap 1 on page 1 😊 I thought ki aap yahi pe pehla part dogi but u gave only intro 😭 chalo koi nahi, aapne pehla part toh de hi diya

now back to update, aap matlab aisa kyon????? jab dekho tab dono ko alag alag... 😆 but I know ki aap inko mila bhi dogi. just waiting for that day

aap ma sacchi mein songs ki library ho. ek se ek song laati ho for every part...but I liked it. "chaand chupa baadal mein " dreamy start...

Raman came in wedding. vaise shaadi kiski thi mujhe samajh mein nahi aaya but aap ho na, I know samjha dogi..

cute sa start, terrace pe romance and phusss...dream toot gaya..ishita is sleeping in her hubby dear arms????? she is married already... 😕 ab aap na jaldi se update karo as I can't wait more. I know aapke mind mein bohot kuch hai. jaldi jaldi nikaalo and update soon and yup waiting for sequel of chaar kadam

Hey Arohi!

Hehe...alag alag kyon karti hun????
Kya karun oh ladies! Mai hun adat se majboor 😉

I love singing...aur jo bhi song sunti hun uske mutabiq mere dimag me koi na koi story ban jati hai...
Dimag me keede bhare jo pade hain...

Dimag me filhaal bahut kuch hai...par climax ka ab tak kuch nahi socha...
Sochungi jaldi hi...

Originally posted by: .Harshita.

Heyy Manny...🤗

U were deeply missed...😳..

I hope u r doin good...😊..

Firstly very sorry for being late...u know right??...

I have completely stopped watching YHM...no interest in Raman, Ishita, KP, DT, IshRa or DiVan anymore...I hardly visit YHM forum now...yeet I couldn't stop myself from reading it because its written by you and u know that I have been a great fan of your works from the very start...

Coming to the story...

The Title:Tum Mere Khwabon Se Jaa Na Sake

Such a deep and meaningful title...It can be taken in either way..

A failed love story where love still exists or a beautiful one where they lived theur entire life in few moments n just living by memories now or many other ways...

Vaise bhi aap toh hamesha unexpected hi karti hai..😉😆...

As the story started, I got the feel of fresh love, innocent nd ignorant...

I thought Ishita might have a crush on Raman n probably he doesn't even know about it...

<font color="#3399ff">Blue...His favourite
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<font color="#3399ff">And the Man in Blue...My favourite!</font>

Beautiful lines...read them twice or thrice..

How do u come up with such lines??

Doesheadmire me the way I admirehim?

Doeshefeel the way I feel forhim?

True to each word...

We girls are always afraid of Rejection ...that's why we never take the initiative to confess our feelings first...we want to be 100% sure of guy's feelings before opening up our heart to him...Its because when we love, we love deeply...we completely devote ourself to our partner...trust him n depend on him too much...Its our weakness as well as our strength also...😳

<font color="#66cc66">As soon as the answers dawn upon me, my galloping heart stops abruptly & breaks into pieces.
My craning neck comes back to its original size catching a lump in between the throat.
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<font color="#66cc66">My sparkling eyes lose the glint and glisten with unshed tears</font>

A quote for this:

<font color="#ff0000">"I wish falling in love had traffic lights so that I would know if I should go for it, slow down or just stop!"</font>

<font color="#66ff66">"Aaj koi Chand se bhi zyada khoobsurat lag raha hai. Magar afsos ke woh bhi Chand ki tarah sabse chup kar baitha hai"</font>

Finally these lines calmed my senses...So its not one-sided love...he loves her too...

<font color="#ff0033">"Love is the most beautiful feeling if it happens with the right person at the right time and its the worst if you love someone who doesn't love you back, it gives the most unforgiving heartache one can ever experience."</font>

<font color="#66ff33">I slowly opened my eyes in the arms of my sleeping husband,Angad Malhotra.</font>

What is this??😲.😲..😕

Ishita already married?? Not with Raman?? Why?? What happened??

Who is this Angad Malhotra?? Is he a good guy?? Or a brutal husband?

What forced Ishita to marry him?? Misunderstandings??Soo many questions...

Please update the next part soonish..

P.S. The song "Chand chupa badal mein" - beautiful lyrics it has..😳

P.P.S. I don't think I would be able to comment properly on updates...schedule is too busy...12th class is really very tough...although I'll try to...apologies in advance..

Love you...🤗

Stay Blessed always...😊

Hey Hersheys!
Firstly let me tel u dat nobody can ever replace u...
Tere jaise quotes koi nahi laa sakta aur na hi koi un chote chote nuances notice kar sakta hai jo tu karti hai...
Isiliye mujhe tere cmnt ka intezar rehta hai...

And wat an analysis yaar...
Title se lekar Girls ki insecurities tak every word dat dat u said is apt...
Waise tujhe bada experience hai girls ki insecurities ka...Kya baat hai haan? 😉

Padhai pe axhhe se dhyan de...itne lambe cmnts nai karegi to b chalega...
Bas hi bye kar diya kar...means a lot dear...keep in touch alwys ok
lots of love...

Aur tera poem to boss dil ko chu gaya..
mai teri jitni achhe words use nahi kar sakti tareef me..I am very poor at appreciating stuff...

Originally posted by: maanvir

Hey Asma!

Wow itna lamba cmnt...love u re...

Aww so sweet...u r mkng me feel spcl..n I hv the smile intact...

Ohho itni interruptions to IshRa ki Love story me bhi nahi aye honge jitne tumhare is story k padhne ke beech aye...

Thnx asma...aise hi lambe cmnts dete rehna aur mai jaldi jaldi updt karti rahungi

Thnx di, reply k liye. ..
Maine aur prayu ne same stories padhi hai. Hum dono ek dusre ko batate hai ki humne konsi konsi stories padhi hai. ...En(Un)Tangled Love, Juda Hoke bhi Tu Mujme kahi baki hai, My Dads Sound Sleep, chaar kadam. ..par
Sab se zyada emotional story thi ... juda hoke tu mujh mein kahin baki hai. ...bahut rulaya. ..yaar. ..hum sonch bhi nahin sakte ki ishra alag honge. .
Par ye wali story. .mujhe Haq hai. .lagta hai maine nahin padhi hai. ...par aaj hi padhti hoon. ...
...waise jald next part update ki jiye. .n PM me. .. 😊