New Ishra FF: Thodi Si Bewafai Part 15 On Page 132 - Page 88

Finally got to read all the pending updates

now you wait and watch my spamming baby 😉

First Comment in short with the initials of your name
One letter for each chapter order wise
15 chapters 15 letters

P- Perfect
A- Accomplished
N- Non-artificial ( I meant relatable but letter se match karna tha so please adjust )
K- Khoobsurat
H- Hatke
U- Up to Snuff
R- Realistic
I- Impressive
- Ek letter kam tha toh adjust karna tha. For the missing letter you can take it as speechless
S- Superb, Sexy
H- Hot
U- Unblemished
K- Khoobsurat again
L- Lajawaab
A- Addictive ( Not just the part but the whole story )


Debts cleared till here

Comment on daily basis no on just like the writer has planned to give updates daily 😉😉😉

Aage badho hum tere saath hai

This is too cute, can't wait for next update

Part 13

Pehle to I was upset kyunki mai suspense khulne ke intezar me jaldi jaldi aage badte gayi...
But hua ye ke update khatam ho gaya par suspense nahi...

and I realised k is wajah se I cudnt enjoy the updt...

now dat I knw k isme suspense nahi khulega I read it again...

so dis cmnt is purely abt dis updt...

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Sabse pehle to I ws confused k raman kisse baat kar raha hai...frst I thought k he ws talking to ishita...baad me jake pata chala k ye to Toshiji se baat kar raha tha... 😆

just lyk Toshi mai b bahut zyada khush hun k raman ne realise kar liya hai k ishita usse kitna pyar karti hai aur ab he is on a mission to set things right...
Vijayi Bhava...my blessing to Raman 😉


Ishu ne b sabse pehle apni sasuma ko call kiya naa ki apni amma ko...dat says k her equation wd her saas is better than that wd her mother...dis is probably bcz Toshi is the one who hs gvn her a new lyf...the one who acted lyk her mother wenshe ws abt to begin a new journey...Ishita aftr llosing her memory ws lyk a new born baby n Toshi is her mother in that sense...so dis moment ws perfect fr me...


The star of this updt was not raman...not Ishita...But Toshiji...one can not help but fall in love wd her goodness...
I hd a gud laugh rmmbrng u telling me abt mkng Toshi a vry sweet person in dis story to make up fr her grey character in CKPC and maintain the balance...tussi sachhi mahaan ho 👏


if u gv such cute updts one aftr anthr hw cn I complain dat u r bad fr nt revealing the suspense?
n nw dat u hv promised of daily updts I am just curious to read the lovey dovey moments btwn ishra...

ishra moments in ur stories hv alwys been a treat and droolworthy...
n I knw exactly wer it cms frm...personal experience haan 😉


ye cmnt kuch zyada formal nahi ho gaya?
Yaar hindi me alag sa hi apnapan hai...hai na?

Behna maine hle b bataya hai aur ab bhi bol rahi hun I am in love with TSB and more than that I am in love with the author 🤗
KYUNKI TU DHADKAN MAI DIL


PS: The longest cmnt typed frm my phone...aur aaj phone ne b mera sath diya [:D/]

Thats nice... Raman is going to confess his love.. Loved IshRa moments in the home and in the car. Continue soon..

Originally posted by: anisha960

yaay first one to comment
what an update
full of nok jhok n little bit of romance
chalo atleast shuru toh huya
thank you fr ths
soo much

their inner state explained by u was fab
now both wants to express just waitng fr right place n time
which u r surely going to give thm !!

d more I read this story more i fell in love with it
happy to know to have regulr updates
thnqu soo much

Originally posted by: DivAnian

Whrere's the update dear?

Originally posted by: ..Mehak..

Awesome update.. Good to see a change Raman.. 😃 Loved IshRa conversation with Mummiji.. Waiting for next update..continue soon..

Originally posted by: florine_20

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Originally posted by: rk654