New Ishra FF: Thodi Si Bewafai Part 15 On Page 132 - Page 78

Originally posted by: kimty1230

I love ishus self talking it was too beautiful

Originally posted by: kimty1230

last line of raman that he will solve everything was very nice

Originally posted by: kimty1230

cont soon di

Originally posted by: kimty1230

waiting eagerly for next

Originally posted by: -RKB-

Kya Baat Hai Ekdum Khubsurat Aur Utne Hi Behatreen Tarike Se Likha Hua...
Ishita Ki Mano Dashaa Ko Bahut Hi Pyaare Dhang Se Likha Hai..
Aur Uski Shikaayatein Bhi Laazmi Hai.. Ek Toh Bibi Uper Se Bimaar Matlaab Yaadashat Kho Chuki Use Aise Koi Beena Malab Ke Gusse Se Rota Hua Chhod Ke Jata Hai Kya.
Dairy To Raman Ke Sare Gum Aur Gusse Chand Palon Me Gayab Kar Dia.
Waise Aapki Taarif Me Jitnaa Kahe Kam Aur Kuch Kahena Matlab Suraj Ko Diya Dikhane Jaisa Hai..

Originally posted by: -RKB-

Congrats Aapki Ye Story Ne Bhi 100 Pages Cross Kar Liye..

Originally posted by: traveller_girl

Really interesting and mysterious with all the past...

Very eager to know what happens next...

Awesome update...

Continue soon and thanks for the pm

Congratulations for crossing 100 pgs...

Originally posted by: shilpa2323

at last you updated and i read it 😆

wonderful update dear😉

so sad of both they r stuck in their past😭

i hope they live happy life soon😊

thanks for pm😊

Originally posted by: aarohi26

unres on page 91

Originally posted by: aarohi26

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main phir se late ho gaya yaar 😕
har baar sochta hoon ki abhi edit karoon but har baar so jata hoon. but abhi toh karke hi rahoonga 😆

chalo chodo ab, main toh kabhi sudhrungi nahi u know that so before that ki main bhatkoon, hum phir se aa jaate hai mudde par 😆

lolll haanji haanji pata hai aap nahi sudhrengi par koi ni...humen bhi achi cheezon ki aadat kahan hai 😉

hmm toh Raman bechara dukhi hai, I felt pity for bandaa, ab zyada khush mat hona soch ke ki I praised him, iski praise toh main kabhi na karoon 😡

lolll main khush hone hi wali thi ki tune meri khushi ka bubble phod diya...kyun tu mere Raman ke peeche pad gayi choti bidu

" Main aapka wait karte karte so hi gayi...abhi aankh khuli toh dekha aap hain hi nahi ander, she sat on the same sofa on which he was lying close enough that some parts of her touched him. " yeh part toh main phir se has rahi thi. 😆 yeh aadmi sachhi main kaddu hai re...

kaddu 😆 kya kya bolti hai re tu mere pyaare Raman ko...par yeh toh bata hasi kyun

nahi nahi hai yeh kaddu, he himself changed my mood from next line, meri bholi ishu par chillaya 😡 chodungi nahi main is gadhe ko

aiyo gadha bhi 😭😭😭

khair chodo is paagal ko, ullu lallu insaaan, ishu ko pareshaan kar raha hai...

yaar di song 👏 mazaa aa gaya. oh toh yeh tha aapke mind main. and trust me it was awesome.

haaye haaye mujhe sharam aa gayi apne chote bidu se taareef sunke...thank you re😳😳😳

so again flashback was heart wrenching di, haan yahan par jo bhi tha, it was sad. u portrayed numerous emotions in that some paragraphs. Raman desperation, his hurt, parents plight, ishitas pain everything was prefect di. l loved this paragraph didi.

awww thank you so much...feels so good to know ki tujhe pasand aaya...lobe you re

" he was helpless, his own dreams shattered in front his eyes and he did nothing. the day which was supposed to be memorable for him, gave him tears and pain. Because the diary caged the original Ishita he had fallen in love with. And if she was with him, all the pain was nothing but hopes and happiness. " these lines said everything di. this part was beautiful.

😳 thank you behna

I am saying this again that u are superb di. as uknow that this one is my fav story so dear di update next part jaldi but yup not on cost of your health.

aww thapathap thank you so much yaar...i love you...haan baba update jaldi dungi woh bhi khud ko bimar kiye bina...promise ji...tussi worry not

take care
love u always

love you tooo forever