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Posted: 10 years ago
Lots of emotions dipped in this update..
Husband honesty and sincerity,wife confidence to solve the problem,mr.and mrs.bhalla confusion looks,romance in phone,juta angry..

I loved the changing equation of ishra relationship..most loveable movement is when puttar share his tension,share his past se**al relationship with a lady..

I appreciate raman and ishu bcoz they are working together to slove the issue.Raman is confident about his lady love,same as ishu clearly said ,when he is sincere to share the truth,she will trust him...
Hmm first she cut the call,offcourse any wife can react the same as ishu,suddenly we not accept such things ,which hurt us more .espically we women not at all ready to share husband with another women,it is universal truth.ishu take 1 hour time for her to think about this.

JKR IS ON THE MODE,SHE MADE A PLAN WITH RAMAN..they put the tensions aside and enjoy their romance in phone.YEH WAIST KE ISSUE BAHUTH SERIOUS HOGAYA...PUTTAR DNT WANT HIS BIWI TO LOOSE WEIGHT..
as i remember ,ishu's waist is the key role in the story who attracted raman from day one.

im eagerly want to know y toshi said ishu too loose weight.yeh biwi ke plan nahi hai kya ?puttar ko tempt karne keliye aur jeldi sai uske pass aene keliye plan?

Im enjoying this PATI VARATA PATI...YEH LUST KUMAR CHANGE AS A RAM KUMAR...IS HE CHANGED THAT MUCH ,HE NOT LIKING ANY WOMEN TOUCH IN HIS BODY..

Love making of ishra is the cause of raman changes alot,as i remember ,before marriage ishra did S**,next day raman married ishu .so ishu is a GANGA ,YAMUNA,GODAVARI..WHO TAKE HIS SINS AND CHANGE HIM AS A PATI VRATHA PATI ..

Cracking joke in this update is,raman talks about sarika delivery.how can she delivery a baby with in 2days.mr.and mrs.bhalla knows the news of raman marriage..

N8 biwi ne puttar ko chavanpresh kilaya,puttar stronge hogaya to face mr and mrs.bhalla and dangerous issue of his life.

im not liking mr.bhalla second wife,i dnt knw y '
im impatient to know what ishu planned to teach a lesson to sarika and her criminal patner..

precap..hu ishra romance,mera ram kumar all ready to drink glucose from ishu lips..;-);-);-)

thanks for pm kanna :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Viji15

👏👏

I had read all the parts few days back!!!!
My darling love you way of writing!
So much twists and turns but always such a beautiful closures!
I''m in love with this story! Can't believe I took so long to give it go!
Its hot, its sensuous, its beauiful!
You have me hooked!😳
Update fast and PM me!!😃



I'm sooo happy that you liked my story 🤗
Don't appreciate me so much...
I'm gonna BLAST 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: TamannaSethi

Gayu dii

I love you..

Your stories... Ohooolala!!

Story pe comment krna mere bas ki baat nhi h...

Bas... Let me tell you...

I read all your stories and I am loving it...

Keep updating...

I will keep reading them...


Ooolalaaa 😉
Thank you Guri... [I guess. If not I'm sorry 😳 ]
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Mere pyar KO buttering samjhane waali ladki... This comment is for you ;)

Y I AM feeling k baby nahi hai Raman ka... Maybe I am wrong.
Madraasan ne CID kab join Kia??? Planning and plotting
Lust Kumar bana bheegi billi

I love the usage of emoji in message conversation

Censored part me u left so much for imagination ;)

Mr. Bhalla... Mujhe Banda theek nahi lag raha


HihihiHihihi 😆
New adjectives are coming for our ex lust Kumar 🤣
Coming to the comment.
Usually I don't like using so much emoticons in my updates..
But here I felt the need of it.. 😉
Coming to the 🤬 part...I'm also clueless... I know it's too much
😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rufana10


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raman told everything to ishita
i was wondering what will be her reaction
but she was sensible and made a plan to solve this problem 😲
their messaging was cute 😛
and their phn romance ☺️
precap 😳
update soon 😊


Her reaction kya tha... 😉
For that you'd weight for the next part and read her POV of ONE HOUR. 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: janani_divan

Lots of emotions dipped in this update..
Husband honesty and sincerity,wife confidence to solve the problem,mr.and mrs.bhalla confusion looks,romance in phone,juta angry..

I loved the changing equation of ishra relationship..most loveable movement is when puttar share his tension,share his past se**al relationship with a lady..

I appreciate raman and ishu bcoz they are working together to slove the issue.Raman is confident about his lady love,same as ishu clearly said ,when he is sincere to share the truth,she will trust him...
Hmm first she cut the call,offcourse any wife can react the same as ishu,suddenly we not accept such things ,which hurt us more .espically we women not at all ready to share husband with another women,it is universal truth.ishu take 1 hour time for her to think about this.

JKR IS ON THE MODE,SHE MADE A PLAN WITH RAMAN..they put the tensions aside and enjoy their romance in phone.YEH WAIST KE ISSUE BAHUTH SERIOUS HOGAYA...PUTTAR DNT WANT HIS BIWI TO LOOSE WEIGHT..
as i remember ,ishu's waist is the key role in the story who attracted raman from day one.

im eagerly want to know y toshi said ishu too loose weight.yeh biwi ke plan nahi hai kya ?puttar ko tempt karne keliye aur jeldi sai uske pass aene keliye plan?

Im enjoying this PATI VARATA PATI...YEH LUST KUMAR CHANGE AS A RAM KUMAR...IS HE CHANGED THAT MUCH ,HE NOT LIKING ANY WOMEN TOUCH IN HIS BODY..

Love making of ishra is the cause of raman changes alot,as i remember ,before marriage ishra did S**,next day raman married ishu .so ishu is a GANGA ,YAMUNA,GODAVARI..WHO TAKE HIS SINS AND CHANGE HIM AS A PATI VRATHA PATI ..

Cracking joke in this update is,raman talks about sarika delivery.how can she delivery a baby with in 2days.mr.and mrs.bhalla knows the news of raman marriage..

N8 biwi ne puttar ko chavanpresh kilaya,puttar stronge hogaya to face mr and mrs.bhalla and dangerous issue of his life.

im not liking mr.bhalla second wife,i dnt knw y '
im impatient to know what ishu planned to teach a lesson to sarika and her criminal patner..

precap..hu ishra romance,mera ram kumar all ready to drink glucose from ishu lips..;-);-);-)

thanks for pm kanna :-)


Again a long update 😃
Now starts the story of patni vrata Kumar 😆
You noticed the time which Ishu took to compose herself.
It surely helped her make the plan.
What happened at that time will be disclosed in the next part 😊
I'm glad you liked it.
Miss you
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Posted: 10 years ago
can u tell us plz when will u update next part...
Edited by mannat0010 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb


HihihiHihihi 😆
New adjectives are coming for our ex lust Kumar 🤣
Coming to the comment.
Usually I don't like using so much emoticons in my updates..
But here I felt the need of it.. 😉
Coming to the 🤬 part...I'm also clueless... I know it's too much
😆



Just talking about something which is common in us.
Even I don't like usage of emojis in update..
She is feeling sad toh laga dia 😭 lol
Message conversation me it does half the work
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Posted: 9 years ago
when will u update next part plz just tell us dat...
Gaya3sb thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry dears...
As I'm busy with exams...I won't be updating it this month 😔
Sorry again for the late notice 🤔

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