Abhika OS: We Are Meant To Be...!

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Abhika OS: We Are Meant To Be...!

Hello everybody I am here with one os on abhika... it's totally different ...it's like tht after misbehaviour of ashok ... mihika breakdown the marriage and decided to live her own life , she was totally hurt and shocked my this ...she wanted to live a new life so she decided to live wid her friend in rajasthan and will continue here furture studies... Anyway if you guys are interested read on and don't forget to leave your comments n suggestions ... Thank you!

jaipur [Rajasthan]

Jaipur is known as the City of Lakes. The name gives such a soothing effect. Just like the name Udaipur is really a soothing city. In this is quiet and soothing environment lives a girl who is totally depressed. Life has played a horrible game with her emotions. ... All she can think is about the time she has spent with family... All the people try to make this beautiful girl smile. But the efforts fail. The sweet simple n beautiful girl is none other than "Mihika". Mihika wakes up one day but this day seems different. Mihika is feeling light. She is feeling happy. She gets up and goes down to have breakfast. Tina "the friend of mihika " comes. She is a very sweet lady. Mihika shares a very good bond with her so she calls her

Tina: Good morning Mihika.

Mihika: Good Morning [Smiles]

Tina: What's up Mihika? My bestieis smiling today, something special [Naughtily]

Mihika: [Smiles] Aisa kuch nahi hai

Tina: Aacha. Ok then keep smiling suits you.

Tina leaves.

Mihika is thinking what's wrong. But then she forgets everything and goes off to her room... She has a balcony in her room. She is sitting in her balcony when she sees two boys entering the in their house...She has a ticklish feeling seeing them but ignores it and gets lost again. Tina comes to Mihika's room.

Tina: Mihika where are you?

Mihika: Here

Tina: Well I have a surprise for you.

Mihika: Life has already left me surprised [Sadly]

Tina: Oh ho Mihika. Stop it. I have something that will make you happy for sure.

Mihika: Oh really then tell me.

Tina: You need to close your eyes for that.

Mihika: [Excitedly closes her eyes] Oh ho. Tell me I can't wait.

Tina: Ok now open.

Mihika opens her eyes to see the surprise. She is spell bounded. Recovering from the shock she hugs Tina tightly.

Mihika: [Very Happy] Thank you .

Tina: You like it?

Mihika: Like! I love it.

[PS: Yes guys Tina gifts her a guitar]

Tina: [Smiling widely] I would love to hear you sing Mihika. Couzzz music is only way to make u happy so Don't let the sadness rule your life. Live your life for yourself, for all those who love you,

Mihika: [With moist eyes] Thanks. I will definitely live now. [Smiles]

Tina: Ok then I'll leave loads of work to do. Take care. 😊

Mihika: Yeah 😊

Tina leaves. Mihika is smiling widely. She moves to the balcony and starts talking to the sky.

Mihika hears Tina calling her "Mihika! Need you here! Please come down!" "Coming " she replies, keeps the guitar aside and moves down.

Mihika: Yes ! You called me.

Tina: Well I wanted you to meet our guests Abhisekh and Karan.

[PS: Karan n Abhisekh are real brothers. Karan may play the cupid for Abhisekh and mikhika ]

Both of them turn around to see Mihika standing there with a smile.

Tina: So, she is Mihika n Mihika they are Abhisekh and Karan. They are here for their assignment. And r my friends I'll be happy if you help them.

Mihika: Sure!

Tina: Awesome! Ok then show them around!

Mihika: Yeah sure! Come I'll show you around!

Both move out with Mihika. They come to the lawn n start chit chatting.

Karan: Hi Mihika. I am Karan. [Smiles]

Mihika: Hi Karan [Smiles]

Karan: So what is the secret behind your beautiful face?

Mihika: [Chuckles] Nice compliments from people like you make me beautiful.

Meanwhile Abhisekh was getting jealous unknowingly n was quiet too. Karan notices this and teasingly says to him.

Karan: Why are you so quiet Bhai? Kya soch rahe ho!

Abhisekh: Nothing. [Coming out of his trance]

Mihika notices him for the first time. His voice was soothing n really cute.

Karan: Something is wrong. [To himself]

[To Mihika] Ok then, I'll have to leave Mihika. I need to sort something.

Abhisekh: I am also coming.

Karan: No you stay. I can do things by myself.

[Looking at Mihika] See you around beautiful.

Mihika: [Smiles] Yeah.

Karan leaves both alone. An awkward silence prevails in the atmosphere after Karan leaves. In order to break the silence Abhisekh says

Abhisekh: Agar apko bura laga ho I am sorry on behalf of Karan.

Mihika: Its ok you need not say sorry.

Abhisekh: By the way I am Abhisekh.. [Smiles]

Mihika: [Smiles] Hi Abhisekh.

Abhisekh: So...You...here... [Hesitates]

Mihika: [Sadly] Yes I am here from past two three months...

Seeing her sad e change the topic

Abhisekh: You tell me. What are you doing studying, job or something?

Mihika: I have just finished my studies. I was perusing Mass Media, BMM.

Abhisekh: Oh wow. Me too. One similarity.

Mihika: [Smiles] So what do you want to do in BMM later on?

Abhisekh: I want to pursue Journalism.

Mihika: What a coincidence! I also wanted to do the same.

Abhisekh: Another similarity.

Mihika: So why are you here?

Abhisekh: Well our collage has given us an assignment to make reports on several places... So that is why I... I mean WE are here.in jaipur

Mihika: Oh it will be fun. I will work on something like this after so long.

Abhisekh: Thanks and Sorry.

Mihika: [Confused] For what?

Abhisekh: Thanks for helping us and Sorry because I'll be irritating you a lot throughout this project. [Chuckles]

Mihika: Oh so Sorry in advance, very smart. [Chuckles]

Abhisekh: [Winks] I am smart and I know it dear.

Mihika: [Feels ticklish] Ok then I'll meet you. I got to do some work.

Abhisekh: See you around. [Smiles]

Mihika leaves. Abhisekh moves to his room carrying a wide smile. Karan smirks seeing him and says

Karan: [Naughtily] Kya bhai...! Pat gayi?

Abhisekh: Chup kar. Or kya tu uske saath flirt kar raha tha!

Karan: Oh ho first meet ke baad itni jealousy. Not bad! Vese bhi "Jealousy is the first sign of Love". [Winks]

Abhisekh: Chup kar. We are not even friends.

Karan: Usme kya hai voh toh ho hi jaoge aakhir "Pyaar Dosti Hai."

Abhisekh: Hey bhagwan yeh ladka.

Karan goes on teasing Abhisekh and time passes. It's dinner time.

Mihika and Tina are preparing for the dinner.

Tina: Call everyone Mihika. Dinner is ready.

Mihika: Yeah I'll be back 😊

Mihika goes toabhisekh and karan room.

The door is open a little and loud laughter can be heard. She peeps in to see Karan teasing Abhisekh and Abhisekh making cute faces. Both of them were spending quality time with each other. Mihika's eye moistened with the scene in front of her. She was missing her family. She wipes her tears and knocks lightly.

Karan: What's up beautiful!

Mihika: Dinner is ready. Everyone is waiting. Let's have food.

Karan: Of course aapne bulaya or hum chale aaye. [Mihika fakes a smile and leaves]

Abhisekh's mind is in thinking process. He notices sadness in Mihika's eyes n becomes restless to know the reason behind it. His thought process is broken by Karan.

Karan: Itna kya soch rahe ho Bhai! Chalo I am hungry.

Both move down. Abhisekh comes and sits opposite to Mihika. He sees her sad face n becomes sad unknowingly. Karan breaks the silence by cracking jokes and making everyone laugh. Dinner gets over and everyone moves to their respective rooms. Abhisekh is restlessly moving here and there in his room. Karan had enough of it and he asked him

Karan: What's up Bhai! Why are you restless?

Abhisekh: Didn't you notice Mihika today? She was sad and god knows why I am getting affected!

Karan: [Smiles] Bhai! You like her why can't you accept it!

Abhisekh: How is that possible? I just met her today! [Irritated]

Karan: [Sings teasing Abhisekh] Pehli nazar me kaisa jaadu kar dia! Tera ban baitha hai mera jiya!

Abhisekh: Stop it Karan! [Blushes lightly noticed by Karan]

Karan: Shakal dekho apni! Jaao baat karo usse I am sure you will feel better.

Abhisekh: [Hugs Karan] Thanks Bhai!

Karan: Anytime

Abhisekh moves to Mihika's room, but she is not there.

Mihika is sitting on the terrace with her new guitar in her hand. She is trying to get the chords...She is playing with stings in order to figure out the correct chords. Here Abhisekh is searching for Mihika and comes across Tina. She asks him

Tina: What's up Abhisekh? You need something?

Abhisekh: I was looking for Mihika [Tina suspicious]

Tina: Mihika! At this time! May I know why?

Abhisekh: [Makes an excuse] I wanted to talk about our project. Ya the project!

Tina: [Convinced] She must be in her room then.

Abhisekh: No she's not there!

Tina: Oh that means she'll be at her Wanna-Be-Alone place.

Abhisekh: [Confused] Huh! I didn't get you!

Tina: I mean she'll be at the terrace.

Abhisekh: [Happily] Oh! Thank you! I'll catch you later.

Tina: Good Night!

Tina walks away to her room whereas Abhisekh walks to the terrace. ...Her back is facing him.

Here Mihika has figured out the chords and is singing her favorite song with moist eyes.

Abhisekh: You have a beautiful voice Mihika.

Mihika: Thanks.

Abhisekh:. Well lovely guitar!

Mihika: Got it today morning as a gift.

Abhisekh: Wow! Lucky girl!

Mihika: [Becomes sad] Not really.

Abhisekh: Hey come on don't say that! You are blessed with a beautiful voice and face. You have such loving people around you. What else do you need?

Mihika: [Starts breaking]no one

Abhisekh: Listen Mihika... [Mihika cuts him]

Mihika: Abhisekh you won't understand let it be.

Abhisekh: Ya right! Come on you can trust me with this. Pour out your heart to me. I am sure you'll feel better.

Mihika: [Stubbornly] I don't like telling my secrets to anyone!

Abhisekh: Like seriously!

Mihika: You have a problem. [Shouts]

Abhisekh: Look I am sorry!

Mihika: [Calms down] I think you should sleep its quite late.

Abhisekh: Remember one thing Mihika, Sab ko sab kuch nahi milta, Par kuch - kuch sab ko milta hai! Good Night, sweet dreams and take care

Mihika: Good Night!

Abhisekh moves to his room and sees Karan fast asleep! He too drifts off to sleep with Mihika on his mind. Here Mihika remembers his words "Sab ko sab kuch nahi milta, Par kuch - kuch sab ko milta hai!" She smiles remembering him say "Good Night!" She too moves to her room and drifts off and the night passes.

Next Day!

Early morning 6 am!

Mihika knocks atkaran and abhisekh 's door saying "Get up guys!" Abhisekh jerks up hearing her voice. He moves to the door and opens it to see Mihika standing there wearing a beautiful white anarkali. Mihika wishes Abhisekh with the cutest smile "Good Morning Abhisekh!" "Good Morning " replies Abhisekh. Mihika asks him to come down with Karan for the breakfast and after that they will start working on the project. Saying this she leaves. Abhisekh goes to Karan and wakes him up. Both move down to have breakfast.

At the Dining Table

Both come and settle down. Karan wishes Tina. He then wishes Mihika by saying "Good Morning beautiful" Mihika replies "Good Morning Karan" Abhisekh gets jealous. ..

Everyone carries on with the breakfast. Tina asks Abhisekh

Tina: Ho gayi baat...!

Abhisekh: Han...!!

Tina: [To Mihika] Ho gayi Abhisekh se baat!

Mihika: Kis bare main?

Tina: AAbhisekh kal voh tujhse milne aya tha na raat ko project ke liye baat karne!

Abhisekh starts coughing badly n Karan starts laughing. Mihika looks at him and smiles. Abhisekh calms down and desperately waits for Mihika's reply!

Mihika: Han ! Ho gayi thi...! [Smiles at Abhisekh and he too smiles]

Karan: [Slowly to Abhisekh] Bhai...!! Hasi toh phasii...!! [Teasingly]

Abhisekh: Chup kar!

Breakfast over!

They are working on the project. They are totally engrossed in work. Abhisekh's mind is not in working condition. He is staring at Mihika shamelessly.

After 4 Days

The days pass on. They are working really hard on the project. Mihika is helping them and they are preparing a power point presentation. All the work is estimated to finish in 1 day. Abhisekh is still confused with the building emotions inside him. Mihika is too feeling something but she is constantly ignoring the feeling... Due to the past She is trying hard to suppress the building emotions and feelings inside her. Abhisekh is also doing the same. The work is almost done. Abhisekh will be leaving in two days. Mihika is really upset with the fact that after two days she will return back to her boring normal life. Mihika is lost in thoughts when Tina comes to her room.

Tina: Kya baat hai Mihika? I have been noticing you what's wrong? Sab theek hai na?

Mihika: Han ! Sab theek hai! tuze aisa kyun laga?

Tina: Bhale hi hum kuch mahine pehle mile hai Mihika, yeh baat tu bhi jaante hai ke tu mujhse kuch nahi chupa sakti. Toh chup chap mujhe bata de kya baat hai.

Mihika: I am confused!

Tina: Abhisekh ko leke!

Mihika: [Shocked] Aapko kaise pata!

Tina: Sab pata hai mujhe!

Mihika: Par mujhe yeh samjh nahi aa raha ke Do I like him?

Tina: Yeh toh tujhe sochna hai. By the way I can help you.

Mihika: Kaise?

Tina: Apna all-time favourite one word.

Mihika: Does it work?

Tina: Of course it does. Vese bhi main suna hai ke is game to khelte-khelte dil ki baat zubaan par aa jaati hai...!

Mihika: Apne fir Kuch- Kuch Hota Hai dekhi Di!

Tina: Voh chod! Chal start karte hai!

Before they could start ...karan and abhisekh appear in the scene saying

Karan: Kya chal raha hai?

Tina: Main or Mihika game khel rahe hain!

Karan: Wow! Konsa? Hum bhi khelenge!

Tina: One word!

Karan: Vahi jise khelte-khelte dil ki baat zubaan par aa jaati hai...!

Tina: [To Mihika] Dekha!

[To Karan] Han vahi!

Karan: Chalo bhai hum bhi khelte hain!

Abhisekh: Nahi tum khelo.

Tina: Come on yaar. Don't be a spoilt sport.

Abhisekh: Ok!

Everybody settles down in a small circle.

[Seating] Mihika is sitting next to Tina, then near Mihika Karan is seated and then Abhisekh. Abhika

are sitting opposite to each other.

Tina: So I start by the word World

Mihika: Music

Karan: Soothing

Abhisekh: Voice

Tina: Mihika

Mihika: Confused

Karan: Face

Abhisekh: Beautiful

Tina: Garden

Mihika: Flowers

Karan: Roses

Abhisekh: Red

Tina: Love

Mihika: Unconditional

Karan: Care

Abhisekh: Mihika [Mihika shocked n tina smirk]

Tina: Sweetheart

Mihika: Tina

Karan: Cute

Abhisekh: Me [Everybody chuckles]

Tina: Handsome

Mihika: Karan [Abhisekh jealous n Karan Happy]

Karan: Funny

Abhisehk: Conversation

Tina: Late night

Mihika: Terrace

Karan: Interesting

Abhisekh: Girls

Tina: Soft hearted

Mihika: Abhisekh

Karan: phir Bhai. Ok Gentleman

Abhisekh: Black

Tina: Suit

Mihika: White

Karan: Pure

Abhisekh: Heart

Tina: clean

Mihika: Room

Karan: Balcony

Abhisekh: Long

Tina: Lawn

Mihika: First meet

Karan: Memorable

Abhisekh: Flirt

Tina: Abhisekh

Mihika: [Very quickly without thinking] Love

Abhisekh is totally shocked ...Mihika is blushing and trying to accept what she just confessed. Tina and Karan leave

Abhisekh: You love me? [Mihika does not respond] Hey I want to know!

Mihika: Nahi... Voh bas... Aise hi... [Stammering]

Abhisekh: Ok!

He leaves. As soon he moves out he carries a wide smile on his face. He walks to his room n is welcomed by a naughtily smirking Karan.

Karan: [Naughtily] Kya Bhai! Hug kiya ya...

Abhisekh: Abey usne kuch nahi bola toh main aa gay. Ab mujhe kuch karna hai.

Karan: Hawww Gandi baat gandi, gandi, gandi baat

Abhisekh: Abey zyada mat soch main propose karne ke bare me soch raha hoon!

Karan: Oh toh finally you accepted!

Abhisekh: Yeah I did!

Karan: Chalo bohot kaam hai!

Abhisekh: But Mihika ko ignore karna hai!

Karan: Mere saath reh kar smart ho rahe ho bhai!

Abhisekh: Han bhai Han!

Karan and abhisekh move to organize the proposal!

The preparations are in full swing. Karan is following all the orders given by Abhisekh. Whereas Abhisekh is panicking. He is going on and on and on.

Karan shouts "BAS!" This startles Abhisekh.

Abhisekh: Kya hua? Tujhe pata bhi hai kitna kaam bacha hai!

Karan: Bhai control karo! Itna kaam toh me apne proposal pe bhi na karu. Thoda sa rehem [Mercy] karo is bacche par.

Abhisekh: Karan yaar mujhe daar laga raha hai.

Karan: Bhai! Propose karna hai Jung thodi ladni hai jo daar lag raha hai.

Abhisekh: Abey yeh toh Jung ladne se bhi zyada difficult hai.

Karan: Bhai aap jaao taiyaariyan me karta hoon. Chill karo aap.

Abhisekh; nahi... [Karan interrupts]

Karan: Bhai puch nahi raha hoon bata raha hoon. GO!

Abhisekh: Okay!

Abhisekh leaves. Karan carries on with the decoration.

After finishing the decorations Karan moves to his room. Here Abhisekh is ready and is extremely tensed. Karan enters. Abhisekh storms him with questions.

Abhisekh: Sab theek se ho gaya? Kuch problem toh nahi hai na! Bolna chup kyun hai!

Karan: Bolne toh do!

Abhisekh: Oh sorry! Bol!

Karan: Sab kaam finish. Apko bas vahan jana hai aur apka plan execute karna hai.

Abhisekh: Konsa plan!

Karan: Bhai!

Abhisekh: Oh okay voh plan! [Nervously]

Karan: Bhai nervous mat ho! I know you can do it!

Abhisekh: Thanks bhai! Tu nahi hota toh pata nahi mera kya hota.

Karan: Me toh hoon hi best [Pulling up his collar]

Abhisekh: Bas taarif karwalo bhai sahib se.

Karan: Ab jaao bhai and jaldi se beautiful ko propose karke meri Bhabhi banao [Winks]

Abhisekh: Han jaa raha hoon. Tu jaldi use bhej neeche.

Karan: Yes boss!

Both move to execute their plan.

Abhisekh moves to the garden whereas Karan runs to Mihika's room panting for air. Tina is also present there.

Karan: Mihika! Mihika! Mihika!

Mihika: [Panicking] Han Karan kya hua?

Karan: Mihika voh... Bhai...

Mihika: [Panicking] Kya hua Abhisekh ko!

Karan: Bhai voh... garden me...

Before Karan could continue Mihika runs to the garden. Here karan and tina give a Hi-5 to each other seeing their plan's success. Mihika runs to the garden and is spell bounded to see the lights n decoration all around. White Lilies and purple orchids are covering the canopy. There is a table for two and a candle in the centre. White lights are giving more beauty to the dull evening. Cold breeze and soothing atmosphere is adding more to the beauty. Mihika remembers Karan's words and she panics and calls out "Abhisekh!" loudly. She hears strumming of the guitar. She is dumbfounded to see a handsome Abhisekh standing in front of him. He is looking stunning. He was singing a song for her teri jhuki nazar'...

As soon as the music ends he opens his eyes and looks at Mihika. Her eyes are full with fresh tears. He moves forward and wipes off the tears from her face. She closes her eyes feeling the blissful moment. He is happy to see the effect he has on her. He removes her hand and she opens her eyes. Mihika tries to break the silence but Abhisekh interrupts her saying

Abhisekh: Aaj me bolunga and tum suno! [Mihika's quiet] Pata hai jab tumhe pehli baar dekha tha na tab hi laga tha tum hi ho meri Ms. Perfect. Karan tumse flirt karta tha toh usse maarne ki iccha hoti thi. ..Pata nahi kya ho raha tha mujhe. Tumhari happiness, sadness, cheerfulness, innocence, cuteness mujhe bohot affect karti hai. Jab tumhe khush dekhta hoon toh khud khush ho jaata hoon. Jab tum sad hoti ho toh lagta hai ke aisa kya karu ke tumhare face ek smile aa jaye. Agar is modification ko pyaar kehte hain toh han me tumse bohot, bohot, bohot PYAAR karta hoon. I LOVE YOU. I know yeh thoda jaldi hai par [He goes down on his knees holding out a ring and saying] Will you be my girlfriend and future wife? I promise to love you forever.. I am not perfect but I want you to be with me till my last breath. I won't be able to live a second without you Mihika! Will you marry me?

Mihika is just so happy, amazed, surprised, and emotional at the moment. Tears are flowing from her eyes. She does not know how to respond to him. Abhisekh breaks her thought process by saying

Abhisekh: Jaldi karo meri knees dukh rahi hai!

Mihika nods her head with teary eyes. Abhisekh happily slides the ring in her finger and seals it with a kiss. He pulls her closer by her waist and wipes the tears saying

Abhisekh: Ab tumhari Aankhon me sirf khushi hogi aansu nahi.

Mihika: [Whispers lightly] Thank you!

Abhisekh: [Surprisingly] Kyun?

Mihika: Meri life koi itna special banne ke liye. I am sure mujhe aaj tak itna special kabhi feel nahi hua hoga kabhi bhi nahi.

Abhisekh: Thanks to mujhe tumhe kehna chahiye meri life me aane ke liye.

Mihika: Kitna strange hai na Abhisekh aap first time Jaipur aaye hain or apko mujhse pyaar ho gaya.

Abhisekh: You know why! [Mihika moves her head indicating a NO]

He leans in brushing his lips on her ear. Mihika shudders with the proximity and closes her eyes. Abhisekh very huskily says brushing his lips on her ear "Because We Are Meant To Be." He kisses her ear and pulls her for a bone crushing hug. Both hug each other passionately. Abhisekh breaks the hug and asks her,

Abhisekh: Vese tumne mujhe nahi kaha!

Mihika: [Surprisingly] Kya?

Abhisekh: [Naughtily] Vohi three magical words [Mihika Blushes] Blush baad me karna pehle kaho!

Mihika: [Very lovingly] I LOVE YOU Abhisekh!

Abhisekh: [Very happily] I love you too

Karan: Kya bhai! All set huh! [Naughtily]

Abhisekh: [Angrily] Abey Saale! Thoda late nahi aa sakta tha moment kharab kar dia. [Mihika blushes at the statement]

Karan: [Dramatically] Dekhlo zamane walo kalyug hai kalyug! Apne khoon wale bhai ko bhul gaye log nahiii.

Abhisekh: Chup be nautanki!

Tina: [Comes] Kyon sataa rahe ho Karan inhe.

Karan: Me sataa raha hoon!

Tina: [Goes to Mihika] I am so happy for you!

Mihika: [Teary eyes] Thanks

Abhisekh: [To Karan] Thanks Bhai!

Karan: [Breaking the hug] Thanks se kaam nahi chalega mujhe toh party chaiye and yeh guarantee bhi ke ap mere proposal ke time pe utna hi kaam karoge jitna aaj mene kiya hai.

Abhisekh: Han bhai pakka!

Tina: Achaa ab tum dono time spend karo hum chalte hai! [To Karan] Chalo me tumhe khaana khilati hoon. Bohot kaam kiya hai na tumne.

Karan: Han please. [Slowly to Abhisekh] All the best.

They both leave l

Mihika is smiling looking at the retreating figure of karan and tina. She feels an intense gaze on herself. She turns towards Abhisekh and sees him staring at her intently. He pulls her closer

Abhisekh: [Naughtily] Chalo continue karte hain.

Mihika: [Blushes] Stop it Abhisekh! Aap bohot naughty hote jaa rahe ho!

Abhisekh: Everything is fair in love and war meri Jaan!

He then puts his rough lips on her rosy ones. They kiss each other passionately. A new love story starts. It's not the end but

BEGINNING of a Never Ending LOVE STORY.

Ok so this is it. I hope I am up to the mark this time.. Please leave your feedbacks because they are what inspire me to write more and more stuff. I have a very small request do mention the portions you like in this OS. I'll be glad to read them.

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Hi Prachi,
Beautiful OS.

I liked the way the game was played.
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Awww.. Such a cute story.. I lyk the whole idea. Vry nice. Loved it..
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Originally posted by: mayasundar

Hi Prachi,

Beautiful OS.

I liked the way the game was played.





Thank u so much and I am glad u like as its my first attempt on this forum...😃
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Originally posted by: Prachi...20





Thank u so much and I am glad u like as its my first attempt on this forum...😃






And ya tht game is really awesome... I wrote it wen I didn't got something interesting for mihika feelings to open up...
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Originally posted by: barbie524

Awww.. Such a cute story.. I lyk the whole idea. Vry nice. Loved it..





Thanks... 😊
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Less comments and not much likes... Story aachi nahi thi kya... Sry if it was not nice as it was not nice as it was my first attempt... šŸ¤”
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8

This OS is so sweet n romantic.Mihika left to Jaipur 2 be away from her terrible past.There she met Abhishek.4 a change he isnt ACP here.Loved their blooming friendship.The game n realization of luv,then the confession scene...so romantic.

Sab ko sab kuch nahi milta, Par kuch - kuch sab ko milta hai!

Loved this part a lot.

This was so funny.

Karan: [Naughtily] Kya Bhai! Hug kiya ya...

Abhisekh: Abey usne kuch nahi bola toh main aa gay. Ab mujhe kuch karna hai.

Karan: Hawww Gandi baat gandi, gandi, gandi baat

Abhisekh: Abey zyada mat soch main propose karne ke bare me soch raha hoon!

Karan n Tina r ur imaginary characters.But I loved them.Esp Karan.

Plz write a sequel to this making mihika sharing her past with Abhishek n Abhi uniting her with her family.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

This OS is so sweet n romantic.Mihika left to Jaipur 2 be away from her terrible past.There she met Abhishek.4 a change he isnt ACP here.Loved their blooming friendship.The game n realization of luv,then the confession scene...so romantic.

Sab ko sab kuch nahi milta, Par kuch - kuch sab ko milta hai!

Loved this part a lot.

This was so funny.

Karan: [Naughtily] Kya Bhai! Hug kiya ya...

Abhisekh: Abey usne kuch nahi bola toh main aa gay. Ab mujhe kuch karna hai.

Karan: Hawww Gandi baat gandi, gandi, gandi baat

Abhisekh: Abey zyada mat soch main propose karne ke bare me soch raha hoon!

Karan n Tina r ur imaginary characters.But I loved them.Esp Karan.

Plz write a sequel to this making mihika sharing her past with Abhishek n Abhi uniting her with her family.




thank u...šŸ˜ƒšŸ¤—and ya abhisekh waas different...i will make to fulfill ur wish to write next ...bt thode tym baad...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10

thank u...😃

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