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Posted: 10 years ago
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AUTHOR'S NOTE-I don't know I have discussed earlier or not but the story is happening in the mid of December so if I ever wrote anything contradictory to that kindly pardon me.this story starts from 15 of December.u must be surprised why I am giving this detail,just because I have to use the occasions fall in that month.

PART 5


NEXT MORNING

Raman knocked the door of ishita's flat hesitatingly.he was confused at his own silliness.A person who wakes up at 8o'clock or sometimes even later ,today wakes up at 5.30 am sharp and within half an hour he is standing outside her flat looking ever charming as ever.from past ten minutes he is debating with himself that whether it is a good idea to ring the bell this early.he was confused that why he is behaving like a teenage boy who recently fallen for a cute girl.it was a new found feeling for him.he has never felt anything for any girl forget this kind of special feeling.he always feel goosebumps whenever she is near him.there was an urge to hold her hand and never let go.within a span of four-five days she has occupied a large part of his heart.it was difficult for him to understand how can anybody become such an integral part of his life in such a small time.but he was enjoying this new found feeling to the core .he wants himself to engross himself in her fragrance.with this new excitement he finally press the bell.

Ishita opened the door.he was mesmerized by her looks.she was looking very fresh just like a fresh droplets of rain fallen on flowers.may be she has just taken bath,she was wearing her knee length bathrobe and her hairs was wrapped in a towel.


Raman -what took u so long to open the door?

Ishita -keep a finger silencing him-ssshhh and signal him to come in.

He simply followed her and wonders what's going on.

After sometime he hears a sweet voice,


Manbasiya oh saawre
Manrasiya oh saawre
Pavan prabhasi jag ko jagaati bhaware bhi karte hai gunjan
Pankh pasare ude pakheru sindoori sindoori aangan
In Charon Mein phool chadane aayi Tera radha Mohan

Raman couldn't resist the sweet voice and simply walked towards the room from where the voice is coming.the view infront of his view make him loose his heart a little more to that girl who is totally in new avatar today.she was singing infront of lord Krishna .she continued

Main bawariya shudh budh bhooli
Mujhko lagi Teri lagan
Tere dware saanjh sakhre tere naam jape mera naam
In Charon Mein phool chadane aayi Teri radha Mohan

He was looking at her as he is looking at a different ishita.

She come towards him and stands infront of him so that he can take the blessing from the diya but he was looking at her paranoid to the happening around him.she smiled and offer the blessing herself.
(author note-u can imagine the scene when ishita give Raman the blessing when he was going for Ashok office for the first time)

She smiled and said-sir will u please wait outside.I have to change.

But hewas not listening to anything.she held his wrist and take him out of her room.he realized what he was doing and he taps his head for his stupidity.

She came after a while wearing a blue shirt with a blue denim.her hairs still tied in the towel.

Ishita -sorry sir

Raman-kaun ho tum?(who r u )

Ishita -aapki yaaddasht chali gayi hai kya ,yeh kaisi baatein kar rahe hai(have u lost ur memory,what ur r talking about)

Raman -main nahi jaanta tumhe kaun ho tum?kabhi jharno si chanchal kabhi nadi si shaant.aisa lag raha hoon kisi nayi ishita se mil raha hoon.(I couldn't recognize u who r u?sometime violent like waterfall sometimes silent as river)

Ishita -wow sir u have become poet for me.

Raman smiled and signals towards her hairs.she touched it and realised that towel is still on her head.

Ishita -oh shit I forget

She bent down and open her hairs and her hairs falls on his face.he instantly closed his eyes,she moved near him and started blowing air in his eyes to soothe his eyes.

He was enjoying her proximity.

She said distancing herself -its done sir

Raman -tumne bataya nahi kaun si asli ishita hai woh chulbuli college wali ya yeh shaant gharwali(u didn't answer me who is real ishita that naughty girl or this simple one)

Ishita came near him and wounded her arms around his neck and answered -aapko kaun pasand hai(whom do u like more)

Raman smiled and answered -both

Ishita -dono hi milegi(u will get both only)


Ishita -so tell me what u brought for breakfast,let me see

Raman -actually nothing .nothing was available this early.its so cold outside but ur house is warm.

Ishita -that because I am so hot .she said giggling.

Raman -by the way ur house is beautiful.its small but decorated beautifully

Ishita -I am very good at doing interiors.try me.

Raman -I will

Ishita -now tell me what we will eat.

Raman -I will cook for u

Ishita -amazing u told me to cook for u because u don't know how to cook and now u will cook for us.r u kidding me.

Raman -no I am serious I can cook bread omelette.

Ishita -bad option I am a pure veg.

Raman -r u serious?

Ishita -yup.i am a tamilian Brahmin.don't u remember I am an iyer.

Raman -sorry I don't remember.come on lets go and cook something else.


They go to the kitchen.he saw bread and butter .

Raman -I will cook bread and butter

Ishita -u don't have to cook bread and butter u simply has to apply butter on bread

Raman -but I will make tea also naa.he said with a puppy face.

Ishita smiled.

Raman-so u live with whom.

Ishita -I live alone.

Raman -where r ur parents?he asked looking tense.

Ishita -get a hold on urself.my parents are in Chennai.in fact my dad is in ministry.he is a very powerful man.i am the daughter of a bureaucrat.dad wants me to join politics but I was stubborn to study here.my mom graduated from this college and she fell in love with my dad here only.i also feel I will meet my soul mate here only.she said looking into his eyes.they share an eye lock.

Raman -so I must scared of u.he said laughing.Ishita joined him

Raman-jokes apart aren't u scared of me.
Ishita -why r u a criminal?

Raman -no but I am a man and generally girls afraid of strangers but u r very comfortable with me.

Ishita -don't know why but u don't seem stranger to me.i have been living alone for two and half years I have seen many boys but I have never been so comfortable with anyone except Rahul and Mihir my best friends.but I felt safe with u and u know what I love

He look at her with shocked eyes-u love whom?

Ishita -I love this new feeling.

He smiled and shook his head

Soon they finish their breakfast and go to the college together.


That's all for now.i hope some queries has been answered and for rest ,wait for next update
Author note-usa only asked for Raman 's pov.this is a glimpse of his feelings towards Ishita
Janani divan asked why her parents doesn't question her hope its clear dear.
Waiting for ur lovely comments
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
Hey superb update yar...u are turning the story plot brilliantly... Loved this ishu so confident and forward about her love...awesome this story will become more interesting in further updates...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey nice update...
can you give the mp3 link of the bhajan of lord krishna used in the update please
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Divfan

Hey superb update yar...u are turning the story plot brilliantly... Loved this ishu so confident and forward about her love...awesome this story will become more interesting in further updates...





Thanks for liking dear
Yes ishu is a bold girl
Will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
That was beautiful part...ishra were so cute...I liked ishu pooja scene...he was mesmerised. Ishita is daughter of influential man...hope he doesn't harm Raman

Loved it...Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Angels_Ring

Hey nice update...

can you give the mp3 link of the bhajan of lord krishna used in the update please






Thanks for liking dear
Here is the link
http://www.mymp3song.com/files/download/id/13085

Hope it helps
This song is from Salman's movie tere naam
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
Nice update raman's reaction by seeing ishita are jst awesome... Ishita's dad is influential??? Wat abt raman's family??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautifully written...loved ishita's new avtar...it's nice that ishita is an independent girl..continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I loved this fresh feeling of ishra..your words are so common but im feel the beauty of this update..

Raman at early morning infront of ishu flat,puttar nahi soyi...raat bar hai raat baar..this song playing in my mind right now.

Raman met new ishu ,kitna roop dikhayege yeh ladiki...time ane par sab roop dikha dengi.its a bundle of package to raman.:-)

He always getting shocks by her new revelation.;-)her new versions killing puttar..

o ishu dad works in ministry,her parents are love birds.beti following foot steps of her parents.

Im enjoying this wonderful feeling ,when im reading this story.its very near to my heart..my favourite person is ishu in this story.she is so honest,loving,chabi,caring etc .she is comfortable with raman,she is sharing every bit of her feeling to him..

Ayyo she almost going to confess her love...i want raman to express his feelings.bcoz ishu almost give hints to raman.

Deewana deewani...i love them..;-);-)

Yaar this both are going college together,no one doubting them?rumours not spread at in college?

as ishu said,her father is powerful.mama ke impress karne keliye puttar bahuth kuch karna padiga..

thanks for pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update
raman was mesmerized by ishita's beauty...he was enjoying his new found feelings
for her 😳 so he is in love with her 😳 hope he will realize it soon
i like this straight forward and care free ishita very much...she is really sweet 😊
ishita's father is a powerful person...what about raman's family
thanks for pm
update it soon

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