ISHRA ' FF ' DOOSRA JANAAM' UPDT PART 15 pg 108 oct 28 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: rk654

very beautiful update...

thanx for the pm




thx a lot for like it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: hana_y

wow nice hansa both got some thing ishu
dream raman paint wow n ashok is her bro in previous live wow but who is that guy hope it not parmeet i love the way girls welcome raman to get his attention too n how he discrab his pari too n ishu who has all this nice love the first part dear do cont too



thank you so much hana fir ypur sweet comment dear im glad you like it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: rufana10


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nice update
interesting concept
thank u for pm😊




thx a lot dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thx a lot dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Nice update
I am excited for their meet



thx a lot dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aarohi26

this is a completely new concept di. the story is little confusing but I know my confusion will be cleared with progress of story but ya you are executing this story very beautifully. thanks for pm. will wait for next part




thank you so much to tead my ff im glad you like it n comment too im glad
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: ..TeriDeewani..

Hey Hansa di...!!![BReincarnation in stories really fascinates me...plzz updt soon luved the prologue n the 1st part
Do PM me whenevr u updt the next part




thxva lot to read my ff comment too im glad you want to read my ff
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ishra_Sona

Really interesting...



thankvuoh so much
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very sweet please next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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HI SORRY AGAIN FOR LATE UPDT THX FOR SUPPORT TOO.

SORRY FOR MISTAKES OR WRONG SPELLING TOO. HERE WE GO

AS I SAID ISHU WILL NOT SEE THE GIRL FACE IN THE DREAM NOR EVEN FOR THE BOY OK.


DOOSRA JANAAM


PART 2


PRESENT LIFE


Next day morning in delhi

Ishita write in her diary : DEAR DIARY AS YOU KNOW ABOUT MY DREAM, YEST I SAW IT AGAIN AFTER ALMOST ONE YEAR I DID NOT GOT IT BUT YEST I SAW EVERY THING CLEAR EXCEPT THE GIRL WHOM I COULD NOT SEE IT CLEARLY , THE TALL MAN IS THE BRO OF THAT 15 YEARS OLD GIRL, HE CALL HER PARI, N HIS IS ASHOK THEY LOOK HAPPY TOO AFTER SEEING IT I FELT RESTLESS AS IT STOP IN A FEAR PLACE I DONT KNOW WHEN I WILL SEE THE DREAM AGAIN N WHY ME ONLY WHO GOT SUCH A DREAM TOO , AMMA APPA WILL GET WORRIED AGAIN AS THEY THOUGHT I DONT GET THAT DREAM AGAIN, THAT WHY I SHARE IT WITH YOU AS ONLY YOU N RINKY WHO WILL KNOW ABOUT IT NOT AMMA APPA , BYE FOR TODAY. FROM ISHITA


In bhopal

Raman call mihir who came soon to meet him after he saw the painting he was amaze to see how he did such a beautiful paint of almost a village. Raman ask him if he know that place as he dont know where it found nor even the name too. Which he said RITEEKEECH where are all this the way he paint it that place only.


Raman ask him how he know if he ever been there too. He said no but from telly soup he saw it . Mihir ask him ... " How can he paint such a big thing ? as earlier it was like house flowers n mountain he paint, but this time it different how that possible " . Which raman to say ... " He too is confuse due of this he is not able to understand why he got such a pain n he start to do painting too n this time a village all he feel his is related in it but why this feeling he dont know ". Both was confused n impress too .


Almost one week pass no drem from ishita nor even any headache from raman life was going as always.


One day raman wanted to have a contact with an catering n he got ishita company which he dial the num too it was her mob num.



It ring she was busy it cont ring n she pick n as she start to talk there was noise from raman side which both was unable to hear each ever voice properly too but was cont trying like.


.. " HELLO IM FROM BHOPAL RAMAN BHALLA SPEAKING ". ... " HELLO IM NOT ABLE TO HEAR YOU CLEARLY FROM WHERE WHO PLEASE GO AWAY FROM NOISE " . ... " BAIHDI HO KYA SUNAYI NAHI DETI TUMKO KISI AUR KO DO PHONE ". ( ARE YOU DEAF , CANT YOU HEAR, GIVE IT TO SOME ONE ELSE ) ..." KYA BETA , NAHIN MEIN BETI HOON , IYER KI AAP KAUN " , im telling him to go far but he dont hear me n want appa to talk. she murrering .( WHAT, SON NO IM DAUGHTER OF IYER ).


Both get irritate n cut the mob as they cut the noise too stop .Raman try again n it was switch off .



After two days ishita was doing her work sumeet came to meet her after he enter in her cabin both greet each ever n he start to talk ... "WHAT THAT ISHU OUR ENGAGE IS IN TWO MONTHS ,BUT STILL WE DID NOT TALK OR KNOW PROPERLY ON EACH EVER , SINCE MY RETURN FROM US , ". ... " SUMEETJI IM WAS BUSY N IM SORRY TO NOT GIVE YOU TIME ". ... " HEY WHAT SUMEETJI HAN N WHY YOU ARE BEHAVING LIKE THIS I NOTICE SINCE OUR ENGAGE HAS BEEN FIX YOU ARE BEING UNFORMAL TO ME AREY WE ARE CHILDHOOD FRIEND NA SO "... " I SHOULD RESPECT YOU THAT WHY ". ... " WHY IF YOU CALL ME SUMEET YOU WONT RESPECT ME HMMM ". ..." NO IT NOT THAT BUT TO ADRRESS YOU I FEEL AWKWARD THAT WHY ". ... " OK I TAKE A LEAVE FROM OFFICE LETS GO OUT OK WHAT SAY COME I ALREADY TOLD APPA ". ..." BUT I HAVE LOT OF WORK ". She try to not be with him but in vein. He close her file n make her stand n held her hand to leave.



Raman who was in office but his heart was not in the work he feel wrong thing will happen but what is it he dont know he call his mum to know if she is fine which she say yes. His heart was feeling restless as some one close to him will get hurt.


while ishu n sumeet was in car both was talking on each ever about like n dislike too, both was laughing too. At the same time was behind their car n try to have a way n sumeet was not giving him he try to double them again but sumeet dont let him n start to drive every way.


Raman got more feeling his heart beat fast as it can stop any time.


Ishita who start to fear the way it was going n start to so a shade thing like a truck following a car with a race way n it start ti become clear n


PREVIOUS LIFE

IN COLLEGE THE GUY HELD THE GIRL HAND N PULL HER CLOSE TO HIM, WHICH MAKE THE GIRL FEAR N SCARE TOO, SHE SHOUT LOUDLY ANNA HELP , THE GUY TOUCH HER FACE CARESS HER CHEEKS TOO, SHE CRY TO NOT TOUCH HER AS HE WAS ABOUT TO KISS HER A VOICE FROM BEHIND SHOUT ..." PARMEET HOW DARE YOU TO TOUCH MY PARI IN BAD INTENTION ". ANNA THE GIRL SHOUT N RUN TO HIS BRO N HUG HIM WITH FEAR. ASHOK THE PROTECTIVE BRO ALWAYS THERE FOR HIS SIS TO SAVE OR PROTECT HER FROM BAD GUYS , HE SLAP PARMEET N TOLD HIM DONT TRY TO CROSS HIS LIMIT N LEAVE WITH PARI. THEY WERE IN CAR WHEN TRUCK FOLLOW THEM TRY TO CRUSH HIS CAR N IT HIT THEIR CAR WHICH BOTH FALL SHE SHOUT ANNA.


present life


Same time she shout loudly anna with a fear voice n sumeet stop the car n truck just hit his car.


Raman shout loudly pari as he feel some thing happen to his pari whitout seeing her nor meet her he can feel every thing which related to pari . He look around a notice hi was in office n he eas sweating too.


sumeet call ishita to wake but a voice calling pari hit her ear n make her open her eyes , he ask her if his ok n who is that anna whom she shout. She say she dont know may be a dream try to avoid his eyes. She wonder who's voice it was which call her as it was her whom the voice call .


Raman who was confused why he shout pari name who is she till now she was in his though as his dream girl but now feel she is somewhere waiting for him but where since he talk with that girl whom he could not hear her voice clearly his heart feel strange .


Ishita who got some scratch on arms n legs . Doctor give her med and asl to rest too n leave amma appa leave summet n ishu he say sorry to her which she say it not his fault he do a side hug to her .


Same day at night ishita was having pain in her leg she was starting the stars n talk to the moon too .


Same time too was talking to the moon .


ishita saw a falling stars n did a wish n it was ... GOD YOU ONLY KNOW WHO IS MADE FOR ME IF IT SUMMET WHICH MY HEART IS NOT ALLOW ME TO FALL IN LOVE WITH HIM NOT MYSELF I FEEL STRANGE BRING WITH SUMEET HE IS A GOOD GUY BUT MY HEART MY SOUL ARE NOT WILLING IT YOU ONLY LNOW WHO OS HE WHERE IS HE IF REALLY THERE IS SOME ONE ELSE FOR ME LET ME KNOW HOW IT ON YOU GOD .


Raman who was dialing mihir num but it ishu num which it call .


ishita was hearing radio some romatic song n her mob ring he pick it n before she say hello both feeling a strange closeness restless way their heart meet n .



R " HI I TOLD YOU TO MEET ME YOU DID NOT COME .


I " SORRY WHO ARE YOU N WHOM YOU WANT TO TALK ? .


R " OUPS , GIRL VOICE IM SORRY IT MY MISTAKE BUT WHO ARE YOU YOUR VOICE LOOK LIKE I HEARD BEFORE TOO .


I " WHY SHOULD I TOLD YOU MY NAME N WHO ARE YOU I NEVER TALK WITH YOU SORRY YOU MAY GOT WRONG NUM .


IN radion the man say a beautiful song for all lovers n this one is for pari from her lover . the song music start to play n it was from movie ( HAMESHA TITLE SONG. )


R " MAY BE IT WRONG NUM BUT NOT WRONG TIME , WAIT CAN YOU INCREASE THE VOLUME OF RADIO PLEASE IT MY FAVORITE SONG .


I " HOW DARE YOU I WONT OK MY ROOM MY RADIO WHY I SHOULD LISTEN TO YOU .


She was about to cut but his please could not let her n increase the volume as she too love this sing n as the song start both sing at the same time in man an girl voice as they weee singing.


I " HAMESHAA HAMESHAA TUMUJHE MEIN RAAHEGA

( ALWAYS ALWAYS STAY WITH ME )


R" KAHAN ( WHERE )


I" YAHAN YAHAN. ( HERE HERE )


R " HUM AUR TUM USSPE YE SAMA , AISE MEIN KEHBI DE DIL KI DASTAN .

( ME N YOU AND THIS WEATHER N IN THAT TELL US ON HEART HISTRY )

I " DIL.MEIN TU HI TU

( YOU ARE IN HEART )

R " HAMESHAA HAMESHAA

( ALWAYS ALWAYS )

BOTH while singing feeling like they already lnow it n even dance n sing too ishita got some shade views like a boy n a girl dancing n sing on this song hug happy too . raman try to control his head n with ishita voice it stop n they try to stop but the song n their heart was not ready to stop as they were in over world on this song until raman say pari which she stop n she say painter which raman cut the mob.


it end with both faces


PRECAP : ISHITA HEAR RAMAN VOICE ON TV BUT COULD NOT SEE HIM


THANK

HANSA


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HOPE YOU GUYS WILL LIKE IT N WILL LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS N GUESS TOO .


NEXT UPDT WILL BE DONE NRXT WEEK NO UPDT THIS WEELEND AD IT WILL BE EID CELEBRATION


IN ADVANCE EID MUBARRAK TO ALL MUSLIMS READERS



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