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Lovely Update.
Even I Love MiMi
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After coming back from the picnic everyone gathers at bhalla house and celebrated mihika's birthday with her parents...

Next day they all reach to the office and got busy in their work...

At ashok' s cabin:-
Shagun enters and hug Ashok...

Ashok:- baby kaisi rhi tumhari picnic ??

Shagun:-awesome tumhe bhi aana chahiye tha...tm bhi bht enjoy karte...

Ashok:- baby ek boss apne chhote mmote employees k sath ghoomta to kaisa lagta...

Shagun:- Ashok please they are my family...

Ashok :- I m just kidding baby...
Shlok enters ashok's cabin but he saw shagun there and he turn to leave...but Ashok saw him ...Ashok very well knew that shlok loves shagun and he is so much deserving...so he always insult him...
Ashok stops shlok and said:- shlok kha ja rhe ho tumse kuch jaruri bat karni hai...
Shlok stops and enter the cabin ,Ashok hugs shagun and say:- baby tum mere upar wale cabin ki files arrange kar do phir ham waha kuch quality time spend karenge...and he kiss shagun on forehead...shlok burns in anger...but controls himself...
Shagun looks at shlok and leaves from there...
Ashok signals shlok to sit...

Ashok:- shlok me tumhara boss hu aur me tumhe apna dost bhi manta hu par tum aisa karoge mene socha nhi tha ...

Shlok:- kya Matlab????

Ashok:- Matlab tumhari eklouti behen ki shadi ho gyi aur tumne mujhe invite bhi nhi kiya...

Shlok:- what r u saying??meri behen ki shadi nhi hui hai abhi Tak..

Ashok:- ohh to tmhe nhi pata ,wait a minute abhi pata chal jayega and Ashok makes a phone call

In Raman's cabin

Ishita hands a file to Raman :- sir ye rhi aapki file...

Raman:- ohhho office me itni izzat ,wese yha koi nhi hai dedo galiyan nikal lo apni bhadas...

Ishita:- Raman mujhe tmse kuch bat karni hai...

Raman:- ye mat bolna ki tum mere bachchhe ki ma bnne wali ho kyuki mujhe clearly had hai us rat hmare beech kuch nhi hua tha..
Ishu :- kuch bhii..wese mujhe us din k bare me hi bat karni hai tumhe lagta hai kya ki hme sab ko bta dena chahiye...

Raman:- tum to aise bol rhi ho jaise ki koi bht galat kam kiya ho hamne ,itna mat socho tumhara chhota sa dimag phat jayega...sab ko btaogi sab faltu me hme tease karenge...

Ishu nodds...at the mean time a peon comes and inform them that Ashok calls them both in his office...
Raman feels wierd because usually Ashok only calls him to his office...

At ashok' s cabin:-

Raman and ishita enters in the cabin

Ashok:- aaiye mr and Mrs bhalla welcome...
All three get shocked and looks surprisingly at Ashok
Ashok:- are aise kya dekh rhe hai aap log mujhe...Mr and Mrs bhalla aapko yad nhi hotel paradise...are aap log lucky couple the wahan poora ki poora suit booked tha aap dono k nam...
Raman and ishita look at each other and than they try to explain shlok who was staring at them questionably...but Ashok interrupts them :-are me bhi wahi tha mere dost ka hotel hai wo, aap logo ne notice nhi kiya...kaise karte bht busy the aap ekdusre k sath...he goes near ishita and speaks :- wese Mrs bhalla me soch rha hu ki office dress ki theme modern kar dun,kafi hot lag rhi thi aap us din...

Raman got angry and about to grab ashok' s coller but shlok stops him and turn to Ashok:- me aapka manager hu par meri ya meri behen ki personal life se aapka koi Lena dena nhi hai...so stay away from her...

Shlok holds ishita's hand and drag her out of the cabin...

Raman point at Ashok:- ham aapke employee par hme aapki nhi aapko hmari jarurat hai...isiliye aakhiri bar respect de kar ye bat bol rha hu ishita ka nam bhi apni juban se mat Lena...and Raman leaves from there...

Shagun was standing at the door and trying to figure out what is happening Ashok saw her and she look at him questioningly Ashok say kuch nhi baby me to bas kuch friendly baten karna chah rha tha tumhare friends se...shagun looks at him suspectably but didn't say anything...

Ashok fumes and thought :- bht udne lage hai ye dono inke par katne padenge...

Shlok drags ishita to office terrace ishita cries and try to speak to shlok...Raman comes from behind and put hand on shlok's shoulder...and say :- shlok listen to me ,ishita ki galti nhi hai hmare pas aur koi option nhi tha us...
Shlok interrupted him and say me apni bhn se bat kar rha hun tum beech me mat bolo

Ishu:- anna wo ...cries...

Shlok:- tumhe kya laga ishu mujhe vishwas nhi hai tum dono par ,me tum dono ko janta nhi hu...bura tab laga jab us gande aadmi k muh se mujhe ye sab sunna pada...

Ishu:- I m sorry Anna ab pakka aap se koi bat nhi chhupaungii...

Shlok turns to raman:- Raman Kumar bhalla meri behen lakho me ek hai itni aasani se tumhari biwi nhi banegiii...

Raman:- han han pta hai...wo to us din majboori thi warna tumhari behen ko kabhi apni biwi nhi bnata..suicide nhi karni mujhe...
Ishu hits him playfully raman say sorry to shlok and hug him...
Shlok wipes ishita's tears and hugs her...



Some days passed as usual mi-mi got engaged and everybody got busy in a big project at office ,after a lot of hardwork they got the success...Ashok throws a party for their employees at his house...

Mihir and mihika come together ,ishita comes to the party wearing a very elegant kanjiwaram saree...
Raman was admiring her ...

.ishu comes to him and ask:-kya , ghoor kyu rhe ho???

Raman :- soch rha hu ki meri aankhe kharab ho gyi hai ya phir tum is kapde ki than me sach me achchhi lag rhi ho...

Ishita blushes and say :- kuch bhiii...

They both got busy in talking to their coalleges...

Shagun was getting irritated Ashok was forced her to meet his clients...who were staring at her in a wrong way...shlok was seeing this and burns in anger...

Ashok excuses herself from shagun and say:- baby ek bht important kam yad aa gya mujhe me abhi aata hu u take care of the party...shagun nods

she looks shlok and smiles ,shlok ask her for a dance shagun agrees and they both went up to stage...Raman and ishita smiles looking at them...Raman got busy in talking to the clients ishita was talking to a lady

suddenly a waitress comes to her and say that that mihika got strain her ankle and sitting near bathroom, she has called her.ishita got
Worried and goes towards bathroom...

Suddenly somebody pulls her with jerk...


Raman looks around the hall and doesn't find ishita he goes up to the lady to which ishita was talking ...she tells him about the waitress...Raman panicked because mihika and mihir have gone for a long drive after informing him...he goes towards bathroom and saw ishita's earring there...he ask to watchmen ,watchmen inform him that Ashok has dragged some lady to his basement ...Raman runs towards basement...
Shagun and shlok feels something is wrong and they went after Raman...

Raman reaches the basement he hears screaming noise from a room...

Ashok dragged ishita to basement
Ashok:- tera bhai aur aashiq bht udte hai na aaj tera aisa haal karunga ki dono jameen par aa girenge...
Ishita tries to get free from ashok's hold and screams Raman's name...

Raman breaks the door he finds a horrified ishita trying to get free from ashok's hold and Ashok was trying to kiss her ...
Raman grabs ashok's collar from behind and punch him..
Raman:-hath kaise lagaya tune meri ishita ko. Mene bola tha usse door rhne ko...and beats him...
Raman push ashok on the ground and hugs a sobbing horrified ishita ...ishita hide her face in raman's shirt and cries uncontrollably...
At the time shlok and shagun reach the basement ...Ashok saw shagun and say :- shagun look ye ladki mujhe yha le kar aayi aur iska aashiq mujhe hi mar rha hai ...

Shagun slaps him and say how dare u to do that she is my best friend...Ashok was about to say something but shlok drags him out of the room and beats him

Shlok:- meri behen ko chhuaa kaise tune...me mar da lunga aaj tumhe...and beats him badly...guards make them apart and took Ashok away...shagun stands shocked at the door...

Shlok goes near ishu and touches her shoulder and say cryingly:- ishu...
Ishu jerks his hand with shoulder and clutches Raman's shirt more tightly...and cries...shlok cries seeing her like this and said :- me hu kanna...
Ishu hides her face completely and clutches Raman tightly...
Raman singles shlok to go and he caress ishu's hairs,he got tears too in his eyes...

Shlok cries and go outside...shagun touches shlok's sshoulder,shlok turns and hugs shagun...
Shlok:- shagun me bht bura bhai hu me apni chhoti behen ki safety tak ka khayal nhi rakh paya...
Shagun says while crying and hugging him:- bure tum nhi buri to me hu ...mene ek gande admi se pyar kiya...tum to bht achchhe ho shlok ,tum sirf pyar karna jante ho ...tumne mujhe hamesha pyar kiya aur mene sab samajhte hue bhi tumhe ignore kiya me tumhare pyar ke layak nhi hu...
Shlok:- aisa mat bolo shagun me to sirf itna janta hu ki me tumse pyar karta hu aur kuch to me janta hi nhi...I love u shagun...aur tumse jyada mere pyar k koi bhi layak nhi hai...
Shagun hugs him and cry...shlok cries too...
Shlok wipe his tears and say:- ab chalo shagun hme ishu ko sambhalna hai...shagun nodds...


In the room:-

Raman :- ishita tum kyu ro rhi ho kuch nhi hua tumhare Anna aur mene rajnikant style me us kutte ko khoob Mara...tum mat ro

Ishu:- Raman mujhe kisi ko face nhi karna ,I m feeling dirty...

Raman:- tum pagal ho kya dirty to wo Ashok hai jiski dhool. Mene mar mar k nikal di...tum to meri sabse pure sabse khoobsurat madrasan ho...

Ishu:- now nobody would like me sabki izzat kharab kar di mene...

Raman:- ye kya abla nari wale dialogue bol rhi ho tumhe kuch nhi hua..aur izzat us Ashok khanna ki kharab hui tumhari nhi...and everybody likes u alot mere alawa...

Ishu looks at him surprisingly raman say:-han aur nhi to kya tumhe like karunga to ladunga kisse... madrasan Raman aur ishita alag alag nhi hai...ek hi hai hamesha se ...akela Raman aur akeli ishita se koi story ban hi nhi sakti..
.ishita wipes her ear and said;-- I love u hi bolna hai to dhang se bol do...

Raman:- mera pyar bht sara hai ,words me fit nhi hota aankho me sama jata hai...dekh sako to dekh lo...and they both share a intense eyelock...ishita got tears in her eyes
Raman:- are ye kya kar rhi ho mera sara pyar le liya aur apna baha rhi ho mujhe bhi to kuch pyar do...

Ishu:- me to poori hi tumhari hu Jo chahe lelo...
Raman and ishita hug each other...and close their eyes..
...shlok and shagun were watching them at the door holding each others hand...
Shlok enters the room and said :-ishu...
Ishu gets up and hug shlok and mouthed a sorry...
Shlok:- tu kyu sorry bol rhi hai pagal tu to meri brave behen hai...ab najaren jhukana band kar aur ghar chal najren utha kar...ishita nodds and say Anna hamari jobs...
Shlok:- don't worry I have already discussed it with Raman before we will leave this job and wil start our own company ...raman nodds and shagun holds shloks hand and smiles...
Raman and ishita smiles seeing them together and they all walk towards their home hand in hand for a new beginning of life full of love...






Edited by Divfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome story yaar continue dis wen u r back we will wait
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sri1091

Awesome story yaar continue dis wen u r back we will wait

Thanks ,I will try to continue it ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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brillat story dear.but...u ended wid rush..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb update
n plz continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awosmeee. Brilliant story it was
Good work
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Brilliant update dear ur storyline is amazing why u end it so soon wanted to read more
If u write another story please pm me 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys...thanks for ur appreciation and support ,I know I ended up the story in rush but I will try to continue it after coming back ...I will try to portray their weddings and life after confession... I have tried to write first time and this feels amazing when people like your work...thank you all ...
Lots of love
Edited by Divfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ayyo u finished this story.
Very awesome so fresh story yaar..
Each and every moment is very special in this.
I love mihika birthday surpise..i love mihir confession stytle..

Each and every conversation of ishra is hatka hai..
Shlok and shagun atlast come together,

kya mara raman,shlok ..ashok ko...

Awwe raman confessed his love...ishita be na so cute..it is so different stytle of confession..

If possible continue this story
thanks for pm dear..:-)

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