ISHRA FAN FICTION IT'S LOVE FOR THE FIRST TIME!!! part 18 page 22

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Posted: 10 years ago
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HELLO!!! EVERYONE I AM NEW AT WRITING BUT MANY STORIES ON INDIA FORUMS HAD INSPIRED ME TO WRITE. I am too nervous while writing this story please do tell me if u liked it or no.


CHAPTER 1

Baarish!!! Mumbai ki pehli baarish jab chuti hai tho ek ajeeb sa ehsaas chod kar jati hai. Us waqt ki yaad dilati hai jo mere zindagi ke sabse haseen ya u kahu sabse bure lamhe the. 1 saal pehle mumbai ne issi baarish ke saath mera swagath kiya tha par us waqt mai apne aap se hi khafa thi. Zindagi se thak chuki thi aur pyaar paar se vishwas utha chuka tha...


Flashback

2 saal pehle ishita's pov

Delhi!! capital of INDIA also known as "dilwalo ka shehar" had welcomed us with open arms. my amma had a dream for which she thought would get fulfilled here what was that thought, it was of getting me married. she had expected me to find my prince charming in this city but seriously my career was i most important thing for me right now and today i was one step closer to my dream. my new job at Dr Bhadra's clinic was the mosst exciting thing in my life. my first day in Delhi was spent at setting up our new house which was just marvelous.

NEXT DAY.
As I had come two days prior to my date of joining I had a day free so mihika and I decided to go on 'delhi darshan'. In the bus while travelling suddenly I noticed someone, someone familiar, someone i had known but what was he doing here? Did he have any conference or was he supposed be here and i did'nt know. Murugan!! please help me hide my face. Why do u always have to do this to me????

NOTE...
please tell me how is it???




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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update
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nice start
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nice intro ..intrestng ..continue soon nd do pm me fr nx update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Here u go new update!!! plz tell me how is it??
Murugan!!! help me hide my face... why subbu again why murugan why????
subbu was my classmate in the university. University ki saari ladkiya uspar marti thi and i was no exception. Badi mushkil se apne aap ko control karke usse bhulane ki koshish ki thi par lagta hai ki zindagi ke har zarre ne mujhe usse milane ki sajish ki hai... wow ishita hindi dialogue and all aa I secretly patted myself now back to the problem my mind reminded me... what if he notices me?? will he even remember me?? why am getting so scared its not that during the university days i was back of him and was desperate for him though i was secretly but no one knew this fact. In all this confusion i didnt notice that he was approaching me.
"Hi!!! your ishita right, remember me we were classmates in the university"
"who wouldn't remember you university ki sari ladkiya tum par marti thi"
"I would take that as a compliment Miss Ishita"
"It was meant to be one"
"Thank u accha what are you doing here??"
"Seeing delhi like you are"
"Arre i mean ki tum yaha kaise tumhara job tho chennai mai tha na??"
"Ha par mujhe yaha better job mili tho mai yaha aage"
"kaha par?"
"Dr.Bhatra's clinic"
"WOW yaar what a coincidence even i am joining Dr.Bhatra's clinic"
"WHAT??" my eyes widened in shock murugan not again but as i told u ki lagta hai ki zindagi ke har zarre ne mujhe usse milane ki sazish ki hai i thought to myself
"ishita" he called "you okay?"
"ya ya just got into thinking something"
"is it about me" he winked
"aa no no" i tired to come up with something
"its okay ishita i was just joking"
thank god i thought
"now now were are u heading to?"
"qutub minar care to join??"
"ofcourse thats such a lovely idea anyways i dont have anyone to enjoy with"
my heart jumped with joy that i was going to sppend time with him but again my mind was like control ishita he had just accepted your polite and friendly request not that he wants to be with you or he has feelings for u
"again u drifted of to your thinking ab mujhe sacchi mai jana hai ki tum kya soch rahe ho"
i was trying to formulate an answer when i suddenly hear
"bas"
it was mihika i just forgot about her but i was very thankful to her as she saved me today
"aap log tab se baate kar rahe ho. akka do you even remember ki aapke behen bhi aapke sath is trip par hai ya phir bhul gae ki mai exist karti hu"
"miku tu aisa kyu bol rahe hai"
"accha baba thik hai ab mera intro nahi karaoge kya apne dost se?"
i hadnt noticed that subbu was sitting there clueless
"ha baba wait subbu this is mihika my sis and mihika this is subbu my classmate in univerisity"
"nice meeting u mihika"
"same here"
"ab chale hum apne destination par pahunch chuke hai" mihika
Rest of the day was spent in touring Delhi. It was the most memorable day in my life. Mihika and subbu got comforable with each other in no time. many a times i got these stares from mihika which would mean something like Is there something cooking on between u two? i just ignored her and hoped that subbu did not notice any of this.
after coming back home i had expected mihika to ask questions and the expected happened
"akka"
"haa miku"
"subbu is very nice na"
"ya he is a very nice guy"
"i wanted to ask you something akka"
"yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai puchna"
"akka kya aap subbu se pyar karti hai"
i was trying to figure out weather i should tell her the truth or no and my internal war was not helping me
"akka i only want to know the truth"
"ya i like him alot from the day on in the university"
mihika got so excited that she shouted amma ran to our to find out what was wrong
"kuch nahi amma miku ne chuha dekha tha"
"chuha par ishu maine tho pur saaf kiya tha"
"its okay ma she will ma she will be okay"
"accha thik hai kuch chahehi tho bula lena
"okay amma now u go"
amma left thinking about something
"miku tu kyu chilla rahe hai"
"akka finally apko pyaar ho gaya"
"ha ab mai kya karu"
i seriously needed someones advice now
"what do you mean ab mai kya karu obviously go and tell him akka"
"no no i am too scared" "accha agar bol nahi sakti jata tho sakti ho na ki aap usse pyaar kar thi ho"
"matlab"
"matlab ki apne actions se suubu ko batao ki aap use pyaar kar thi ha"
"ye accha idea hai"
"now plan fast"
"okay"



thats all for today plz tell me if liked it aand i hope the update was too small


Edited by awesomefreak112 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey very intresting concept..its completely clean and clear..:-)
i love first barish scene in delhi..

i love ishita and subbu conversation..
Descent toh diktha hai bandha..lekin yeh story mai raman nahi hai kya?

O all university girls fall for subbu including ishita:-/

im loving ishita self takes and praying murugan for help..
Ishita likes subbu thats it.
O mihika is so cute and question bank..

Mihika suggested ishita to propose subbu:->:->
nahi nahi i want raman entry..
I think subbu reject ishita..

Continue soonish:-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: janani_divan

Hey very intresting concept..its completely clean and clear..:-)
i love first barish scene in delhi..

i love ishita and subbu conversation..
Descent toh diktha hai bandha..lekin yeh story mai raman nahi hai kya?

O all university girls fall for subbu including ishita:-/

im loving ishita self takes and praying murugan for help..
Ishita likes subbu thats it.
O mihika is so cute and question bank.


Mihika suggested ishita to propose subbu:->:->
nahi nahi i want raman entry..
I think subbu reject ishita..

Continue soonish:-)


Thank u soo much and don't worry its an ishra fan fiction obviously Raman will be but thoda time lagega
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rk654

very niceupdate...

cont. soon

Thank u so much for reading
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: super_cutie

Nice story

Continue soon

Thank u soo much

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