Humari adhuri kahani... a ts on ishra-part3 pg6,7 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: ramandpriya

nice...
pm me the next update plz


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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: rufana10


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it was beautiful
update d next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13

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Posted: 10 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: --abha--

its heartbreaking...nice start...

looking forward to read..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
The flow of tears nvr left his eyes.. Only the flow got intense aftr he remembered the state he saw her just 4 hrs b4..
Wen he opened the door he saw her lying in pool of blood... she was unconsious but the struggle she mite have made to survive or to make ppl aware was totally visible from the condition of room..
He just picked her up in his arms and ran leaving the door open.. he had no sense left.. he just wanted to c her back in normal condition..
He just wanted his healthy, their healthy baby in his hands... He just wanted to c the happiness of complete family in his parents eyes.. He just wanted his in laws to b proud tht thy gv their daugther to a rite man..
He cared nothing.. just nothing..
His whole shirt was drenched in her blood.. even i she was unconsious, the desire to live was still visible on her face.. the urge to c thr child,to bear his child was still on her lips..
He ran the steps down n saw amma cumn im colony.. she got so scared seeing her daugther's condition tht she started crying there..
She came rung towards him.. he told her all.. he asked her to go upstairs n lock the house n call hos parents n thn thy all cum to hospital...
He left from thr... n tht lady cursed herself to go to buy veggiea leavng her daugthr in the game of death..
*******
As he entered hospital.. the drs. came running n tuk her on stretcher and carried her on opd.. he just stood thr numb.. wit no feeling or sense..
Few mins later his parents and amma appa came to hospital.. cng hos mothr he cudnt control himself and started crying heavily..
Amma and maa went to hospital mandir to pray her and her child.. while his father consoled him and assured all will b fine.
Thr came the dr. out of opd.. the tension on her face clearly signified nothing was rite inside...
She said raman tht normal delivery is not posible but thy hav to operate her now.. he agreed.. he just requested dr. to keep both safe..
Dr. asured him.. then all standng thr knew.. today sum1 hv to loose thr breath.. yes sum1 ll leave this world ,shatterng the whole world here..
She left..
Aftr two hrs the dr came out of opd wit a cute baby in her hands..
The baby was crying wch brought raman to his senses... he ran to c his baby..
Dr said thy are blessed wit a grl.. his happiness knew no bounds..
All started dancing... but latr he realized wat abt her.. his love..
He asked her about his wife..
Again the tensed look on her face made all worried..
She said ishita hav lost a lot of blood and this delivery also made her week.. and she cant assure him of anything.. byt to state in medical term.. ishita had very few chances of survival.. he was stunned.. her amma's outcry waz much loud thn tht of baby.. his maa tuk the baby in her arms while his father holded him...
She was brought out of opd.. she had gain her senses.. but was heavily weak.. but the joy of being a mother was visible in her smile.. he ran towards her.. held her in his arms. N wept lyk a baby.. she just held him tight.. the baby was brought in room n she had no energy to take it her arms.. he brought the baby to her.. but she cud only kiss her...
*****
Now he sat thr cing her worsing condition.. she cudnt sit but was talkng minimal.. cudnt raise her hand but smile as always... he left the room cing her horrified condition..
He entered hospitals mandir.. n begged god to make all rite..
He dnt wish nythng more n asked in watevr condition she is rite now.. he manage her.. take full care.. but begged him to not take her away..
Prayed the lord for mercy.. but then he had a tap on his back.. it was his mom standng...
She told him ishita wanted to meet him..
He ran to her room..
As he entered cng him she got happy.. n a curve came on her lips...
He walkd towards her bed..
He sat near her..
She smiled cng him..
She asked him to cum in her arms.. he came near her.. n kissed her cheeks.. she hugged him tightly..
The baby was sleepng in her cradle..
Both saw baby.. sleeping in deep slumber wit no worries of world..
She kissed him on forehead.. he got up..
She said" Raman i dnt hv much tym left.. my body is gv

plzz contunue down
Edited by ragnacrazy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
ng up.. i can hardly survive.."
He was hell shocked.. the grl who gv him lessons of lyf is now herself talkng of death...
He just said"ishita plzz mat jao.. plzzz"
She smiled and said"agar mere bus main hota toh kabhi nahi jati.. kabhi bhi nahi... but aise hi ye saasenn saath nahi chodengi kera kuch wadein chahiye mujhe tumse.."
Raman cudnt get his sense...
She said him to listen...
"Mera pehla wada ki humesha n humesha tum mujhse bepanha pyaar karna..."
Raman said"iss duniya main tumse jada pyaar main kissi se nai kar paunga"
Ishita smilef n said"per hamari beti se jaroor karna.. plzz raman i want a promise u ll nvr evr blame my daugther for my death... u ll love her to core.. u ll gv her love of mom n dad.. "
He just knodded...
She added"wen she ll get up in the morng kiss her forehead twice from pappa n thn mamma.. n yaa plzz name my RUHI whose R will start wit raman n end with ishitas' I.. making her betwn us... hamesha"
He agreed...
Now her breaths whr getn heavy.. she was not able to hold long.. he calld the dr..
She said "nai rukho...meri aakhri sharta sunno.. sunno plzz"
He just got up was going to run towards door b4 he cud open she said" tum zindagi main aage badhna.. apne liye phir se naya pyaar dhoondna"
Her words left him stunned.. he cudnt react..
She said him to agree.. to say yes to her last request..
No he cud nvr evr do tht.. agar uska bus chalta toh he wud hv gave his lyf now but his daughter stopped himm...
He cud nvr think of lovng else.
She said "raman ab jana hai mujhe.. plzz bolo kuch.."
He stood thr luking at tht bear wall..
She begged him for an answer..he dnt respond.. she had just few breaths.. n wanted to listen yes from him..
He got into flashback wen ishita climbed the stage on their farewell day to ask him to marry her...
She just stood n said"mr.raman bhalla will u marry me"
He just replied wit a yes wit memories of those past.. his yez was 4 her then but she heard it now..
His yes was audible to her to now aswell.. she got her ans then aswell now..
she just closed her eyes with his answer..she breath her last tht thr ll b a new dawn...

To b continued
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Very emotional update dear... Ishita is no more oh god hw will Raman live widout her...
Ruhi their little princess is d only hope nw hope Raman gets out of dis soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
The best I've read! God bless
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Emotional update;-(
without ishita how u mould this story ..im waiting for that...:-)

For god sake dont bring shagun in this wonderful story...:-)
Ishita hamshekal hogi...
Ishita selflessly ask 3 promises from raman...;-(

Waiting for next update..:-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
nice update
n emotional too
continue soon

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