ShaRam OS Thread: OS- Her Hidden Sacrifice by jasminerahul on pg-20 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: The_Imane

I didnt even finished editing the post and you read already??😲
Anyways, i am a very bad writer, and first time tried something like this...
Thank you for such a sweet comment😳

Arey Yaar, Do'nt be so self critical . Your story is going great. Remember It's first time for everything. You are our torch bearer to Keep Sharam alive and very much part of the story line. This is a perfect treat for us the KP and Anita/Shagun jodi fans in whateverway the cv depict them.At the same time will not feel the absence of Anita from the show.😉😊 Cheers
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
lovely os.to fulfil ishita's last wish raman n family accepted shagun.shagun was never loved by raman,but he gave her a friend's place.loved the way u presented each character's pov.but i wish i cud read adi's pov too.raman 4gave shagun,bcz ..since she left only he got a wonderful person like ishita.ruhi explaining shagun's strange way of loving was nice.shagun's pov was touchy.she is a changed person.she wished she deserved to be in ishita's place to die n ishita shud've been in her place to be with raman,adi n ruhi.that touched my heart.
plz update ur ff too
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
Already three OSes have been posted!
I'm bookmarking this thread 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
@imane
So emotional dear...😭
Awesome 👏
I've never read your works..🤔
Please PM me the links if I missed more of yours 😳
Edited by Gaya3sb - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: anisha960

hey it is fabulous piece !!!

Thank you😳
I have a lil doubt
Do I know you??
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

lovely os.to fulfil ishita's last wish raman n family accepted shagun.shagun was never loved by raman,but he gave her a friend's place.loved the way u presented each character's pov.but i wish i cud read adi's pov too.raman 4gave shagun,bcz ..since she left only he got a wonderful person like ishita.ruhi explaining shagun's strange way of loving was nice.shagun's pov was touchy.she is a changed person.she wished she deserved to be in ishita's place to die n ishita shud've been in her place to be with raman,adi n ruhi.that touched my heart.
plz update ur ff too

Thank you for the lovely comment
Yes I tought about exploring Adi's POV but It wasnt needed as it would have been quite similar to Ruhi's...
My OS was based on the fact that Ishita has to left her family and she had no choice where Shagun once left them having choice...
So i am glad you liked that part!!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

@imane
So emotional dear...😭
Awesome 👏
I've never read your works..🤔
Please PM me the links if I missed more of yours 😳

Thank you Gaythry, glad you liked😃
Yours was very emotional too
I liked it very much


I have not wrote much in this forum...
Let me remember
There was an OS on on going track that i wrote almost a year before
When Shagun was brought in Bhalla house 1st time
With IshRa confession

And an AsMi OS...

Then i am planning to write an AsMi + ShaRam SS but thats too BeShaRam chappals padheghi😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: The_Imane


Thank you Gaythry, glad you liked😃
Yours was very emotional too
I liked it very much


I have not wrote much in this forum...
Let me remember
There was an OS on on going track that i wrote almost a year before
When Shagun was brought in Bhalla house 1st time
With IshRa confession

And an AsMi OS...

Then i am planning to write an AsMi + ShaRam SS but thats too BeShaRam chappals padheghi😆


Chappals are costly and Tomatoes are tasty...😛
Do it yaar 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb


Chappals are costly and Tomatoes are tasty...😛
Do it yaar 😆

😆😆 maybe i will😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
@imane
perfect heart touching os...it made me teary eyed at some places...
Loved it yaar...

Pls keep writing 😳

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