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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: shreyalvishra

Hey nic story well i think nishita is mirror image of ishita wats say😉just a guess😛continue soon

So far...you said it out...
So Asha won't let it happen 😆
I too don't know what happens next
Waiting for her update

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nidhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

it is nice
I think u r introducing the concept of identical twins
or something else
let's see
continue soon

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12Singmeenu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Ok people I am hear with part 2 boss u people are very good at predicting the story gaya3 agar ayse he chaltha raha tho hamare suspance ka band baj jayega. Any ways I stop my bak bak

The update is not proof read so plz ignore typos and other errors 😳

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Part 2

It starts where it stopped

Nishita. And ishita. Convo

Nishita : don't be too confident miss Iyer. Thum the rkb. Se panga lene ja rahi ho u should be alert

( ur fighting against rkb him self be alert )

Saying that fig disappeared in air and ishita was left alone once again as the silence engulfed the room ishitas thoughts travelled back too the past where she was with her happy family her amma her appa and not to forget the only support system of hers her elder sis nishita nishita Iyer. Or better to say nishu Akka and she herself dint realize when her eyes started brimming with u shed tears and she fell on the ground with a thud

Ishita : in a angry tone mai thum ko chodu ki Nahi Raman Kumar bhalla. Jit a dard. Jitne choth thum ne mari Akka ko phounchai hai us se jayada. Abb thum sahogay u got to pay for the sins u committed

( I won't leave u mr Raman Kumar bhalla how much pain u gave to my sis now u will have to take the double amount of the same pain )

And with this promises to get her Akka justice se walked into a closed room in her home which was generally locked no one except her was aloud to enter in this room as she entered and light a candle which was the only source of light paving the way through darkness in that room there hung a huge photo of her and her sis and a single photo of her sis with flowers on it she lit the lamp near the photo and sat down to went her heart out to her Akka who was still alive in hear heart

Ishita : panch sal ho Gaye Akka aj panch sal ho Gaye app bhi muje chood ke chali gaye amma appa ke accident ke bad app hi tho thi mari maa Mera parivar mera sab Kuch par us admi ne ap ko bhi Chen liya Akka door kar diya app ko mujse Mai bhoth Kali mahsoos kar rahi Hun Akka Par mai Nahi kamzore padugi abb hum Nahi roegey Akka abb vo khooni royega khoon ke asu royega I promise

( 5 years Akka it has been 5 years that u left me after amma appas acident u were my mother u were the only family I had but that mai he snatched away my family if supperated us I feel empty Akka but I won't get weak and I won't cry now it is his turn to cry I will make him cry I promise )

And with that ishu left the room locking the door and got ready for her plan

Ishita : Raman bhalla hear I come

Other side at ramans house as he finished talking with his sole through the mirror mihir entered this room

Mihir : bhai app tayar Nahi hue aj collage Nahi Jana hai kya ???

( bro u r not ready yet don't u want to go to the collage )

That broke ramans train of thoughts and both the brothers rushed out to get going only if they knew what was awaiting for them

As Raman and mihir entered the collage every one gathered around them this was as usual for them as they were the most popular boys of the collage

But some thing was unusual today the crowd was not for them but someone else and Raman tried to see what was going on one of his friends said their was a new girl in the collage and is from London and all the boys are going crazy about her and he excused himself to see the girl leaving a confuse Raman behind

Raman : yeh kon si ladki hai dhekna padega

( who is this girl should see )

Mihir : chood na bhai chal ayse ladki tho athi jathi rahegi

( leave na bro like these girls will come and go )

And that is when they heard a melodious voice and their attention instantly shifted to the voice

They could not see the person as it was totally crowded but could only listen to her voice

And she kept singing

Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Yaara, Yaaraa... yaara!

Mujhko iraade de
Kasamein de, waade de
Meri duaaon ke ishaaron ko sahaare de
Dil ko thikaane de
Naye bahaane de
Khaabon ki baarishon ko
Mausam ke paimane de
Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro raha hun main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro raha hun main (x2)

Manzilein ruswa hain
Khoya hai raasta
Aaye le jaaye
Itni si iltejaa
Ye meri zamanat hai
Tu meri amaanat hai haan...

Apne karam ki kar adayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein
Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro raha hoon main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro raha hun main

Waqt bhi thehara hai
Kaise kyun ye huaa
Kaash tu aise aaye
Jaise koi duaa
Tu rooh ki raahat hai
Tu meri ibaadat hai

Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro raha hoon main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro raha hun main

Raman was lost in the voice when the girl went away with some one as he opened his eyes to search her she was no where she was gon

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So guys that's for now and the next part will be posted by gaya3

😉

Edited by 12Singmeenu - 10 years ago

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

You proved great yaar 👏
What'll I do know 😕
Don't worry...
I've got something else...
Let's see the comments first 😉

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12Singmeenu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb
You proved great yaar 👏
What'll I do know 😕
Don't worry...
I've got something else...
Let's see the comments first 😉

Well honestly last min plan b choose karna pada our readers are dam good in prediction u see 😆 now tho I am also a little worried😕

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

Well honestly last min plan b choose karna pada our readers are dam good in prediction u see😆now tho I am also a little worried😕

Why?
You think I can't manage 😉

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janani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Awesome..
i want to know ..which standard they are studing?
Which course?
Ishita came to india to take revenge ..:->
o her sister died bcoz of raman?
Its occured in 5 years back?
At that time what is the age of nishita?
Mai thoda pagal hoo so clarify my doubts...

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12Singmeenu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

Why?
You think I can't manage 😉

No I am sure u will mai apne liye dar rahi hum Rey 😕 abb mera kya hoga 😆 Ek taraf readers aur Dustin taraf gaya3

Edited by 12Singmeenu - 10 years ago

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12Singmeenu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: janani_divan
Awesome..
i want to know ..which standard they are studing?
Which course?
Ishita came to india to take revenge ..:->
o her sister died bcoz of raman?
Its occured in 5 years back?
At that time what is the age of nishita?
Mai thoda pagal hoo so clarify my doubts...

Abb yeh tho pata Nahi I would have loved to tell u but I really have no idea of what gaya3 amma is having in her mind 😆 so let's wait and read what out BQ gives us shock or heart attack 😆

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janani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

Abb yeh tho pata Nahi I would have loved to tell u but I really have no idea of what gaya3 amma is having in her mind😆so let's wait and read what out BQ gives us shock or heart attack😆

who wrote second part re?