TS: akhir kiyon last part updated on page no 4 - Page 2

Interesting

awesome os

I loved it:-)
this time toshiji support ishita..its unexpected:-)
puttar abh bukdho

thanks all of you your appreciation is like motivation for me to write... i will update last part tomorrow hope you also like the ending 😛

Nice part.hope to see something like this in yhm too.

Here go the last part of TS...

LAST PART

Scene one starts from morning. Raman getting ready and starts shouting "ishita ishita meri blue rang ki file kahan hai?" (where is my blue file?) and then he remember what had happened yesterday and now ishita is no longer responsible for searching his dear BLUE FILE.

Here in living room all are enjoying raman's plight. Ishita as does not refrain herself starts going towards raman room, toshi ji grabs her wrist and ask her "puttar thora sabbar kar" (be patient ishita)

After great difficulty, raman (as raman is now much dependent on ishita) gets ready and comes to do his breakfast. (Now the bomb explodes on him)

Raman: mera naashta kahan hai? (where is my breakfast)

Simi: bhai humein kiya pata apko apna aur adi ka naashta khud hi banana tha bhool gaye... (bhai have you forgotten, you have to make your and adi's breakfast on your own)

Raman: ab ye kiya naya drama hai? (now whats this new drama)

Toshi ji: oye !!! ye drama nahe haqeeqat hai ab kar haqeeqat ka samana... bhara ishita ko suna raha than aab jee ishita ki zindagi kaise wo ye sab kuch sambhalti hai aur haan khud hi apne bte adi ko utha layna. ( this not any drama this is the reality now face it. You have insulted ishita now see how ishita manage all this and go and get your son up).

Scene 2 starts from raman preparing dinner for himself and adi. The whole day was very hectic for him. Not only he manage the office chores but he also manages the needs of adi. After spending a day like ishita, now he has understand how difficult is for ishita managing all the things with love. ishita has fulfilled all her responsibility. But his man ego is a hindrance in saying sorry to ishita.

Ishita is sitting in living room with toshi ji, when adi comes to ishita and complains that papa has prepared loki which is totally burnt and he want to eat pasta prepared by his ishima and mad a sad face.

Ishita who does not bear her son to be sad gets up and goes to kitchen.

Kitchen: raman and ishita encounter

Raman who is totally pissed off could not controlled his anger and said : yahan kiyon aye ho araam karo ja kar beti ho akhir iss ghar ki koi responsibility nahe hai tumhari. ( why you come here, go and take rest after all your are daughter of this house you have no responsibility).

Ishita: hogaya apka ( have you done)

Toshi ji comes and ask ishita to come with her.

Ishita leaves from kitchen. Adi who has witnessing this all scene go to his ishima .

Adi: ishima kiya ap muje maaf nahe karogy. ( ishima will you not forgive me)

Toshi ji : puttar go to your room.

Adi: I am really sorry this is all because of me. Mein vaada karta hoon ishima mein wohi karonga jo ap kaho gay. ( I promise to you I will do whatever you want)

Raman sensing it a nice time to apologize comes forward and said: haan yaar ab maaf kardo na bohat mushkil say is adi ko sambhala hai kaam kay saath. tum kaise kar laity ho yaar?

Ishita no longer to be able to control her feeling starts cryiny and said to adi: kiyon sorry adi tum kiyon sorry bolo gay mein bolti hoon na mein ne pehly tumhain tumhare doston kay samne embarrass kiya phir tumhare kamre mein cctv lagaya. (why you sorry adi I should say sorry to you first I embarrass ou in front of your friends then I put cctv in your room.

Ishita to adi : tumhain muje par abhi bhi bharoosa nahe hai kiyon kay mein tumhari sagi maa nahe hoon agar meri jaga shagun hoti to tum yeh kabhi na sochty. ( you does not trust me as I am not your real mom. If shagun is in my place, you will understand her)

Adi: aisa nahi hai ( its not like that)

Ishita: adi maa ko haq hota hai kay wo apne bache ko dekhy kay kahen wo galat rasta per na chaly bache pay sab say pehla haq maa ka hota hai. Batao agar mein cctv na lagti aur tumhain vinni say aur baqi dostoon say door rehne kay lie bolti to tum manty meri baat. meinne jab tumhain samjhana chaha tha tumne mujse batamizi ki. To mere pass aur koi rasta tha. ( adi mother has right to see her child that he does not walk not wrong path. Mother has first right over her child. Tell me if I does not put cctv and ask you to be away from vini and other your friend, have to listened me? When I tried to make you understand, you behave rudely with me).

Adi going on his knees: ishima I am really sorry you are saying true... I am sorry I promise I will not make this mistake again I will maintain a distance from them including vinni please forgive me.

Ishita hugging adi: its okay my son but do not repeat this mistake again now to go your paati place she has prepare pysum for you go...

Toshi ji: come adi I will go with you

After adi and toshi ji left, raman tries to start conversation.

Raman: ishita meri baat suno. ( listen to me ishita)

Ishita; kiya kehna chahty ho sorry kiyon raman akhir kiyon aur kab tak mein apse yehi sunti rahoon gi ap hamesha wada karty ho phir toor dety ho muje insult karty ho. Ab yehi kaho gay adi apki kamzoori hai hana. ( what do you want to say sorry why raman why and till when? I have to listen from you all this. you always make promises and then you break it. You insult me. And now you will say that adi is your weakness.)

Raman: I am really sorry ye sorry word bhi kaam hai ye tumhari takleef kaam nahe kar sakta na hi mere muh say nikly huye alfaaz wapis lasakta hai. I agree I have done my mistakes in past always intentionally or unintentionally ends up in hurting you. But this time I will not make any promise, ishita please see in my eyes do you truth in my see? If you see please give me one chance last chance you will not repent by giving me this last chance.

Raman: jaise ruhi kay liye mein tumhare har decision par trust karta hoon ab wasie hai adi kay liye bhi tum per trust karoonga. Please maan jao.

Ishita: nahe bohat hogaya mein nahe manoon gi

Raman coming close to ishita takes her hand in his and says " ishita one last chance" having no response then he places his hand on his head and says: ishita mein apni kasam kha kar kehta hoon mein ye galati nahe karoonga...please forgive me.

After listening to raman and sensing that his each word is genuine ishita through herself in raman arms and said: theek hai maaf kiya lekin phir wo sab maat kehna jo kal kaha tha bohat hurt hua tha... aur takleef bhi...

Raman: haan ishita ab nahe kahoonga... And kisses on her forehead.

Raman and ishita was lost in hug and then iyers and bhallas enter and starts clapping.

Raman and ishita distance themselves and starts blushing...

Simi, romi and mihika starts teasing the couple; oho romance ho raha tha

Toshi ji: o good good !!dekha puttar mera plan kabhi fail nahe hota experience jo hai...

Raman: plan???

Toshi ji: haan puttar warna tu kahan ye sab samajhta...

Raman: thanks maa muje sahi rasta dekhane kay liye sach kehty hain maa hi bache ko sahi rasta par la sakti hai... maa tusi great ho...

Toshi ji : chal hat buttering buttering haan... Aur sun agye say meri bahu ko hurt mat karna samajh mein aya...

Raman: haan meri maa na tang karoonga aur na hurt khush ab... bhook lagi hai subha say kuch khaha nahe iss chakkar mein ab khana to kilo ishita yaar jaldi...

Simi: haan haan khilao bhook say mara jar aha hai bhai...

Raman and ishita have a eyelock and background music plays aik doje say hain shikayateen phir bhi sang hai yeh hai mohabbatein...

The end

Hope you all will like it...

Again sorry for any mistakes

Waiting for your response...

Superb ...

Loved it..
I liked raman realisation..toshiji plan worked..:-)

lovely 😳

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