TS: akhir kiyon last part updated on page no 4

this is my first writing hope you all will like it 😊

ishita now is in her amma's house, thinking of what just happened? her amma is continuously asking what happened?

between her sobs she lays her head in her amma's lap and ask that her only fault is that she does not give birth to adi if she is the biological mother raman does not have questioned her motherly love. amma said to her although her intentions were good but the way was not good. yeh tum ne theek nahe kiya ishita tumhain adi kay room mein cctv nahe lagane chahiye tha...

after composing herself she admits her mistake and she ask amma : "raman ko kia meri iss galait ki wajah say haq mil jata hai ka wo muje ye sab kaheen? no amma no he does not have an right to hurt my feeling this time i wont forgive raman easily, i does not deserve this behavior form raman.

toshi ji listening this from the door said " ishita puttar tu theek keh rahi hai raman ne aj jo kia wo bohat galat kiya, tu usy maaf mat karna mein tere saath hoon, mery pass aik plan hai puttar . AB DEKHNA KAISE RAMAN KO AQAL AEGI...to be continued

WHATS say guys if you want then i will continue it

waiting for your response😭

index:

part 1 : page 1

part 2 : page 2

part 3 : page 4

here go the second part...

sorry for mistakes... ye soch kar maaf kardena kay 1st try hai.

PART 2

Scene one starts from raman thinking what just he said to ishita in his anger. He was mentally cursing himself said, "why why I always do this to ishita why I always ends up in hurting her? But she has not done right by putting cctv in adi room afterall his son is not an criminal"...

While he was engrossed in thoughts adi comes to him and asked papa where is ishima? . Raman replies she is at her mother house.

Adi: papa ap unko manao na.

Raman: adi tumhain is baat mien bolne ki koi zaroorat nahe I will handle I on my own. But I want to say you something will you listen to your papa.

Adi: yes papa

Raman: I think you should listen to our ishima she will not do anthing which is not good for you. I know you have spend your life with your shagun mama and she had never interfere in your life but ishita is different from your shagun muma. If she do something definitely it has some solid reason. Are you understanding my son?

Adi: ok papa I will try to understand ishima. But papa please you go, talk to her now she..

Raman cutting him: no abhi use kuch dair waheen rehne do mein khud dekh loonga kiya karna hai.

Raman (thinking): to Jhansi ki rani tyaar ko kaise manao mein abhi gaya to wo apni talwaar lay kar mera saar uraa daygi what should I do now?

Scene two:

At bhalla house everyone is sitting in living room quietly, raman enters and ask for a cup of tea from neelu.

Mr. bhalla: neelu koi zaroorat nahe hai ise kuch dene ki. koi bohat samajhdaar hai wo apna kaam khud kar sakta hai.

Raman: papa ap kiya keh rahe ho?

Simi: bhai bara bhola ban raha hai ab tujhe naje pata tune kiya kiya hai???

Toshi ji enters with ishita and said to all: kisi ko kuch kehne ki lorr nahe hai is khote ko..

All gets surprised with entry of isita as none of them have expects this.

Toshi ji continues bol ishita puttar pehly tu bol tune kuch kehna hai na.

Ishita: raman I want to say sorry muje ccv camera nahe lagne chaheye tha. mein adi ko samajh nahe pa rahi shayad. Ab say app ki adi kay liye saare decision logy.

Raman ; ishita meri baa suno tumhain sorry kehni ki zaroorat nahe...

Toshi ji cuts him and say: oye !!!! sun meri gal mein ne aik faisla kiya hai aur wo tumhain mana hoga. Ishita iss ghar mein aik maa ban kay i thi jab uski tuj se shadi huy thi. Lekin abhi wo iss ghar mein meri beti ban kar i hai na wo kisi ki maa hai na wo teri patni kay har waqat tujh say apni insult sehti rahe. Na ab adi uski zimedari hai na raman tu. Neelu bhaiyaa kay karme sa bhabhi ka saman simi kay roon mein rakh day. Simi tune koi masla to nahe.

Simi: nahe maa. Apne bilkul theek faisla kiya hai.

Mr. bhalla: toshi je changaa kita tusi.

Raman does not believe what just he hears. And said maa ap ye kiya...

Again toshi ji cutting him in middle mein ne keh diya na bus ab aur kuch nahe sunna. Ishita puttar tu mere naal mere room mein chal.

Ishita: jee mummy jee.

Toshi ji and ishita goes to mrs. Bhalla's room.'

Raman (thinking): mummy jee ki chumchi... pagal itna kiya gussa yaar... theek hai agar wo yehi chahti hai to theek hai.

Scene three in toshi ji room

Toshi ji: ab dekhna usey ehsaas hoga kay tune jo bhi kiya tha wo kiyon kiya? adi kay bhale kay liya kar rahi thi tu wo sab. ab jab khud adi ki zimedari uthaye ga tab samajh ayegi ye baap hote hi aise hain jab kuch galat hota hai to maa ki parwarish pey ungli uthate hai khud apne bachoon ko sirf laad aur pyar mein bigaarte hai kabhi dehaan nahe dete ky bache galat raste pay to nahe chal rahe ye sab maa ko hi dekhna parta hai. Tune iss ghar kay liya bachoon kay liye kiya kiya nahe kiyaa? Mein bhi manti hoon kay tune cctv laga kar galat kiya par wo tujh say araam say baat kar sakta tha. Par koi gal nahe mein hoon na sab theek kar doongi is khotte kay dimag ko bhi... starts laughing

Ishita: thank you mumm jee muje samajhne kay liye aur mera saath dene ka liye

Simi and mr. bhalla who are listening to this whole convo also joins them and assures them that they are with them.

Ishita (thinking): ab samajh ayegi tumhain ravan kumar...

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