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Lavanya

@Lavi_961

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#71

heya... 😊
it was a gud update... 👏
jz came across the story nw...
really luking forward to this story... really a different plot... 👍🏼
please continue soon... 😊 ❤️

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janani

@janani_divan

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Prabh ..:-)
Your story never complete with shagun;->
and ruhi tag?
I thought u come with fresh story without ruhi and shagun:-O

dont get me wrong..i expect it is a full masti and a teenage love story..
O that women shagun i think and little baby ruhi...

Raman loves ishita..atlast the trio safe..
Shagun will also safe in some where..

How these love birds accept a little child in their life.how their parents will react?
How they take a child responsibility?
Bcoz ishra are still young and they are not independent..:-)

waiting for next, how u take this plot:-)

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rufana

@rufana10

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#73

interesting update
that woman is shagun and her daughter is ruhi i guess
d child is their responsibility now...how will they handle her😊
update soon

u didn't pm me😭...plz pm me when u will update next parts
of this story😊

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Sonal

@...Forever...

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Hey Prabh, new new new...

Read all 3 parts in one go..

Prologue: It was nice, forcing the readers to think about the new twists coming up.

Chapter 1: Loved the two's bickering. But who are they? The man was Raman and the woman was _______. Please fill in the blanks. Confused. 😕

Chapter 2: Still confused. And you made a new entry. Now who is she? But, one doubt, in one sentence, you wrote " 'Listen who are they?' Ishita asked." This depicts that the girl with Raman in the car was Ishita, but then you didn't write any sentence which would clarify that girl with Raman was actually Ishita. And this new woman with her daughter, the way you described Raman's thoughts about her and her appearance, it seems like this woman is Ishita. And at last you wrote "Raman wanted to something for her, help her. But then, it was too late." What does this mean? I am hell confused. Please clear it as soon as possible. But there is one thing about which I am not confused, actually not one but two. First, that the little girl, the mysterious woman's daughter is none other than Ruhi. And second, that you write absolutely beautiful. I really love your writings.

P.S.- Please add me to the pm list.😊

Edited by Ishra_Sona - 10 years ago

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sireesha76

@sireesha76

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

interesting story

i think the little girl is ruhi?

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Anamika

@Impossible.Girl

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

God Donno how many res

count this also

Res

Unres...

Probably this is my fastest unreserval 😆
I think Abha's right...
That kid's Ruhi and girl whom Raman loves is Ishita
I think, Ishita will not be ready to drop the kid in orphanage...
So, it would turn out as IshRaRu adventure
just a silly guess of mine, ignore if wrong 😳

so now question is who and why were people in car behind the woman and her family...
Answer it soon
Bhaiyya... Lolll
hmm... Eager to know what happens next
Continuen soon

Edited by vidya_prasad - 10 years ago

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usaonly

@usaonly

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Prabh I did not get Pm for this story when you update. 😭😭 This is different from what I thought about Ishra I was thinking about young couple journey but never think will be twist ion the way of their journey are they going back home with baby and who will get her.is that new women is Shagun and she will all the way to this story or just few part oh Ho I had so many question right. So the best thing is please continue update and please Pm me when you update dear.🤗

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996541

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Eshabi
owsome.
fantastic...but still confusion is there..who is this girl?
concept is very nice...
mixture of comedy, romance and drama.
continue soon.

Thank you! The girl was revealed here, but will be more clear in the next one! And glad you like the concept! Will be updating soon!

Originally posted by: softyy
its nice yaar
please send me pm for every work of yours
I love your writings

Thank you! Will PM you for the next update! Thanks again for liking my writing!

Originally posted by: Lavi_961
heya... 😊
it was a gud update... 👏
jz came across the story nw...
really luking forward to this story... really a different plot... 👍🏼
please continue soon... 😊 ❤️

Thank you so much! Glad you like the story and concept so far! Will be updating soon!

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996541

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: --abha--
Superb prabh!!!
Okay letme guess, since u always keep shagun positive (not negative atleast)...so women with child is shagun who handed over Ruhi to Ishitaa and Raman...

Since Lady with Raman was so kind that she invite problem by taking the girl and obviously Raman will love Ishitaa no matter whatt the case may be...and nok jhok is typical Ishra...

Am I right?Sry If wrong guess...

I like whole Raman characterisation and i know u always make us fall in love with ur Raman...

Continue Soon...
Intrested to know what follows next...

Thank you so much! You have a very good guess! And just letting you know, this is a very cliched type of story, so I'm sure you will figure out the plot quickly! Glad you're liking this Raman, let's see if that continues though! Will be updating soon!

P.S The woman's identity has already been revealed!😆

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996541

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: janani_divan
Prabh ..:-)
Your story never complete with shagun;->
and ruhi tag?
I thought u come with fresh story without ruhi and shagun:-O

dont get me wrong..i expect it is a full masti and a teenage love story..
O that women shagun i think and little baby ruhi...

Raman loves ishita..atlast the trio safe..
Shagun will also safe in some where..

How these love birds accept a little child in their life.how their parents will react?
How they take a child responsibility?
Bcoz ishra are still young and they are not independent..:-)

waiting for next, how u take this plot:-)

LOL, you really don't want Shagun here do you?

I mentioned in the beginning it's an IshRaRu story, so Ruhi will be there for sure, but is it necessary that Shagun needs to be Ruhi's mom all the time? And this is a less emotional story and it will have masti in it, but I did add Ruhi into it! Maybe I'll write something else only on IshRa and a teenage-ish story! And Raman does like Ishita here and shows interest in her so let's see how that goes, and for now they are all safe!

You do have good questions and they all be answered slowly in the coming updates!