IshRa FF - Ruined or Reformed || DISCONTINUED|| Note on Page 19 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Hey everyone! I'm here with the tinest update I have ever written, but here it is anyways...


Chapter 1 - A Simple Ride

The quiet forested street was covered by the dark sky and twinkling stars. A black Mercedes that disrupted the peace of the street as it zoomed at a fast pace. Inside a young man and woman sat in the quiet car as the radio played out the weather forecast.

"Raman, what is this boring stuff you're listening to? Put on some romantic songs." The woman complained crossing her arms and attempting to change the radio channel.

"No! You have your phone, so listen to your Arijit and Sonu Nigam songs on there. I have no interest in any of that."

"You have no interest in anything nice."

"I have interest in you. Now that's nice." He whispered quietly to himself as he smirked and she heard him mumbling something to himself.

"Why are you talking to yourself? I'm here to talk to!" she exclaimed mocking anger.

"I was just pitying myself for being stuck with a bore like you for 3 whole days."

"FYI, you're the real bore here."

"And how is that?" he raised his eyebrows as he bit his lips.

"Because when you go on a camping trip, you don't spend most of the time driving. And you certainly don't listen to the news station."

"Arre, I need to know how the weather and traffic is going to be. And we are just driving to my friend's house and will leave the car there. Relax and no romantic music in my car please! It's so annoying."

"Urgh! You're annoying." She leaned over pretending to strangle him. He took one hand off the steering wheel and ended up trying to push back her hands and the two pushed each other hands back and forth and he looked her way for a few seconds to make her stop...

"Stop this right now, I'm driving!"

"I won't! I will keep on annoying you until we get to your weird friend's house because you're being boring and not talking to me!"

"Stop or else I will have to do things my way!"

"How is your way?"

"Don't you watch movies, the heroine doesn't shut up and then bam! Hero kisses her!"

"Raman, you...a hero?! Joke of the century!"

"Excuse me?! Did you see how those girls were looking at me when I stopped at the gas pump?"

"You know what?! You...you're just..."

She slapped his hand away and he leaned over to her and grabbed her hand. She attempted to free her hand from his making him look her way as he drove with his free hand and his eyes fixed on her. He looked at her annoyed pout that he found to be one of the cutest things he had seen. He was so lost in her and his trance was broken by her voice yelling out to him as she looked away from him turning towards the road...

"Raman! Look out!

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That was all, please like and comment! I know it was short, but next one will be longer for sure! And please do comment whether you would like PMs for this one...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Amazing update prabh!!!!
Bahut chotu h par...

I am confused who is the girl with raman...plz tell me ishita he h...
I don't want anyone else...

Waiting to see more...
Update soonish
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Hayee raam...yeh update shuru hote hi khatam hogaya
Res

--Edited--

Hmm...very interesting part Smile
par I'm still not clear with the girl who's with raman
Looking forward for further parts
Pm me please
Continue soon
Edited by vidya_prasad - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Awesome part..hey both are friends right..raman loves ishita?:-)
o whole gang is going to trip:-(
chotu update prabh:-(
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Very interesting update ...waiting for d next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Yaar nice story
Continue both ur stories
Will be there always to read ur story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: --abha--

Amazing update prabh!!!!
Bahut chotu h par...

I am confused who is the girl with raman...plz tell me ishita he h...
I don't want anyone else...

Waiting to see more...
Update soonish

Thank you so much! And I know this one is small, but I wanted to update this and this was all I could write in the time I had! And about the girl with Raman, let's wait until the next update to see who this girl is, maybe she's Ishita, Shagun, or someone else😉😆. Will update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: vidya_prasad

Hayee raam...yeh update shuru hote hi khatam hogaya

Res

--Edited--

Hmm...very interesting part Smile
par I'm still not clear with the girl who's with raman
Looking forward for further parts
Pm me please
Continue soon

LOL I know, you can probably read this update in a blink of an eye!😆

But thank you for liking this ant sized update! And you've started calling me Smile, nice! You will have to wait until the next update to see who the girl with Raman is, whether she is Ishita, Shagun, or someone else...And will PM you for the next parts! Thanks for the comment and will update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: janani_divan

Awesome part..hey both are friends right..raman loves ishita?:-)
o whole gang is going to trip:-(
chotu update prabh:-(

Thank you so much! The woman and Raman are friends and Raman seems to like this girl. Now whether this girl is Ishita or not is yet to be revealed! So far only Raman and the girl are going on the trip. I know this was a small part, next one will be longer for sure! Thanks for the comment!

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