IshRa FF - Ruined or Reformed || DISCONTINUED|| Note on Page 19 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: sudhajo

Amazing start...looking forward...

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: ishracool

Very interesting update ...waiting for d next...

Thank you so much! Will update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: super_cutie

Yaar nice story

Continue both ur stories
Will be there always to read ur story

Thank you so much! Will update at least one of the stories really soon! And glad to know you will be here to read my stories!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Nice start Prabh with the naughty and cute fight. I am sure this long drive the girl with Raman will not be Ishu guess from prologue cause they start journey together fron opposite direction so they have to meet some day. Waiting for next update. please continue look promising story.Have agreat weekend dear.🤗🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: usaonly

Nice start Prabh with the naughty and cute fight. I am sure this long drive the girl with Raman will not be Ishu guess from prologue cause they start journey together fron opposite direction so they have to meet some day. Waiting for next update. please continue look promising story.Have agreat weekend dear.🤗🤗

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the little banter between them! Let's see if this girl is Ishita or someone else. And who the "she" from the prologue is we will see in the next update! Thank you for the comment and liking this story so far! And hope you have a great weekend as well!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: smilesforever98


Thank you so much! And I know this one is small, but I wanted to update this and this was all I could write in the time I had! And about the girl with Raman, let's wait until the next update to see who this girl is, maybe she's Ishita, Shagun, or someone else😉😆. Will update soon!


Confusion theek h but plz let her be ishita mujhse shagun or raman bear nhi hote...or raman in love with her to bilkul bhi nhi...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: --abha--


Confusion theek h but plz let her be ishita mujhse shagun or raman bear nhi hote...or raman in love with her to bilkul bhi nhi...

Don't worry confusion will be cleared soon and I know no one can bear Shagun and Raman! But it is possible the matter is something else and it is also possible the girl is someone else all together, so just have to wait and see who this mystery girl is...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67

Chapter 2 - Change of Plans

He applied the brake immediately as she yelled out his name. The car halted and the two were jerked by the sudden movement hitting their heads on the dashboard and steering wheel.

"Oh God! You're a crazy woman! Why did you yell?!" He rubbed his forehead which was now throbbing with pain.

"Can you not see?" She held her own forehead pointing to the front.

There was a woman standing mere inches away from their car. She had her face turned away scared of the blinding lights that came her way. In her arms, she carried a small girl whose face she had covered with her hand.

"Did we hit her?!" He suddenly became worried seeing the woman's clothes with stains of blood.

"I don't know!" She yelled back.

"My life sucks! First I got stuck with you and now this!" He smacked his hand on the steering wheel and pulled it back wincing in pain.

"Raman! They could be hurt and you! Urgh! " She opened the door frustrated with him.

He followed her out of the car and over to the terrified woman. She was trembling in fear and stepping back from them as they tried to ask her anything. Raman took noticed of the woman's appearance. Clad in blue saree that had been ripped in some places and her hands were also covered in blood, her long black hair was a mess and she was wearing one earring as the other was gone. Her hair partition filled with smeared sindoor. Her arms had scratches all over them and her face showed fatigue as she seemed close to fainting. He stood near the woman in case she fell as she was also carrying a child and had been visibly though a lot.

"Are you okay?" she asked concerned for the two as she gave Raman a glare for his driving.

"Listen I'm really sorry for this, we can drive you to a hospital if you like." Raman said in a softer tone genuinely worried about this woman.

The woman moved back from the two scared and kept her daughter near her protectively. Knowing something had happened to her, they could understand she was scared and continuously tried to tell her that they weren't going to hurt her and just wanted to help. Finally she said something when they heard loud cars coming by the end of the road. They were far away, but fast and would easily reach them in 2 minutes. The young woman panicked upon seeing the cars and turned to Raman...

"Bhaiyya please help me!"

"Bhaiyya? Me and the word Bhaiyya-"

"Raman! We aren't at any party, this is serious. Act maturely!" She scolded him for his stupid behaviour.

"I'm sorry about him. What's happened and what help do you need?"

"They...they will come! Help me!" She said in between looking back and forth between the cars and them.

"Who will come?" Raman yelled at her in frustration.

"They took my husband and now they want me and my daughter!" The woman was now crying an

"Listen who is they?!"Ishita asked the terrified woman gently and calmly.

"Them!" She pointed to the cars that were almost near them now. Raman saw the people coming near them and then back at the two women in front of them who kept on looking at the people rushing towards them terrified.

"Why are you all staring at them?! Run!" He yelled at them.

"Please go! Take her!" The injured woman asked them wanting to hand over her daughter to them.

"Where?!" Raman was perplexed.

"Please just take her anywhere. Leave her anywhere, but just take her." The woman begged the two people in front of them.

"What am I going to do with her?!" Raman said frustrated with everything happened and looked at his friend for help as the woman continued...

"After you take her, she will be a mother less child, so put her in an orphanage or leave her anywhere else, but just take her away from them! I beg of you!"

Raman knew exactly what would happen. And he was right, the woman's daughter would now be travelling with them since his genius friend took the sleeping girl from her mother's arm.

"Come on Raman!" she ordered him.

"But-" He wanted to protest against what seemed like a really bad idea to him, but she was mad at his behaviour now. She was fed up of his attitude and took his hand trying to drag him.

"Let's go!" She shouted at him. Having never seen her like this ever, he had no choice but to follow what she said. But as they ran to their car, he kept on looking back at the woman who ran in another direction to save her life and divert the people away from her child. He wanted to do something for her, help her, but then it was too late, she had run off too far and they were now in their car with her daughter in their car with them...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
owsome.
fantastic...but still confusion is there..who is this girl?
concept is very nice...
mixture of comedy, romance and drama.
continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
Superb prabh!!!
Okay letme guess, since u always keep shagun positive (not negative atleast)...so women with child is shagun who handed over Ruhi to Ishitaa and Raman...

Since Lady with Raman was so kind that she invite problem by taking the girl and obviously Raman will love Ishitaa no matter whatt the case may be...and nok jhok is typical Ishra...

Am I right?Sry If wrong guess...

I like whole Raman characterisation and i know u always make us fall in love with ur Raman...

Continue Soon...
Intrested to know what follows next...
Edited by --abha-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
its nice yaar
please send me pm for every work of yours
I love your writings

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