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Posted: 10 years ago

Hello everyone! I am trying to write a ff...this is sort of my 2nd time writing something. It is sort of a Mystery-Thriller-Romance FF...so this FF is not based of the show. The only similarities are the name of the characters...even the personalities are quite different. So here it goes!

Characters (4 main girls who are best friends):

Ishita Iyer- She is the care-free, free-spirited girl that speaks her mind. She comes from a middle class family. Lives with her Amma and Appa, her father is a professor at her college. Currently in her last year in college with the rest of her friends.

Vasudha Raisinghania- The most mature of the group, but is very kind and caring towards others. Comes from a rich family, but is still a down to earth girl who is fun loving and cheerful. She lives with her dad, mom passed away when she was a kid.

Mihika Malik- Loves to party, is loud, and all the boys are after her. The girl you cant bring home to your parents. Mihikas parents are divorced, she lives with her mom who is too busy working. Despite what she puts on. She is still a loving girl that can do anything for her friends.

Neha Handa- comes from a middle class family, she is raised by her aunt and uncle after her parents died in car crash. She is quite similar to Vasudha personality wise, but has traits of Ishita as well.

Setting: Mumbai

(As for who will the male leads will be for these girls, will be revealed as the story continues, but ofc Ishita will be with Raman)

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PROLOGUE

"Nooo Nooo Noo we cant do this guys, maybe we should call the cops". "I am sure there is a way out of this!"

Mihika: "Are you insane Neha! Its to late to call the cops...we have no time, lets just bury the body"

Vasudha: "This just doesn't feel right...we cant get away with this"!

Ishita: "This is all my fault...you guys should just leave, I will take the blame"

Mihika- "No...we are in this together, we all did this"

Vasudha-"she is right...we have to stick together"

Neha- "Okay fine...lets just start digging, the sun is about to go up soon"

(The girls start digging the grave...there eyes were red, hearts beating fast. They finally manage to dump the body in the grave, by the time they were done, they were covered in dirt, and exhausted)

(The girls looked at each other..not knowing what to say, everything has happened so fast, they didn't even have the chance to catch their breath.)

Neha- "We have to leave now, before someone sees us!"

Vasudha- "Yeah lets leave"

(They gathered up in a huddle, walking arm in arm...as they were walking Ishita looked back one more time...she whispered to herself "I am sorry Raman")

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Chapter 1: The Nightmares

*********** 4 YEARS LATER ***********

Ishitas POV

I woke up screaming, there was sweat dripping down my forehead. It was the same nightmare I had for four years...that day I can never forget in my life...it was the day that changed all our lives. I looked at the clock, it was 3:05 A.M. I had to get up for work in 5 hours, but somehow I was afraid to sleep, it was as if whenever I close my eyes, I go back to that dark day...the day keeps repeating in my dreams. I got up from bed, and tip-toed down the kitchen for glass of water. As I sat down on the kitchen table, I noticed the bunch of photos hanged on the wall of me, amma, and appa. The photos seemed years ago, I was no longer that person in the photo. Everything had changed...she was no longer as close to her parents. They always try asking me whats wrong, but I can never tell them , soon they also gave up asking. I finished my water, and went back upstairs. I fluffed up my pillow, and went back to bed.

I woke up to the sun shining in my eyes, it felt painful to open my eyes. All I wanted was to stay in bed forever. I looked at the alarm clock, it was 7:50 am. I had to wake up in 10 min. Sometimes It felt like I was forever carrying a heavy rock in my shoulder, the burden which sometimes became unbearable to take. I finally found the courage to get up, and hit the shower.

When I got out I noticed there was 10 miss calls on my phone from Mihika, she had also sent several messages. I opened it up it read "Meet up at Aussies cafe , ASAP".

I don't why, but for some reason my heart started to feel heavy, I quickly got dressed and rushed to meet them.

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Dilshika

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Posted: 10 years ago

Woh. ..It looks interesting. ...waiting for update!

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..TeriDeewani..

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Posted: 10 years ago

Its really intrstin...
Plzz do continue...

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Sreelakshmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

Omg... Itzzz very interesting...

Raman ghost... ??!!!!

Waiting...

Continue soon...

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Indhu

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Posted: 10 years ago

interesting start
pls continue soon

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Chapter 2 :The New Guy

Ishita's POV

I saw Neha, Mihika, and Vasudha hurdle up together at very last table near the corner. There eyes had fear in them, I took a deep breath and walked in.

Ishitas- "Hey guys, whats going on, I have work in 20 min, I cant be late"

No one spoke for a few seconds, this increased my anxiety. Kya baat hai"? I asked impatiently. Vasudha started to look through her bag, she pulled out a note folded up.

Vasudha- "I found this note on my door step this morning"

I grabbed the note, and quickly opened, it read " I know everything"- R. My heart stopped, I dropped the note on the table as if it was burning my hand. I didn't know what to say.

Mihika quickly grabbed the note, and shoved it in her bag. "Guys relax, im sure yeh koi Mazak hai".

Neha-"Tum itni sure kaise ho sakthe ho"? I don't know guys, What if someone knows what we did?

Vasudha- " noo...no body saw us that night, there is no evidence we were there" "Ishu, say something!"

Truthfully, I didn't know what to say, I looked at their faces, there were hoping I would say something helpful, but I had nothing.

Ishita-" I think mihika is right, lets just ignore the note, Its probably some prank...besides there are so many people in this town whos name starts with R..it doesn't mean its...him. That's impossible". For some reason I could not even say his name, it felt to difficult to pronounce.

Vasudh- " Youre right, its been 4 years, if someone knew they would have come out already" "Why wait this long"?

We were all quite for a while, and finally mihika said something.

Mihika- "Hum aaj raat ko dinner pe milte hai..i am getting late for now"

Neha- " Yeah, okay, I have to go as well, bye guys"

I sat with Vasudha for a while trying to talk about normal girl stuff, I asked how her new job at the news paper company was going, but I had to leave for work.

Ishita- "Okay, I will see you at dinner tonight? Will catch up later"

Vasudh- "Yeah okay, bye"

Vasudha's POV

I sat by myself for a while, as much as I tried to distract myself, my mind kept going towards that note. I drank one more coffee cup, and got up to leave.

As I turned around, I bumped straight into this guy, his tea falling over my dupatta. " oh god, I am so sorry, I didn't see you coming".

I was about to look up with anger, ready to blast at this idiot, but my heart stopped when I saw him. He was tall, dark and handsome. It felt too obvious I was blushing. "No its fine"

"By the way, I am Sushant..Sushant Sharma" He raised his hand towards me, I shaked it with my shaking hand. "Hi, Vasudha here"

Sushant- "well nice to meet you"

His phone started to ring "umm I have to go, but again sorry for coffee"

He rushed out, I just stood there, smiling like an idiot for few minutes. After a long time, something started to feel right. I looked at the time, and realized I was late for work, I quickly grabbed my bag and rushed out.

When I got to the office, everyone was pretty quite, I asked my friend priya what is going on.

Priya- "Don't ask yaar, our new boss is here" "New boss?" I asked surprised.

Priya- "Yeahh,, sir ka beta!, bahut mean hai, he wants everything different, btw, youre late today! And he hates people who are late. He is waiting for you, take these files as while."

She shoved the file in my hands and left quickly, I let out a sighh..and just when I thought something good was happening. I knocked on the door, and went in. His back was to me, "Sir", he turned around. We were both shocked to see each other, it was Sushant, the guy from the coffee shop!

Ishita's POV

At Dinner that Night

I entered the restaurant, and found Vasu there first, She was day dreaming about something. I walked over and sat next to her, snapping my fingers.

Ishita-"Heyy, what happened?"

Vasudha-"Hain..nahi kuch nahi"

Ishita- "Then why are you smiling so much?" "I teased her for a while, until she finally confessed.

For few minutes, it felt like we had normal lives, normal things to talk about.

Vasudha- " I mean, he is still my boss, but I don't know, there is something about him that attracts me. I barley know the guy, but I feel different about him"

Ishita- "hmmm...sounds like love to me"

We both stated to laugh slightly, I felt happy for her, after everything that has happened, we deserved some peace.

Vasudha- "btw.. did you ever hear from Aryan"?

I became quite for few seconds, the name made me go back to that night.

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..TeriDeewani..

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Posted: 10 years ago

Interesting...the story seems vry much promising...
Can u jst give Vasudha,Neha,Sushant n other characters to b introduced a face...

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Originally posted by: crazy_neha
Interesting...the story seems vry much promising...
Can u jst give Vasudha,Neha,Sushant n other characters to b introduced a face...

well, i kept that open to who ever the readers want to imagine them selves , that way they can picture there favorite couple. :)