Call Me Irresistible - Ishra TS [Part 3 - Page 10]

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sidivyapall

@sidivyapall

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Anuhyaa

Ha ha...Sai, still pushing...

Iam not that good a writer, so if I extend it further you will msg me to stop...😉

Yaar, karna padta hai... show mein BKT ke ilava kuch aur milta nahi 😆

Psssh stop downplaying your talent, girl! I may bombard your inbox either way if my demands aren't met now (j/k I won't... maybe 😛)

However, if you can't continue this, I expect to read other things from you! 😳

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Anuhyaa

@Anuhyaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: paru_rox
Anu 🤗

Read both the parts and what a beautiful story. I loved how you highlighted their emotions. Both have their insecurities and both need to talk to each other.

The Girls night out was so fun. I truly wish they would show such light moments in the show.

I hope you are going to post another part Anu. No ending it here please.

PS - You watching the show & Dubbu's 2% ??

Paru... 🤗

I was planning to give you two days, and then hound you...Thank God you read it before that...😉😆

Thank you girl...

Yeah, planning to write another part...Hope I don't fall flat on my face...😛

Yup, Still watching the show...But whenever Dubbu comes, Iam fwding it...so sadly I get to see only 1% of his talent... 😃

Which idiots idea was it to bring this Dubbu for revenge track on Bhallas...You should do a Cvs thing on that...😊

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Anuhyaa

@Anuhyaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: shalz_123
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I m so sorry Anu for commenting so late... aaw poor raman...he is also insecure.. gadha khahike... when will they learn to talk to each other.. aaw lovley song and we are going to have a romantic dance..yaaay yaaay yaay/..

loved it..

Hey Shalz...

Thank you...

No problem at all...As long as you read & enjoy it...😊

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Mehak Ashraf

@Mehak_KPian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Awesome. Good Raman talked with Bala. The end was amazing. Raman putting on the song making her comfortable. Continue soon.

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Sunita

@avni_19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

wahh wahhh! awesummm updateee aur kya ganaa select kia apne! Awesummm!

Cont soon..looking forward!

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sky-if

@sky-if

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Nice! Much better advise from Bala here than you know.. throwing the 'ahem' at biwi:)

Slow dance Waiting for the two to spill out why they've been waiting so long.. is it going to be talli(is she? how loaded was the coke?) biwi first or puttar?

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sidivyapall

@sidivyapall

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Anu, I stalked your old posts and found your OTHER stories...??? What a pleasant surprise it was for me! I regret not finding them earlier though. You write really well! (My fave is "dream a little dream") :D

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janani

@janani_divan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Wow anu...:-)
pleasant upate..:-)
raman insecurities are clearly visible..:-)

y dnt cvs try this in show..
Brilliantly u written..:-)

Bala,no wonders he always a person to clear the doubts.

Thank u so much for pm ...

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

So incredibly sorry for being late Anu life has been busy

I loved the glimpse you have given here into an insecure, vulnerable Raman - the way Ishita' shyness and hesitance which are owing to her own securities with herself and the very notion of disappointing him she might inadvertently be bringing back his own demons - lovely, simply lovely there Anu, a masterstroke...if only we could have seen something like this on the show but instead we are being subjected to torture 😭😭😭

Wanna see how you take this forward and I doubt this will remain a TS, if you manage to keep it so, it will be something - something tells me this is on its way to becoming an SS - even if not a very long one - maybe another 1 or 2 parts to go, but a SS nonetheless 😳 and trust me if that happens I will be one happy customer 😃