Abhishek-Mihika SS: Humari Adhuri Kahaani(ch1-pg1)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello again... I know mere kuch stories ke updates pending hai,but,cant stop myself drooling on the ACP. Well,CVs have planned to pair Mihika with him,so a little story on them on the possible future tracks based on some spoilers. Totally,my imagination.

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Prologue:

''Ab humare bich sab khatam hochuka hai,Abhishek.'' Mihika replied,with hot tears flowing from her eyes.

''Mihika,meri baat toh sunlo ekbar please. Maine aisa kyun iski wajah toh jaanlo.'' (he forwards his hand to wipe her tears).

''Chup..ekdum chup... (jerks his hand away) mujhe chhoone ki koshish mat karna. Wajah aur kya hogi? Uss namakharam Subbu ke saath milke mere Ishu akka aur Raman jiju ki zindagi barbaad kardi.. Uss gunaah ki saza tumne Raman jiju ko di jo unhone nahi ki hai.. Mere Ishu akka ki jeevan ko tehes nehas kardia tumne. Badla lena chahte thhe,toh,mujhse lete. Abhi abhi toh Raman jiju aur Ishu akka ke darmiyaan pyaar ki kaliyaan khili thhi ki tumne usse jaar se mitana chaha. Chhi.. Sharam aati hai tumhe apna pati kehte huye..'' Mihika replies,furiously.

Abhishek realises that what she said was absolutely true. He,indeed,destroyed the lives of Raman and Ishita by accusing him of the crime he never did.

Mihika stands infront of the mirror and tries to wipe off the sindoor and also tries to break the mangalsutra. Everyone,including Ishita and Raman try to put some sense in her mind but all know that Mihika is a very sensitive person when it comes to her relations.

Abhishek saw it and held Mihika's hands,not allowing her to do it. Mihika turned around to see a repentant Abhishek,signalling a NO to her.

''Yeh sindoor mujhe har waqt yeh yaad dilati rahegi ki tumne kis tarha se meri Ishu akka aur Raman jiju ko khoon ke aansu rulaye.. Yeh koi mamuli sindoor nahi hai,yeh mere liye aapka pehnaya hua khoon se sana hua sindoor hai. Aur yeh mangalsutra yeh yaad dilayegi ki kaise aapne humare rishtey ka gala ghhot diya.. Humare rishtey ka faasi ka fanda hai yeh mangalsutra.'' Mihika replied and breaking down,finally.

Abhishek was at a loss of words. He couldnt fathom the damage he did to the Bhalla family and to his wife,Mihika. Whatever she said now,was very true. In his quest for revenge,he hurt those people who loved him like a son.

Not being able to handle all these allegations,he turnd to leave. Before he left,he turned towards Mihika and said, ''Main tumhari maafi zarur leke rahunga,chahe mujhe kuch bhi karna pare.'' and,he left.

So,how was the prologue?
Will start the story really soon.
Do like n comment.

Index:

prologue: pg1.
Ch1-pg1.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting prologue😊😊..I like the way the jodi looks😳..but Im not able to fathom how the CVs are gonna take their story fwd..I just dont want Abhishek turning negative in the serial..😕 We have enough of that alrdy😳 I am curious to know what he did to ISHRA in your story though..please continue..would luv to see how he gets back Miku..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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If spoilers are anything to go by... then I understand the basic crux of your story!

All I hope is that IshRa don't get busy solving & intervening in Abhishek & Miku's life!

Great start dear... the dialogues are too dramatic & heavy for my taste!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello Anika I really like this Jodi and waiting for someone to write story about them. Thanks to you in advance .and I have a request can you please write the dialogue in English transaltion cause I don't know Hindi.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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well done
great beginning
but frankly i dont want this track in show
hope the spoilers are fake
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice..it looks interesting..it will be fun to see how acp will win mihika back..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow the concept looks very nice kerp it up and update soon anika
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ch1.

Misunderstandings between Abhishek and Bhalla family were cleared. Raman and Abhishek became friends again. Abhishek was granted forgiveness from the Iyers' and Bhallas'. Everything was fine and in its place,but,his and Mihika's relaton were stuck at the same place,they way it was. He felt bad but he is the one who brought these differences in their relation.

Toshijee: Hello Abhi dear. How are you? Suddenly you came here. Any problem?

Abhi: Namaste Auntyji. I came here to visit you all. Its been ages since i met all of you. By the way,i came here to meet Mihika. Where is she? (with a sad smile) i know,she doesnt want to talk with me,but i am serious this time. I am really ashamed about what i have with you all in the past and i am repenting every moment for that. In these days,i have ralised that Mihika trusted me a lot and all i did is broke her trust.

Raman(with a smile)- Its ok,Abhishek. Let bygones be bygones. Evrything is fine now and dont worry.. God will help you to get back your love.

Ishita- I completely agree with Raman. (taps her forehead) oh ho. I completely forgot to ask you the reason behind your arrival.

Abhi- Oh sorry! Well,i wanted to meet Mihika because i will be leaving for a secret mission tomorrow,for which,i wanted to meet you all and especially,Mihika. I dont the know the exact duration of this mission and i also dont know whether i will remain alive or not during this mission,thats why.

Raman- Its ok,brother. We can understand and dont you dare say such ominous things. It doesnt suit a Punjaban like you,who is so strong. Like Ishita,your Madrasan will also understand. Go and meet her.

Abhi(hugging Raman)- Thanks Raman. Will see you all in an hour after meeting her.

In Iyer House:

Mihika was in her room talking with her associates about the next wedding planning of a couple. She was very much engrossed in her work that she didnt notice Abhishek entering her room. Before entering her room,Abhi greeted Iyer uncle and Madhu aunty and the old couple blessed Abhi wholeheartedly. Abhi smiled and went towards Mihika's room.

As Mihika finished with her call,she turned around and saw Abhishek standing at the door, thought they had their set of misunderstandings,but,she being the caring and cultered Iyer girl,now a Punjaban's wife,welcomed him in. She did care for Abhi,but,her ego and pain always covered that care and love for him.

Mihika- Abhi,you? When did you come?

Abhi- Just came few moments back. Met Bhalla family and Amma,Appa. (after a pause) How are you?

Mihika(with a faint smile,covering her emotions)- I am ok,busy with so many weddings plannings.. Oh Murugan..

Abhi(with a soft smile yet worried for her)- I can see that you are really tired. Why dont you take care of yourself? Just have a look at yourself.You have become so pale and thin. If i had not been here,you wouldn't have...

Mihika turned her head around to see Abhishek with those caring emotions reflecting in his eyes. Her eyes became teary. Abhishek noticed it.

To evade the topic,Abhishek tossed in the news of his secret mission. Eventually,Mihika became really worried but being the wife of an ACP,she had to be brave enough to face it. For a moment,she thought to leave her ego at bay and hug him tightly and tell him not to go leaving her,but,her mind stopped her from doing so.

Night:

Bhallas' and the Iyers' were having dinner together,today. Abhishek joined them,as well. Everyone was enjoying themselves at the dinner. Suddenly,Abhishek's phone rang and he excused himself and took the call.

After a moment,he went towards the dinner table and apologised to everyone for leaving them midway as an important meeting with the seniors cropped up. Everyone was sad but they understood his work,as well. Mihika went with him and dropped him till his jeep.

Hours went by and there was no news of Abhishek. Mihika tried his cellphone but it was unreachable. Raman and Romi tried their contacts to locate Abhishek,but failed. Ishita was consoling Mihika,who was on the verge of crying and many negative thoughts came in her mind.

Just then,few Inspectors came inside the living room of the conjoined Iyer and Bhalla house with an injured Abhishek. Everyone was really shocked. Mihika ran towards him and hugged him tightly. Abhishek,who was in his senses asked her to remain calm as he is alright. Mihika stopped him and asked him to remain quiet. With the help of those Inspectors,Mihika took Abhishek to her room and asked someone to call a Doctor,as he was injured on the back and head. Mihika copuldnt stop herself from crying and infront of everyone,she hugged Abhishek tightly and cried.

Precap: AbhiKa romance.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it buddy
eager to catch up the further story
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved the update.
Please continue soonish.

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