Ishra TS - Tu Hai Yahin Kahin - COMPLETED

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Mariakhan5

@Mariakhan5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Ruladiya yaar tmne ... superb ..

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996541

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: VENBA
This is just your best TS undoubtedly...
To say the fact i cried while reading this half way..
I was not able to read for few minutes..
I only read after composing myself..
How well you bring emotions in your story..
Its really hard to make one cry just be reading..
Hats of to your writing yaar..👏👏

Thank you so much! This is one of my favourite TS as well! I didn't intend to make anyone cry with my writing because like you said it is very hard to have someone connect so much to a story that they show emotions as well. Am glad you really liked my writing! Means a lot!

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996541

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Mariakhan5
Ruladiya yaar tmne ... superb ..

Thank you so much! Didn't want to make anyone cry!

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sukanksha

@sukanksha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

I read the first part on song osthon

N reading second part now
So Raman is actually no more
That was sad
I don't like sad endings
It was so emotional but still it was sad.

As a writer tremendous job

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Ramya

@The-Heart

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Very Emotional update

You made me cry 😭

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Ruurmi

@Ruurmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Really nice I was thinking of this song for ishra moment ...

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and you did It

Thanks so much ...

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996541

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: sukanksha
I read the first part on song osthon

N reading second part now
So Raman is actually no more
That was sad
I don't like sad endings
It was so emotional but still it was sad.

As a writer tremendous job

I'm sorry, but when I started this TS I had planned to have a sad ending and Raman shown no more, so that's how it worked out. Point noted that you don't like sad endings, will remember that from now on! And thanks for liking the writing!