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UPDATED PART 19
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Hi Kutties...😊
As per popular demand here goes the next part 😳
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Chapter-19

TUJHSE SACH MEIN PYAR HAI




"Isne mujhse jhoot bola ki iski naam Laxmi hai! Agar isne mujhse yeh bhi chupa liya hai toh aur kya-kya chupaya hoga...!"

(She lied that her name is Laxmi! If she his this then don't know what else did she hide!)


He roared at his mothers. The old duo tried to take matters in their hands in futile. Ishita could do nothing but look at Mihika with her teary eyes for support. But she didn't utter a word for her to Raman.


"Sorry akka...yeh Raman Bhalla ke haathon se apko bachane keliye mujhe ab chup rehna padega.." Mihika thought to herself.

(I need to stay mute to save you from this RKB)


Ishita pulled Raman by his wrist and shouted angrily, "Ap mujhse pyar karte ho ya phir meri naam se?"

(You love me or my name?)


He shrugged her off and clutched her face in his hand digging his nail in her cheeks. Coming closer to her he hissed, "Tujhse pyar karti dhi...aur jhoot se nafrat karta hun mein. Aj tak mere zindagi mein sab jhoot dha. Lekin tum bhi usme ek hoga yeh main kabhi nahin socha..."

(I loved you...and hate lies. My life was full of lies till date but I never thought that you'll be one of it...)


"Maine kabhi apse jhoot nahin bola dha...balki sach bolne ka koshish kar rahe dhe..." She said miserably but he cut her short by saying that she would have said it if she wanted to.

(I never lied but tried to say the truth)


Raman glared fisting his hands at the ones who were being just onlookers of the ugly argument.


"Mujhe meri biwi se akele mein baat karna hai..." He said on top of his voice.

(I need to talk to my wife in private)


Everyone dispersed leaving them in privacy. He dropped himself on the sofa crying. He didn't mind her seeing his tears. She was baffled at his reaction. When there were a lot of people he was furious but in privacy he is crying like her. His voice was what broke her trance.


"Papa bhi jhoot bola dha mujhse ki voh mujhe aur mummiji ko lene ayenge. Ab...jhoot jhoot hi raha. And you...you're the first woman in the world with whom I shared my pain. My everything. But you insulted me by not even telling your name."

(Papa also lied that he will come to take me and mom with him. Now...lie is a lie)


He said sadly and raised from there angrily saying, "You insulted Raman Kumar Bhalla...iski saza toh tujhe zaroor milenge..."

(You will get punished for it)


Ishita touched her cheek and patted it softly asking, "I know ap gusse mein hai...Ap bolo kya saza hai mera?"

(I know you're angry. Tell me what's my punishment?)


He was melting in her touch. He has this urge to forgive her and kiss her senseless saying how much he loves her no matter what. But then the "Egoistic Bhalla" in him pulled him back. He took off her loving hand from his face without his heart which she could clearly see.


"Voh...main..."

(That...I...)


He stammered while she closed in. Wounding her hands around his neck she touched his nose with hers. His hands pulled her closer by her waist and rained kisses on her neck. He was out of himself. He didn't know when they ended up in the sofa still in the embrace. He couldn't believe that she is controlling all his senses. Even his anger is under her control which made him get mad at himself. He really wanted to stay away from her. Is that possible?


He released her from his hold and said in a thick voice, "Main bas tere saath ek raath gusarna chaha. Ab mera wish puri bhi hogayi. Marriage commitment was just a promise. Uska matlab yeh nahin dha ki main tere alava koyi aur aurat ko nahin chuenge. I hope you understand...Tum raho ya nah raho...I don't care. You can't control Raman Bhalla!"

(I just wanted to spend a night with you. Now my wish is fulfilled___that doesn't mean that I won't touch anyone other than you. I don't care if you stay or not)


She got up all shattered and looked on in disbelief. He shook his head sheepishly peeking at her. His eyes darted downwards to hide his real feelilngs. She didn't stay a second more. Left him behind ! He won again...but this time...he felt it was better he could lose...to win her!


AT NIGHT

Raman felt restless thinking about Ishita. He paced inside the room for sometimes and got out to get someone who can make him feel better. He drove to the home were he had visited a lot of times before to get over his frustration. The woman there always made him refreshed.


She opened the door for him in the late night. Needless to say who she is. He hugged her and rained some kisses on her face. Muttering a "Come fast..."he walked to the room.


"Mamu..." She came calling him the way Ishita calls him. What else is needed to irritate him!


"Please yaar...don't call me that." He showed indifference.


She giggled seeing his irritated face burning in anger. Coming closer she touched his shoulder. He pulled her even closer by locking his hands around her waist. Looking deeply in his passionate eyes, she repeated, "Mamu..."


His grip loosened hearing it again. He pushed her down on the bed angrily but careful enough not to hurt her. He stood at the windowpane frustrated. She stealthily came from behind and hugged him tight. Shrugging her hands away he moved to the balcony. She followed suit with a naughty glint.


Sitting on a corner of the floor he stared at the door to see if she is coming to cajole him. After a longing ten minutes she came there wearing a mango yellow transparent saree. She walked to him seductively and stood next to him. He looked at her hungrily, his face close to her tempting waist. Her silky smooth skin and all her curves are visible to his wild eyes through the sheer fabric. He couldn't hold back but pull her down and kiss her senseless. She asked huskily when he rained kisses all over her, "Apni biwi ke paas nahin jaana hai kya Raman?"

(Don't you want to go to your wife Raman?)


"Sirf naam ki biwi hai meri...! Ab tum aao isse pehale ki mera nasha chal jaye...!"

(Wife for name's sake! Now you come!)


Ishita fell down from the bed with a thud. She looked around wiping the sweat beads. She couldn't understand why in the world she saw such a dirty dream. Maybe it was her insecurity born out of his words. She was really worried if her marital life will be for name's sake. She couldn't think of him touching someone else. The dream made her restless.


She came out of her room to take a jug of water. Amma and Mihika looked at her; amma with teary and Mihika with apologetic eyes. She didn't talk to anyone from when she come home. Especially Mihika! She was mad at Mihika for completely spoiling her life with her prank. She couldn't understand why Mihika didn't support her when she needed her so much.


Raman on the otherhand was feeling guilty for behaving so badly with her. He needed a good advice. Toshi had lectured him on marriage and the seven vows which he patiently heard. But he needed someone to look from his perspective. That someone was his best friend. Yes, Abhi is the one who knows everything about him and always was a helping hand. He went to Abhi's home to open up on the matter.


ABHI'S HOME


Raman entered the open patio of the house warmly welcomed by Abhi's parents. He out of habit walked to Abhi's room and stopped on the doorway hearing him talking to someone about Ishita.


"Yaar Mihika...joh hua soh hua. Ab tumhe un donon ke beech rift banana nahin chahiye."

(Whatever happened has happened. Now you should not create rift between them)


"I know Raman is sort of a playboy. But he loves her. And..."


"Yeh saare problems tumne create kiya hai...You should at least think about Ishu. She loves him."

(You're the one who created all these problems)


"Ishu was always afraid of this situation. Tumhare ek prank ki vajha se uski zindagi barbad hogi"

(Her life will be spoiled because of your one prank)


"I know tum Ishu aur Raman ko alag karna chahte hai..lekin tumhe Ishu ki happiness ke baare mein bhi sochna chahiye"

(I know you want them to be separated. But you should once think about Ishu's happiness)


"Haan I still love her. But you know what...agar Ishu itna kuch jaanne ke baad bhi Raman ko apnana chahte hai toh...she mightbe inso much love"

(If Ishu want to stay with him even after knowing about his character ___)


"Tum pagal jaise baat karna band karo aur Raman se kaho ki tune Ishu ko apni naam batane se rokhadha...Tumne Raman se revenge lene keliye apni behan ka istemal kiyadha. And you should understand the situation that he is not the reason for Mihir's..."

(Stop talking made and let Raman know that you're the one who stopped her from telling her name. You used Ishu to take revenge from Raman)


"This is not happening. I'm done with it. Mujhe mera friend aur Ishu ki happiness important hai. They are meant to be. You should accept it."

(My friend's and Ishu's happiness is important to me)


Raman didn't wait to meet Abhi. He got all his answers or to say he didn't has any doubts now. His anger and ego is out of the question. Everything is meaningless. He drove home crazily to meet her. It was late night. He was feeling a kind of relief, happiness that it was not her entire fault. He remembered how she tried to talk it out, but he was the one stopped her.


Now he understood Mihika's aim. To destroy him both mentally and physically. She shamelessly used his attraction towards Ishita for her purpose. She changed her name and sucessfully used it in her favour. He was astonished at Mihika's courage and menacing nature to avange him. He couldn't even think about the situation when he leaves Ishita on this trifle matter. What would have happened if he didn't overheard Abhi?


He stopped the car in front of Ishita's home. After taking a deep breath he rang the calling bell. Madhavi opened the door after a good ten minutes. He was restlesly pacing in the sitout when she opened the door.


"Raman kanna...ne inke? Kya hua? Ab raat mein...?" She tried to grasp the reason behind his visit after such a great drama.

(You here? What happened? This late night?)


"Amma...I'm sorry...voh...actually...mujhe Ishita se sorry bolna hai..." He said without facing her.

(I need to say sorry to Ishita)


"Kal aana kanna. Ab voh tensed hai. Aur...kisise baat nahin kiya...kal shayad tikh hoga...toh tum..." She said pointing the logic.

(Cone tomorrow. She is tensed now. Didn't talk to anyone. She will be alright tomorrow... So you...)


"But mujhe meri biwi se abhi milna hai. Dekhta hun kaise nahin baat karta mujhse."

(But I want to talk to my wife now. I'll see how she won't talk to me)


Saying that he walked in straight to Ishita's room leaving behind a pleasantly shocked amma. She followed him to help him out to cajole "his biwi". He was staring at the door rubbing his chin when she reached. He gestured her to call Ishita. She obeyed her son in law but Ishita shouted at her to let her be alone in peace. Amma tried her level best but couldn't do anything.


Finally Raman cleared his throat to start his effort to make her open the door. His soft coughing made her feel that he is there. He softly knocked the door without talking anything. She was silent. Amma left them in privacy while Raman leaned over the door and kept on knocking without knowing that she had already opened it for him.


TO BE CONTINUED...



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Edited by maduragymhasium - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank god koyi twist nahi dala yaar raman ko to pata chal gayana Ishita ka sach I am so happy and wat is dis with mihika?? Revenge keliye kuch bhi karegi kya??? Apni hi behen ki kushi ka kyaal nahi hein vusko I hate her bt may be she has her own reasons for it
Par ab agla update jaldi dedo I want to see how dey will patch up plz plzz
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ishita ka dream ne tho sabko pareshan kar diya...

finally raman go to knw evry thng...

atleast uska gussa tho shaant hua...

i hop he manofy her...

thanks fr double update...


nxt update kab milegi...?

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