SS___MANNMARZIYAN___Part-22 Pg-126 PART-23 PAGE 136 updated - Page 37

Originally posted by: pretty_h

wow awesome read from 9 to 11 love each part well done im a big fan of you well write

why raman has change thx for pms too

OMG...my fan and you...
I'm glad Hansa 😳
But I'm senior... I'm the one who become a fan in the first place (YOURS) 😉

Aww, loving the changing RKB. Their moments were sweet. Precap. 😆 you again left me curious. I want to know Mihika's reaction continue soon.

Originally posted by: ..Mehak..

Aww, loving the changing RKB. Their moments were sweet. Precap. 😆 you again left me curious. I want to know Mihika's reaction continue soon.

Hero should change to good cause nah... 😉
I thought of completing MiShu convo...
But then...
I need to add Ishu's POV also...
You know nah...Ishu's POV always tells more 😳
So it will be in next update 😃

thank u for giving us a glimpse of this decent kumar
instead of lewd kumar😉
loved raman-toshiji convo
update soon dear

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

OMG...my fan and you...
I'm glad Hansa 😳
But I'm senior... I'm the one who become a fan in the first place (YOURS) 😉

haha ha that does'nt matter even you are senior . I dont care about senior or what ever if your works I likt it so I become her fan too

im glad you r my fan too

Originally posted by: janani_divan

First thanks for pm:-)

this update is the reason for my lack of sleep in early morning:->:->
what u r planning AUTHOR SAIBA?

R U PLANNING TO TURN MY LUST KUMAR IN TO SACRIFIES KUMAR.?:->:-/:-(

COMING TO POINT:
Y U SUDDENLY BRING HIS FATHER ?Y U STOP HIS LOVE CONFESSTION?we want to wait for damaka?

raman thoughts preoccupied by his father..it was noticed by his mother.she very well known his weird actions :-(

finally,she asked reason behind his weird behaviour%-)
raman tell it's about contract and he want to go mumbai for 3 days...

Raman hates to be called his son..;->
i already mentioned in my previous review .Raman lifestyle and behaviour are nothing but a replica of HIS FATHER:-O:-O

TOSHIJI FEAR IS JUSTIFICABLE...SHE DONT WANT ANOTHER OM PRAKASH BHALLA AND ANOTHER TOSHI;-(;-(;-(

she tell her fear to raman...:-(

Raman met abhi and tell his trip..abhi not tell about ishita..:-)
NIGHT AT IYER HOUSE:

I JUST LOVEING SIL AND MIL BONDING:-)
Raman inform his urgent trip to amma..she is sad..

M:is it that important kanna?can't u postpone it?I MISS U SO MUCH;-(

AYYO AMMA U CANT SAY THIS TO HIM..YOUR DAUGHTER SHOULD SAY THIS WORDS;-);-)

SENTI LINES:
R:I'VE ALREADY POSTPONE IT FOR A LONG TIME..NOW ITS NOT IN MY CONTROL:-O:-O:-O:-O
WHAT HE MEAN?AUTHOR SAIBA U WANT TO GIVE HEART ATTACK IN NEXT UPDATE..MUJHIE SENTI VIBRATIONS ARAHA HAIN:->:->:->:->

SAALI ENTRY MARI ..
M:why mr.bhalla is it that important..or u're running away?
Amma scold her ...she has to respect raman:-)

CRACKING LINES:
M:It is important to go MAMA?;-);-)
R:WHAT D HELL..U R CALLING ME UNCLE:-D:-D:-D:-D

M:coming b/w relax kanna..it is our CUSTOMS;-):-D:-D

R:OH TERI..WHAT CUSTOMS IS THIS MY WIFE WILL CALL ME UNCLE?:-D:-D:-D:-D

I THROWLY ENJOY THIS:-D:-D:-D:-D
he went to ishita bed room with saali...
Yeh mihika is a irritating girl:->:-/:-/

AUTHOR SAIBA...YEH MIHIKA KO EK BANDHA DEKHO YAAR.. PATCH UP KARO...;-);-);-)

KALI DEEMAK SHAITHAN KA GHAR HOTHA HAI...;-);-)B-)B-)
she dnt have any work to distrub raman and ishita..
;->;->;->

RAMAN POV:
MY GIRL setting in her study table,reading something..her new attire looks different..she looked ten years younger...

I WALKED TO TALK TO HER WITH MY SAYA:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D
(SAYA u mean mihika..yeh SAYA NAHI,yeh HUTCH DOG hain)

I'm going to talk to my to be would be financee and then my wife..what the hell she to do with our talk...

SAALE LEFT THEM ALONE;-);-);-)
raman informed his urgent trip to his would be..an unexpected sad kept on her face...

OFFCOURSE SHE IS SAD...BCOZ SHE MISS YOUR TOUCH,YOUR XX TALKS,YOUR PROXIMITY;-);-);-)

MAINLY DISORDER KUMAR(actually i want to give this name to him in previous update..bcoz of some work im not give new name to my LUST KUMAR;-)...)
HE NEVER FOLLOW THE ORDER...HE ENJOY TO SKIP ORDERS ..;-);-)

Raman bhalla hates the one who INTORROGATE HIM..:-O:-O:-O:-O
but he share everything to ishita ...before she ask anything...
He tells the reason behind his trip and he share about HIS FATHER..;-(;-(HOW MUCH HE HATE HIM..
ishita comfront him:-):-)

I THINK THIS ARE INCOMPLETE..
I:RAMAN DONT BE LIKE A CHILD...I LOVE MY RAAVAN KUMAR MORE...
R:SOME TIMES...IT'S HART TO BE HARD..
I'M WAITING FOR ISHITA POV..:-P:-P:-P:-P

I COMPLETELY IN DIFFERENT WORLD...WHEN IM READING THIS:-P:-P:-P:-P:-P

There is no SEXUAL TENSIONS,BOTH OF THEM ARE A DIFFERENT WORLD..:-):-):-)
ishita asked him..IS HE OK?
HE RESPONDED WITH ANOTHER HUMM...
she stroked his hair and called him again to hear him

FAINTLY SAYING,"I LOV..I'M GONNA MISS U"
AWWE SO CUTE KUMAR;-):-*:-*:-*
cuping her face in his hands ..HE KISSED HER FORHEAD TENDERLY...HIS LIPS LINGENURED THERE FOR LONG..WHICH SHE ENJOYED WHOLE HEARTEDLY FOR THE FIRST TIME:-*

A kiss on the forehead .!it is entirely different from ANY OTHER INTEMACIES...IT IS NOT RESULTANT OF PASSION BUT AFFECTION...:-)
YEH AFFECTIONATE KUMAR KAB BANGAYA..;-);-):-*:-*:-*
HE WANT TO ESCAPE FROM HER MAGIC...BETA TUM KUCH AUR SOCHANA;-);-)

RAMAN cried infront of her...;-(he FELT HOME IN HER ARMS:-):-):-):-):-)

ISHITA KISSED RAMAN CHEEK...

YEH KYA HORAHA HAIN...WE READERS WITNESSING A NEW AND DIFFERENT KUMAR:-P:-P:-P:-P
AFTER HE LEFT FROM IYER HOUSE...
ISHITA AND MIHIKA CHAT:...;-);-);-);-)
Ishita in could 9..after his affectionate kiss...

I:he kissed me miku..;-)
M:how dare he is..?
I:NOW HOW SWEET..IS HE..!B-)B-)%-)%-):-/:-/:->:->

M:R U OUT OF YOUR MIND AKKA?

I:HE NEVER KISSED ME ON MY FORHEAD:-P:-P:-P:-P
M:THAT CLEARLY MEANS ...HE KISSED U SOME...WHERE...

HA HA HA...MIHIKA KO ALMOST HEART ATTACK AYYA HAI...TUMARI AKKA ETHINI POOR SOUL NAHI HAI;-):-|;-)

MY REVIEW:IM thinki

Hi dear... 😊
Sorry for the late reply...
I brought his father to turn off the hot romantic mode of the plot.
I'm fed up with writing only 🤬 stuffs.
So trying some drama.
More than that...I don't want RKB to villainous-hero anymore.
As always Ishita's POV will be long enough to clear your doubts 😃
OMG... 😲 You called him [CUTE KUMAR 😆
So my plan is successes...Lust became Cute 🤣
I'm trying to give a long update dear... 😳
I'm bored of sleeping... So I'll be up with the next part soon..
Stay tuned... 😊

Originally posted by: Ishu27

Lovely lovely lovely gayu.. Superb interesting update.. It was really heart touching. I read the ishra scene more than ten times dear. What a great writer you are..? I really admire you a lot.. Raman dint know whats love. But he is in love now. I think his situation will match this song from beema movie. enadhuriye song.. " unnai kaanum varaiyil enadhu vaazhkai vellai kakidham, kanna neeyum adhile ezhudi ponai nalla oviyam"..( i was like a white paper before i met you, but you came and wrote a beautiful piece of art in that plain paper). After reading this update, these lines only came to my mind. Story is moving in an cute way.. Waiting for ishra love story to begin:-)

Lovely comment 😳
Enadhyire is one of my favourite songs... 🤗
And of course it suits the part... 👍🏼

Aww... My moth Kumar (hehe I am loving it) changed to a gentleman..
My cutie pie... Mr. Sweety pout... (I am only going to give him nice adjectives)

Toshi ji's one talk or one doubt brought a major change
Now I am worried will it make any effect when he will get to know about Ishita - Lakshmi lie.
Omi bhalla is alive in it
I thought he is dead.

Originally posted by: --abha--

Gaya Amazing yar...

So lust kumar is finally dead and left is love kumar...Don't tell me u will turn him again too lust kumar...No yar I love this prem kumar...Awww he shared about everything with her so unlike him...The man is changed...The forhead kiss was romantic...

Ishitaa finally completely gone case...He is going back ...why this twist? Ab kya hoga...He don't want to be like his dad ...We know he will not...He still think her laxmi...Abhi baad mein panga karega...Mihika ki band bajati ho tum ...yahan bi bichari confuse...Jiju saali sahiba ko bahut tang karte h...

Continue soonish...
Thanks for pm

Hi... 😊
RKB ko change hona toh padega nah...4 the better
😊
I need a break from hot romance... So brought this twist... 😉

Have you seen there are names for him
Decent Kumar
Sacrifice Kumar
Cute..

People are changing ;) :P