SS___MANNMARZIYAN___Part-22 Pg-126 PART-23 PAGE 136 updated - Page 35

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

Super yaar😉i loved every bit of it cant wait for the next part😆but y no precab😕

Because I didn't write the next part 😕

Gaya 3 what happen to Raman why he suddenly change his attitude. Is that cause of his convo with his mom.he didn't like his dad but he like his dad. But I like his mom direct question about him tha he will keep her happy and will marry her. Cause she didn't want Ishu to have life like her. That one sentence can made Raman flip flop or just temporary. This time the kiss is show affection not passion glad to see his hidden good nature.So next update we will see his face off with his dad and he wil back to marry Ishu. This update Ishu behavior more soft to him Raman almost say ILU to her. Thanks dear for update and the Pm.👍🏼

Gaya Amazing yar...

So lust kumar is finally dead and left is love kumar...Don't tell me u will turn him again too lust kumar...No yar I love this prem kumar...Awww he shared about everything with her so unlike him...The man is changed...The forhead kiss was romantic...

Ishitaa finally completely gone case...He is going back ...why this twist? Ab kya hoga...He don't want to be like his dad ...We know he will not...He still think her laxmi...Abhi baad mein panga karega...Mihika ki band bajati ho tum ...yahan bi bichari confuse...Jiju saali sahiba ko bahut tang karte h...

Continue soonish...
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Lovely lovely lovely gayu.. Superb interesting update.. It was really heart touching. I read the ishra scene more than ten times dear. What a great writer you are..? I really admire you a lot.. Raman dint know whats love. But he is in love now. I think his situation will match this song from beema movie. enadhuriye song.. " unnai kaanum varaiyil enadhu vaazhkai vellai kakidham, kanna neeyum adhile ezhudi ponai nalla oviyam"..( i was like a white paper before i met you, but you came and wrote a beautiful piece of art in that plain paper). After reading this update, these lines only came to my mind. Story is moving in an cute way.. Waiting for ishra love story to begin:-)

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this update is the reason for my lack of sleep in early morning:->:->
what u r planning AUTHOR SAIBA?

R U PLANNING TO TURN MY LUST KUMAR IN TO SACRIFIES KUMAR.?:->:-/:-(

COMING TO POINT:
Y U SUDDENLY BRING HIS FATHER ?Y U STOP HIS LOVE CONFESSTION?we want to wait for damaka?

raman thoughts preoccupied by his father..it was noticed by his mother.she very well known his weird actions :-(

finally,she asked reason behind his weird behaviour%-)
raman tell it's about contract and he want to go mumbai for 3 days...

Raman hates to be called his son..;->
i already mentioned in my previous review .Raman lifestyle and behaviour are nothing but a replica of HIS FATHER:-O:-O

TOSHIJI FEAR IS JUSTIFICABLE...SHE DONT WANT ANOTHER OM PRAKASH BHALLA AND ANOTHER TOSHI;-(;-(;-(

she tell her fear to raman...:-(

Raman met abhi and tell his trip..abhi not tell about ishita..:-)
NIGHT AT IYER HOUSE:

I JUST LOVEING SIL AND MIL BONDING:-)
Raman inform his urgent trip to amma..she is sad..

M:is it that important kanna?can't u postpone it?I MISS U SO MUCH;-(

AYYO AMMA U CANT SAY THIS TO HIM..YOUR DAUGHTER SHOULD SAY THIS WORDS;-);-)

SENTI LINES:
R:I'VE ALREADY POSTPONE IT FOR A LONG TIME..NOW ITS NOT IN MY CONTROL:-O:-O:-O:-O
WHAT HE MEAN?AUTHOR SAIBA U WANT TO GIVE HEART ATTACK IN NEXT UPDATE..MUJHIE SENTI VIBRATIONS ARAHA HAIN:->:->:->:->

SAALI ENTRY MARI ..
M:why mr.bhalla is it that important..or u're running away?
Amma scold her ...she has to respect raman:-)

CRACKING LINES:
M:It is important to go MAMA?;-);-)
R:WHAT D HELL..U R CALLING ME UNCLE:-D:-D:-D:-D

M:coming b/w relax kanna..it is our CUSTOMS;-):-D:-D

R:OH TERI..WHAT CUSTOMS IS THIS MY WIFE WILL CALL ME UNCLE?:-D:-D:-D:-D

I THROWLY ENJOY THIS:-D:-D:-D:-D
he went to ishita bed room with saali...
Yeh mihika is a irritating girl:->:-/:-/

AUTHOR SAIBA...YEH MIHIKA KO EK BANDHA DEKHO YAAR.. PATCH UP KARO...;-);-);-)

KALI DEEMAK SHAITHAN KA GHAR HOTHA HAI...;-);-)B-)B-)
she dnt have any work to distrub raman and ishita..
;->;->;->

RAMAN POV:
MY GIRL setting in her study table,reading something..her new attire looks different..she looked ten years younger...

I WALKED TO TALK TO HER WITH MY SAYA:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D
(SAYA u mean mihika..yeh SAYA NAHI,yeh HUTCH DOG hain)

I'm going to talk to my to be would be financee and then my wife..what the hell she to do with our talk...

SAALE LEFT THEM ALONE;-);-);-)
raman informed his urgent trip to his would be..an unexpected sad kept on her face...

OFFCOURSE SHE IS SAD...BCOZ SHE MISS YOUR TOUCH,YOUR XX TALKS,YOUR PROXIMITY;-);-);-)

MAINLY DISORDER KUMAR(actually i want to give this name to him in previous update..bcoz of some work im not give new name to my LUST KUMAR;-)...)
HE NEVER FOLLOW THE ORDER...HE ENJOY TO SKIP ORDERS ..;-);-)

Raman bhalla hates the one who INTORROGATE HIM..:-O:-O:-O:-O
but he share everything to ishita ...before she ask anything...
He tells the reason behind his trip and he share about HIS FATHER..;-(;-(HOW MUCH HE HATE HIM..
ishita comfront him:-):-)

I THINK THIS ARE INCOMPLETE..
I:RAMAN DONT BE LIKE A CHILD...I LOVE MY RAAVAN KUMAR MORE...
R:SOME TIMES...IT'S HART TO BE HARD..
I'M WAITING FOR ISHITA POV..:-P:-P:-P:-P

I COMPLETELY IN DIFFERENT WORLD...WHEN IM READING THIS:-P:-P:-P:-P:-P

There is no SEXUAL TENSIONS,BOTH OF THEM ARE A DIFFERENT WORLD..:-):-):-)
ishita asked him..IS HE OK?
HE RESPONDED WITH ANOTHER HUMM...
she stroked his hair and called him again to hear him

FAINTLY SAYING,"I LOV..I'M GONNA MISS U"
AWWE SO CUTE KUMAR;-):-*:-*:-*
cuping her face in his hands ..HE KISSED HER FORHEAD TENDERLY...HIS LIPS LINGENURED THERE FOR LONG..WHICH SHE ENJOYED WHOLE HEARTEDLY FOR THE FIRST TIME:-*

A kiss on the forehead .!it is entirely different from ANY OTHER INTEMACIES...IT IS NOT RESULTANT OF PASSION BUT AFFECTION...:-)
YEH AFFECTIONATE KUMAR KAB BANGAYA..;-);-):-*:-*:-*
HE WANT TO ESCAPE FROM HER MAGIC...BETA TUM KUCH AUR SOCHANA;-);-)

RAMAN cried infront of her...;-(he FELT HOME IN HER ARMS:-):-):-):-):-)

ISHITA KISSED RAMAN CHEEK...

YEH KYA HORAHA HAIN...WE READERS WITNESSING A NEW AND DIFFERENT KUMAR:-P:-P:-P:-P
AFTER HE LEFT FROM IYER HOUSE...
ISHITA AND MIHIKA CHAT:...;-);-);-);-)
Ishita in could 9..after his affectionate kiss...

I:he kissed me miku..;-)
M:how dare he is..?
I:NOW HOW SWEET..IS HE..!B-)B-)%-)%-):-/:-/:->:->

M:R U OUT OF YOUR MIND AKKA?

I:HE NEVER KISSED ME ON MY FORHEAD:-P:-P:-P:-P
M:THAT CLEARLY MEANS ...HE KISSED U SOME...WHERE...

HA HA HA...MIHIKA KO ALMOST HEART ATTACK AYYA HAI...TUMARI AKKA ETHINI POOR SOUL NAHI HAI;-):-|;-)

MY REVIEW:IM thinki

Omg so cute guy this is one of the best best part of the story Till now ... too good

superb ...liked so much dis part👍🏼

Lovely and emotinal update dear... I loved both raman and ishita...

superb update
I just sweet ramam hi soo cute
I hope ishita happy with him
plz jaldi se raman jaye n ishra marriage
wating early continue soon

Originally posted by: usaonly

Gaya 3 what happen to Raman why he suddenly change his attitude. Is that cause of his convo with his mom.he didn't like his dad but he like his dad. But I like his mom direct question about him tha he will keep her happy and will marry her. Cause she didn't want Ishu to have life like her. That one sentence can made Raman flip flop or just temporary. This time the kiss is show affection not passion glad to see his hidden good nature.So next update we will see his face off with his dad and he wil back to marry Ishu. This update Ishu behavior more soft to him Raman almost say ILU to her.Thanks dear for update and the Pm.👍🏼

Time will tell Jum 😉
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