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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Piyu97

@Aarohi, you comments always make me smile like an idiot.

Itne pyaare comments likhti hai.
Sorry was busy all this while isliye update kana huya hi nahi. Finally found some time to update the next part.

And exams maine state entrance I wrote, Comedk (Karnataka entrance), Manipal, Sikkim Manipal, Amrita, KITEE.
That's it. Abhi I'm waiting for the counselling.😃😃

chalo der aae durust aae. u know we was talking about u last nite and here u came. sach 200 saal jeeagi tu... oye tph tu bhi Bangalore? accha hai. main ek baar Bangalore aaungi aur sabse mil loongi 😆 hailaa!!!!you smile like idiot on my comment 😲 but thank u for this compliment. and I know u are waiting for counselling. anki di told me. but sacchi I am happy for u would be doctor saahiba. love u always
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Posted: 10 years ago
Piyu.. When are you going to update??
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aarohi26

chalo der aae durust aae. u know we was talking about u last nite and here u came. sach 200 saal jeeagi tu... oye tph tu bhi Bangalore? accha hai. main ek baar Bangalore aaungi aur sabse mil loongi 😆 hailaa!!!!you smile like idiot on my comment 😲 but thank u for this compliment. and I know u are waiting for counselling. anki di told me. but sacchi I am happy for u would be doctor saahiba. love u always


Nahi jayungi Bangalore. Mujhe Hyderabad mein hi rehena hai..

Achcha Anki di ne bataya? Cool.
Thanks Yaara.
love you too. 🤗🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Pankhuri-

*RES*

huhhh finally unres...dont blame me for the delay...you keep me busy on watsapp what do i do

where do i start from...i loved every bit of it and i don't say it for the sake of saying but i mean it and you know it

looks like it's been three years since you've travelled with a woman on her car. If I'm not wrong

lolll 😆...i love the way she answers him back...saamne wala goes completely speechless

but i have my sympathies with Raman...i too hate it when i am being driven somewhere without telling the exact place and being told to just wait...that is the worst feeling i tell you...so his eagerness and impatience was genuine and i feel for him

the description of the colony was nice

Since there was no much of romance in between them, they enjoyed the view of the peaceful and clear view. 🤣🤣🤣

you mean to say romance destroys peaceful sightseeing...no re...if you have romance then also you can have a clear view 😉😉😉

oh so she brought him to her Mother's house...badi fast hai bandi...i liked Raman's reaction when she chose to not ring the bell...he is too sophisticated

lo Amma is another unique piece pata hi nahi ghar mein koi aaya hai...busy in her own world 😆😆😆

their casual conversation was nice

lolll amma ki complain hai ki she didnt change 😆 as if woh yahan amma ki saree dekhne aaya hai...amma samjho yaar it is time when people will see your daughter and not you

Ishu, you didn't tell me that you were dating a celebrity?"🤣

you better start issuing warnings before such parts...i was sipping coffee while reading and i was about to ...yun hi bezzati ho jaati

lo beti ne kaha we are not dating and she is not bothered...apni hi looks ki padi hai...kahan se dhundi antique maa tune 😆

I see where Ishita gets her looks 😳😳😳

chalu ho gayi flirting already...such a common pick up line...used in personal experience as well 🤣🤣🤣

lo amma ab photo dikhayegi...such a typical motherly thing...i dont know mummyon ko kya maza aata hai photos dikhane mein...they end up making their daughters a laughing stock for their spouses

pocahontas 🤣...i am still laughing like anything...how that word suddenly strike him...he could have randomly said naughty but no...pocahontas

i will give the credit to you here because ultimate Raman as a character or i should better say all these characters and their dialogs are written by you so it is you who decided to write things this way...i am really impressed here

Don't be modest. This is Raman Bhalla here 😆

lo childhood kisse batana chalu...so mummyish kinda...and moreover he is so interested to know...how old is she here and stuff and she obviously is embarrassed

lolll i liked how she rushed with him warna aaj toh amma puri pol khol daalti

but really liked Amma and Raman ki bonding...bade kam log itni jaldi aise comfortable ho paate hain

I'm glad you're not dating that doctor anymore."

not just you Amma we all are glad...warna Ishra kaise possible hota

It's fun not knowing, isn't it?

no it isn't fun...we should know it before hand...i am with you Raman Bhalla...i and Raman will open an anti-Piyu club

aiyo construction truck...bucket mein baithne bol rahi hai...what is she upto

but that line trust me and he was ready was cute

did you have cold medicines today...😆😆😆...he and his humorous one liners 👏

fighting for place ahem ahem...hottt line

woahhh what an idea i was happily surprised 👏

didnt have a slightest idea ki aisa kuch karegi concert dekhne ke liye...like seriously unique...well done girl 👏👏👏

do you like staring at people this way or it's just me 😆😆😆

it is just you Ishita Iyyer

and the ending 😳

sabse pehle toh u turned a rough tough construction site into no less than a romantic place and then that closeness...first he felt that right and kept his hand on her shoulder...and then she owned that right to stop him from taking off his hand

kiss 😳😳😳

let that be. It feels good too

yes it feels good...too good to read your story and i curse myself for delaying it this much

Piyu i dont know how many times will i change my choice in future bcoz i am sure more and more good parts are coming up but this one was my favorite till now...it it not that it was all lovey dovey and sort but it was just too nicely written

a good progression in their relation...you rocked it 👏

keep up the good work and u better continue soon




What is this?? 😲

Yeh comment kam, kisi story ka update zyada lag raha hai. 🤣
Abh sorry nahi boulngi remark ke liye. You know I can't be senti 🤣

You always tell me, "Tu toh bass hasa hasake maar de"
Abhi yeh kya tha phir? Main bewakoof ki tarah hass rahi thi. Bass thank god parents ghar se bahar nahi phenk diye 😆😆😆

Waise ek genuine question hai, kitna time laga comment karne mein? 🤣

Sahi mein thank you. Abhi thank you bolna mana hai, but chalega. Itna HUGE comment likha hai aapne.. I loved it. 🤗🤗

Aapke farmayish pe I'm updating now. 😛

And bit wise comment nahi kiya maine, cause I've to update. 😆
Edited by Piyu97 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago


HELLO MY BEAUTIFUL FRIENDS

I know it's been a long time, and I'm really sorry for not updating the story.

As some of you know that I was busy with certain stuffs.

Finally, figured out some time and here I am.


Enjoy reading

PART 6

"If I had a nickel for every time for every time a saw a concert from a construction truck, I'd be.."

Ishita hit his hand and forced a laugh out of her stomach, all the way through her throat.

They walked together, as Raman held her shoulder with his left hand. He at her and whispered in her ears, "Thank you"

Ishita looked at him, staring straight into his eyes, naturally asking a reason.

Raman replied to her silent question, "It was exquisite"

Ishita smiled and replied, "Don't thank me, Thank Bunty"

Raman, still looking at her, replied sarcastically, "Thank you Bunty"

They walked for a few more minutes. Silence created a beautiful and comfortable relation between them. They could speak a lot without even a word coming out of their mouth.

Finally Ishita spoke up, "Hey, I got you book"


The paused. Raman let go of her. They stood facing each other.

Ishita looked down and then stared back into his eyes and said, "I'm halfway through it"

Raman - Really?

After a few seconds of silence, Raman spoke up again, "well, wait till you get to the recipe chapters. They're top notch". He smiled when he delivered the suggestion. '

Ishita looked at him and smiled back.

They resumed their walk.

Ishita - I'm sorry about your wife.

Raman looked at her.

Ishita continued, "How come you didn't tell me that's what happened?"

Raman looked down and replied to her, "I don't know. Never came up"

Ishita - Well, it sounded like you really loved her.

Raman - yeah I did.

Raman looked into ishit;a eyes and held her hand. He said, "But I think that was a long time ago"

Ishita - three years?

Raman smiled and replied back, "Twenty-one in dog years"

Ishita looked at Raman's hands that had hers in between them.

Raman - Hey, I had a really great time.

Ishita - Me too. It was fun.

They stared at each other for few seconds, when Ishita walked closer to him. she leaned on his chest and placed a soft kiss on his cheeks.

Raman kept glaring into her eyes, even after she was done kissing him.

Ishita - What?

Raman smiled wickedly and replied, "I'm waiting to watch you strut back to bitching rig."

She grinned and said, " All right"

She waved at her and her replied her saying, "bye"

And Raman watched her walk away and smiled without clueless.

NEXT DAY

Ishita walked into this clinic humming the well known song "ang lagade Rey", with a hand full of files in her hand.

The receptionist wished her, "good morning ma'am"

Ishita smiled and waved at her saying, "hello", stressing on the last letter of the word, that's "O" and prolonged it for a second, a clear indication of her being happy. The receptionist gave her an unusual look and out of curiosity he landed up asking, "Is there anything special today ma'am? You look happy"

Ishita smiled back saying, "Nope, just another happy day"

The receptionist smiled and said, "Okay. Mihika Ma'am is waiting for you in your cabin"

On hearing her sisters name, Ishita bite her tongue and said and nodded. She knew why Mihika had landed up in her office early in the morning.

She murmured to herself, "be prepared for the questionnaire"

She walked through the corridor, entering her cabin, still humming the passionate and romantic song.

Mihika looked at her when she entered the room. She raised one of her eyebrows and without wasting a single second she landed up questioning her, "Is that the international song for got laid?"

Ishita didn't even bother to look at her sister. He stared at her files, which she had held wrongly, upside down. She replied her saying, "No hardly"

Mihika walked to her and settled the files correctly in her hand. Ishita bit her tongue and looked at her. Mihika continued, "Come on, throw me a bone. What happened last night?"

Ishita - It was fun

Mihika - So you're going to see him again?

Ishita - I don't know. Maybe

Mihika stared at her sister for few seconds, while she smiled from the edge of her lips.

She continued, "May I just point out that you broke up with Subbu 72 hours ago and now you're dating some other guy who's not even gonna be in town for 72 hours?

Ishita looked up. She had a frown up on her face.

Ishita - Okay, We're... We're not dating. We just met, and you know...

She paused there for a second and continued, "I like him. We're... hanging out"

Mihika took a sigh, rotating her head in 360 degrees and said, "Huh! Just be careful. Men.. are hairy". Saying so, she walked away.

Ishita pressed her lips and said, "thank you for that", and banged her files hard on the table.

HOTEL

Raman walked out of his room, swinging his arm in the air, apparently a signature step of people being happy. He walked through the corridor, passing by the painting where he and Ishita had first met. He stopped there and stared at it for few seconds. And then the thought struck him. He smiled and without wasting anytime, walked to the painting just next to it. He lifted it up by a few centimeters for search if she had written anything like the previous time. But He couldn't figure out any such unusual word. He walked to the painting next to it and repeated the same, but was disappointed again. He continued doing the same with all the paintings hung on the walls of the corridor. The was one, hung right behind the sofa. Unable to find a way, he jumped on the sofa, and lifted it up, only to get his heart out in his palm seeing the lizard that dived on the sofa and crawled away. He sat on the sofa sighing at his innumerous attempts that only met failure. While he did so, he saw a small boy staring at him and Raman acted to be normal and sophisticated as he looked in the three piece black suite. Probably the boy had freaked out seeing a man of 30 standing on the sofa, peeking behind the hotel painting, and he ran away.

Raman sighed again and decided to take the lfit, as he was hell tired searching for Ishita's weird words behind the paintings.

While he walked to the elevator, he noticed another painting, hung above a flower vase. His gut instinct pulled him towards it. He lifted the painting up and there it was, "POPPYSMIC"

Raman looked up and smiled gladly, like he was satisfied.

He walked down to the library straight away, and caught hold of the dictionary.

"POPPYSMIC - The sound produced by smacking one's lips" , That is what it read.

Raman looked up and thought for a while. He then tried producing the sound as instructed in the dictionary. The lady in the billing counter stared at him, narrowing her eyes. Raman looked at her and grinned. He placed the dictionary back in the shelf and smiled back at her.

CLINIC

Ishita was working on her laptop, preparing for a seminar which was to be held the next week. That when he received a mail. It was from a mail address named, rkb@gmail.com . He opened it and it read. "POPPYSMIC" in bolds.

Her eyes widened when he read the word. She looked up and smiled and eventually laughing out loud.

She typed back, "Impressive. How did you get my e-mail?"

To which Raman replied, "There's a lot more to know"


CONFERENCE ROOM


Pathak and the board members waited for Raman to come.

Pathak looked at their impatient glare and he assured them saying, "He'll be here anytime"


While they kept waiting, Raman had his plans done with Ishita.

Edited by Piyu97 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res

unres

yipee...first one to comment. tujhe pata hai tera pm aane se pehle hi mera res ho gaya tha. ha ha ha...I know tujhe mujhpe proud ho raha hai 😆 waise yaar kuch bhi bolo first res karne par aise feelings aati hai maano Olympics mein medel jeet liya ho 😆

waise tujhe nahi lagta ki Teri speed ke hisaab se yeh part extra lamba ho gaya... koi nahi next time compensate kar dena

yeh part padhte time na mere mind main ek hi song baja, do dil mil rahe hai, magar chupke chupke
😳 sahi hai dono ekdum sahi jaa rahe hai.

yaar ishu me toh kiss hi kar diya o was sacchi mein shocked
😲 but phir mujhko dhyaan aaya ki yeh toh English movie ka translation hai, itni boldness toh banti hi hai na boss 😉

yaar miku is too gud. kya taang kheechi ishita ki. 72 yrs ago u broke up with dubbu and now you are dating...progressive ladki hai. but I love their cute relationship. sacchi

oh toh now majnu rkb going in full majnu mode. sahi hai yaar. conference mein baithke bhi dhaayan udhar hi hai smart insaan ka aur yaar yeh kitna smart hai????? mail id bhi maar liya. inki progress dekhte hue mujhe pakka trust ho gaya hai ki inki shaadi ka din door nahi hai 😉

I loved this part but it was small re. but we know you are busy so we forgave you. so complete your all work and come back soon with new treat.
Edited by aarohi26 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...
I loved when raman take the paintings and search for her handwritting,
he find out her email ..and mailed her;-)
continue soon:-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome one piyu...
poppysmic haha lolz...
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Piyu friendship blooming. Ishu confess she,like him with in 72 hrs. Superb they like each other company to hang out. And raman was curious to find the clue of the word so much afford he put for her. At the end will Raman show up in the conference room or gone with Ishu. Thank you for cute update and have a beautiful weekend dear.🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res
Finally Unres

Wow 👏
I quite liked this update..
So many small things made me say "aww"😆

Raman held her shoulder with his left hand and whispered in her ear thank you... cho chweet 😊

She asked him to thank Bunty. I was like "Are you serious"
And Raman thanked him also...loll 😛

Silence created a beautiful and comfortable relation between them. They could speak a lot without even a word coming out of their mouth. ..... I loved these sentences

So finally ishita knows about Shagun. I personally liked Raman's reply... I would have told the same 😳

Kiss 😲 😲 ☺️
Main paani pee rahi Thi and Sab mooh se baahar 😳
ishu kaafi bold nikli
Unexpected kiss was ☺️

Aww... both are very happy after their concert date
I just loved this mihika here...

May I just point out that you broke up with Subbu 72 hours ago and now you're dating some other guy who's not even gonna be in town for 72 hours?
🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

hmm... mihika ka warning... correct hai boss

But these words "I like him"
even I liked it 👍🏼

Loll Raman finding words in paintings...

I could seriously visualize each action of Raman
that kid... lol poor him 🤣 🤣

I was grinning very badly when I read that...

Ahem... E-mail ID bhi pata laga li... Kya baat hai

plans...umm... Interesting
Update soon

P.S - sorry for being late.

P.S.S - Love you n Miss you
Edited by vidya_prasad - 10 years ago

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