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Sorry sorry sorry...Sooo sorry fr d late dears...bahut busy thi studies mein...very sorry...chotu sa update hain...uske liye bhi sorry...could write only this😭hope u remembered this story...
Part8

Mihir "toh plan set...same plan...ishu di roshni di banke jaayegi aur bhai ishu di ke bhai banke"

Ishita "what???!!!"she shouts

Mihir "kya hua di??...koyi problem hain kya?"

Ishita "Raman...mera...what??..tum log pagal ho gaye ho kya??..."she says angrily

Mihika "kya hua akka..aap ko koyi problem hain kya??"

Ishita "Raman mera...mera kuch nahi karega"

Mihika "kya nahi karega??"

Ishita "kuch bhi nahi...mein akele hi jaaungi...Raman ko saath aane ka koyi zaroorat nahi hain "

Mihir "lekin di...kal toh yahi decide hua tha na??ab kya hua??"

Ishita "mein ne bola na nahi..mein akele hi jaungi "

Mihir"lekin di aap akele kaise??koyi toh chahiye hoga na...aapka support banke"

Ishita "toh ek kaam kar Mihir tu mere bhai banja"

Mihika "lekin akka roshni di ne toh uss ladke ko yeh bola ki woh apna bada bhai ko leke aa rahi hain...toh Mihir kis angle se bade bhai lagega??"

Ishita "I...I..I don't know...koyi bhi ho lekin Raman nahi...bas"

Mihika "lekin akka..."

Ishita "bola na nahi"

Rohit "Ishita ek kaam karo...mein tumhare bhai banke aata hoon"

Ishita "tikhe done!!..."she says immediately

Rohit "toh chale..?"

Mihir"haan "
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Outside the house

Raman "kitna dher karoge yaar...ab chalo "

Mihir "bhai plan mein toda sa change..." "

Raman "kitna change karoge yaar??"

Mihir "bhai aap bhool rahe ho ki mein director hoon"

Raman "mere dimaag karab hogaya ki mein ne tujhe director banadi"he murmurs

Mihir "toh plan yeh hain ki rohit bhai..ishu di ke bhai banke chalenge "

Raman "okay...mujhe koyi problem nahi hain lekin achanak change??"

Ishita "arrey harr cheez tujhe batana zaroori hain kya...agar plan manzoor hain toh theek hain nahi toh mein jaa rahi hoon"

Raman "tikhe tikhe ab zyaada bhav math khaa...yeh plan hi fix karenge...ab chal...aur yeh le tera bluetooth "and he keeps it on her ear in such a way that her hair covers it and every one sits in the car and drops roshni at hotel so that her parents couldn't see her at house...Ishita sits nervously in the whole journey

Raman sees her nervous "jaan tu yeh kar paayegi na??agar nahi toh bolde hum plan change kar denge "

Ishita "haan...mein kar lungi "
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At the park

The man was already waiting for roshni and was walking here and there waiting for her

Ishita tightens her grip on Raman nervously seeing the man...Raman sees her nervously tightening her grip on his hand and he starts "dekho woh raha bandha...dekho ladki ko dekhne ke liye jyaada uthavla ho raha hain...bechara tera mooh dekhe ga toh poora excitement flop hojaye ga...bechara"he teases her so that she gets diverted

Ishita "Ravan kumar kehna kya chahta hain tu??"she says angrily

Raman "wahi jo tum samaj rahi ho...acha hua ki tumhe leke aaye kisi aur ko leke aate toh shaayad usse woh pasand aajati...aur humara problem aur badta"

Ishita "hawww...idiot idar mein teri madad kar rahi hoon aur tu mera taunt maar raha hain..gadha...mein nahi kar rahi hoon kuch...karwale jisse tu sundar maan tha hain"

Raman "sundar toh mein tere alava bahut logon ko maanta hoon lekin iss waqt na tera jaana hi theek hain...mein ab soch raha hoon ki mujhe kal tujhe bej ne ka idea kyu nahi aaya??roshni jaati toh woh zaroor haan keh deta shaadi ke liye"

Ishita "hawww...mujhe kuch nahi..."she was cut by rohit

Rohit "cool cool cool...tum donon ke ladayi mein please humara plan flop mat karna...Ishita tum please chalo yaar"

Ishita "tikhe "she says angrily by seeing Raman

Raman smiles seeing his plan work

Both rohit and Ishita go to the man

Ishita s.t"iss ravan kumar ke chakkar mein kya kya karna pad raha hain...please murgan mujhe maaf karna aur mujhe shakti bhi dena yeh sab natak karne ke liye"and they reaches him

Ishita "mr.shaurya??"he says pointing the man starting the drama

Shaurya "ji...aap??"

Ishita "mein roshni.."

Shaurya "roshni??"he asks shocked seeing her dressing style

Ishita "kya hua??"

Shaurya "ji kuch nahi"

Ishita "okay...bahut dher se wait kar rahe teh kya??woh actually raat ko pub and all mein late hogaya"

Shaurya "kya??pub??"

Ishita "kya hua koi problem hain kya?"

Shaurya "nahi..aap ki maa ne aapke baarein mein kuch aur hi bola toh..."

Rohit "come on shaurya...apni khud ke beti ke baarein mein koyi bhi aise hi bolega.."

Shaurya "ji..."he says awkwardly "aap??"

Ishita "yeh mera bhai "

Rohit "hi"he shakes hand with him.."oh sorry mein tum dono ke beech nahi aana chahta...issliye mein udar jaata hoon"he says pointing a chair

Shaurya "ji"

Ishita "I am so sorry shaurya..actually kya hain na bhai toda over protective hain...kal raat mein ne 6 pegs kya peeli..unhe lagah ki mein apne a..."

Shaurya "pegs..???...aap drink karte ho??"he asks shocked

Ishita "of course ...karti hoon yaar...i just love it...roz 1,2 bottle pakka peeti hoon...tumhara favourite kya hain??"he sees her awkwardly..."don't say me ki tum nahi karte"

Shaurya "nahi ji mein nahi karta"

Ishita "Awww !!koyi baat nahi shaadi ke baad hum saath mein peeyenge"

Shaurya doesn't react anything

Shaurya "ek baat poochu??"

Ishita "poocho"

Shaurya "aap humesha aise kapde hi pehenti hain kya??"

Ishita "nahi toh...aaj mein ne bahut decent kapde pehne hain mummy ke force ke wajah se...nahi toh mein itni lamba dres kabhi nahi pehanti"

Shaurya doesn't react

Ishita "theek hain aur batayiye.."she says and her leg slips due to the heels and she falls

Ishita "ahhh"

Raman "jaan..."he shouts worried and goes to her forgetting shaurya "jaan tu theek hain na??"he asks by making her stand

Shaurya "aap theek ho??"

Ishita "haan the..."and that is when they realise about shaurya

Ishita "yaa I am fine"

Shaurya "aap??"he asks seeing Raman

Ishita "yeh...yeh..."

Raman "iska boyfriend "

"What??"both Ishita and shaurya shouts in shock and shaurya sees Ishita...confused about her reaction

Ishita "mera matlab...haan...my boyfriend "

Raman hugs her and kisses her cheek so near to her lips so that it looks to shaurya as if he is pecking her lips...but it slightly brushes her lips unknowingly...Ishita was shocked by his sudden action and a blush appears on her face involuntarily ...Shaurya was completely shocked by this and he opens his mouth in shock

Raman "just go with the flow jaan"he whispers and comes back

Raman "tu yaha kaise jaan??"

Ishita "woh mein...mein inse milne aayi thi"

Raman "yeh kaun??wait wait let me guess...tera would be ...right??"

Ishita "yaa"

Raman "ohhh congrats"he says excitedly"congrats bro"he says hugging shaurya

Raman to shaurya "congrats man...rosh bahut achi ladki hain...you are very lucky tumhe itni hot ladki mili"he says by winking at him

Shaurya was totally confused at his reaction..at one side he was hugging and kissing her and at the other side he was congratulating him for marrying her

Raman "shaadi kab hain?"

Ishita "next month "

Raman "congrats..."..."ek minute idar aa"he says by pulling her close and whispers in her ear audible to shaurya

Raman "mere ghar kab aarahi hain??kal raat koyi nahi rahega ghar mein toh kal raat...??!!"he whispers huskily much audible to shaurya...shocking both Ishita and shaurya

Shaurya "raat??"

Raman "haan raat...second show dekhne...kyu koyi problem hain kya??"

Shaurya "no"

Raman in bluetooth"ab rohit teri baari...aaja"

Rohit "hey Raman haan!!how are you??"he says hugging Raman

Shaurya "aap bhi inhe jaante ho??"he asks shocked

Rohit "haan obviously...mein ne hi toh set kiya inko"

Shaurya "aur koyi cheeze hain..jo mujhe nahi pata??"

Rohit "arrey raman tu ab jaa...inhe akele chodh dete hain"

Shaurya "nahi nahi...mujhe koyi kaam yaad aagaya mein jaata hoon"

Ishita"lekin..."

Shaurya "bye ji..kabhi aur milte hain"by saying this he moves from there and Mihir,mihika enters and everyone fits into laughter

Raman"okay..okay ab tum log chalo.. office se 3 missed call aaya hain,mein call karke aata hoon..."and they move

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Roshni"kitna darha diya yaar tum logon ne usse...bechara"she says while laughing

Raman "uska chehra toh dekhne layak tha aur humare madam ne kya acting kiya yaar"

Mihika "haan bhai sach mein...Roshni di aapko waha rehna chahiye tha...aap sirf bluetooth mein inke baat sunke yeh sab keh rahi ho agar live mein dekhti na toh seriously aapko bahut mazaa aata"

Roshni "haan yaar.."and that is when Raman's mobile ring

Raman "ek minute.."he says to them and moves from there to attend the call

Rohit "sach mein Ishita...aaj tum ne jo kuch bhi kiya uske liye thank you somuch"

Ishita smiles in return

Roshni "haan bhabhi agar raman aur aap nahi hote..."she was about to complete but was interrupted by Ishita

Ishita "bhabhi..??"she asks confused

Roshni "kyu kya hua?mein raman ko bhai maanti hoon toh uska lover bhabhi hi toh hogi"

Ishita "lover??! kuch bhi!!!...hum dono bas ache dost hain"

Roshni "I am really sorry Ishita...actually tum dono ko ek doosre ke saath itna comfortable dekh ke ...i thought.."

Ishita "it's okay"

Roshni "but ek baat bolu??"

Ishita "haan "

Roshni "I think you should recheck your relationship "

Ishita "aisa kuch nahi hain...it's just that ki hum bahut ache dost hain issliye "

roshini"okay..lekin i don't think so..I mean agar Raman sirf tera dost hain toh why didn't you want to act as his sister??"

Ishita "woh toh bas mein ne Raman ko kabhi aisa treat nahi kiya toh...issliye "

Roshni "soch lo Ishita "

Ishita "aisa kuch nahi hain "

mihir"okay ladkiyon ab chalo..lunch karte hain.."says mihir who just came with parcels

Ishita "tikhe "by saying this they go and have the lunch
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At evening in roshni's house

Ishita's room

Ishita goes to wash room and washes her face with water and sees her face in the mirror...she observes it and involuntarily brushes the part at which Raman kissed being in trance with a smile on her face..a sweet blush comes on her face involuntarily and suddenly Roshni's words hits her mind

"I think you should recheck your relationship "by which she comes out of the trance

She immediately takes her hand off her cheek and pours water on her face again and moves out...she sits on the bed and takes a novel and starts reading it...but still roshni's words continues ringing in her ears
"agar Raman sirf tera dost hain toh why didn't you want to act as his sister??"..."I think you should recheck your relationship"

Ishita "what's wrong with me??..."she yells at herself "mujhe baar baar wahi baatein yaad kyu arahi hain??...Raman sirf mera acha dost hain aur kuch nahi...aur mujhe kisi ko explanation dene ki koyi zaroorat nahi hain "she says and keeps the novel aside and lays on the bed and tries to sleep but little did she know that sleep was gone from her system and after a lots of struggling she finally sleeps
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At morning at 10 am

Roshni's parents went to work and roshni,mihika were sitting and watching tv and that is when Raman comes

Raman "arrey hain kaha yeh madraasan??"he asks angrily

Mihika "kya hua bhai??itna gussa kyu kar rahe ho??"

Raman "teri akka kahan hain??mein itni dher se call kar raha hoon utha thi hi nahi"

Mihika "woh bhai akka so rahi hain "

Raman "what??khumbkaran ki behen hain kya yeh??ruk mein usse abhi uthata hoon"by saying he goes to her room

Raman "pagal...mein itna dher se call kar raha hoon aur tu hain ki khumbkaran ki tarah so rahi hain...tujhe kaise uthana hain mein jaanta hoon"by saying this he brings a glass of water and sprinkles a hand full on her face

Ishita "ahhh"she gets up"yeh sab kya hain??"she asks wiping her face irritatedly

Raman "tujhe utha raha hoon"

Ishita "ravan kumar...yeh koyi tareeka hain utha ne ka??tu toh gaya aaj mere haaton se"by saying this she runs behind him

Ishita "rukh idiot...tujhe mein abhi batati hoon"

Raman "khoshish karle jaan...you can't catch me"and they run in the whole room around the bed and he falls on the bed hitting to the bedpost

Ishita takes the opportunity and climbs the bed and catches his both hands by her single hand

Ishita "ab bata kya karega??idiot,gadha"by saying this she takes a pillow and starts beating him

Raman "arrey ruk yaar..rukh na"...she continues beating him...he removes his hands from her grip and catches her hands and pulls her closer to stop her and they share a beautiful eyelock...which was broken by the bell sound...Both come back to the senses and Ishita gets up "mein dekh thi hoon"she says awkwardly and moves from there

Raman follows her and mean while Mihika opens the door...both Raman and Ishita comes out...

"Raman "comes a shout

Raman sees the source of the sound"shagun!!"and he hugs her...Ishita looks on

That's it guys...don't knw whether it reached ur expectations or not...if not really sorry...vl try nxt time
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
not fair yaar ishita ko abhi toh
yeh pata lagne laga tha ki she loves
aur usmain ye shagun
but joulesy part dekhne main
maza ayega continue soon waiting early
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg again this Shagun plz yaar don't bring her
I don't want ishitha to get hurt by seeing them together and also want Raman to realize his feelings yaar it's a request
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
aww...ishra stil dont know wht is between thm...

i think ishu realisisng...

raman's protectveness is shown...

cute kiss of ishra...

ab shagun kyon...??

nd dnt say ki vo shaurya ki behen hain...

i hop ye shurya ka drama yehi katam karde...


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Posted: 10 years ago
Read all the chapters in a one go. And trust me when i say this u r simply amazing.
Loved each and every chapter and u write so well.
Thanks for the pm and continue soon :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
A1 Ramya...
Mazaa aa gaya. .
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Posted: 10 years ago
All is going well,what is the need of shaGUNIYA..
yeh kaha ka twist hai,yeh mat kahana raman ka girl friend..

Atleast realise ka time dedho usse..
Raman, really he kissed ishita..he not obeserving his acts what he is doing with ishu.

Already ishu marriage fix with mani right,then u want to fix sharam marriage..

Shaurya ka sis shaGUNIYA hai kya?
Yeh toh bahuth gad baad hoga...messy messy pari.

If shaurya and shaGUNIYA knows this,if they not back off marriage with roshini
or shaurya want to marry ishita after knowing all drama..?

i love the whole drama,except shaguniya entry..

Thanks for pm
Edited by janani_divan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yeh kya ho gya...shagun aa gyi or sirf ishu ko ehsaas hua... 😔...ab ishu dher sara jealous hogi na...

But I loved it mission roshni ka hone wala pati bhagao...Raman ko kuch feel nhi hua ishu ko kiss karke?
I am waiting for Raman to realise and plz make shagun wrap up soon...

Loved it...
Continue soon
Thanks for pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg this shogun came!!!!
nooo
thank u for the long update..
update soonish
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
shagun's entry...now ishita will be jealous and will realize her feelings towards raman😉
but when will raman realize his feelings...
raman kissed ishita😳
liked ishita's convo with shaurya😆
thanks for pm
update it whenever u get time dear😊

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