New SS - Forever - Note and teaser- pg 8 26 may

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Hello,
Hi there, I am new to this forum, but certainly not new to the show. what got me here?? IshRa. well, I am a closet writer who peeks out whenver characters push me tell a story about them.
Well, to cut a long story short (pun fully intended 😉) IshRa and the wonderful writers of this forum ( have started reading few stories i foung here, mainly for inspiration) have mauled me back into writing, and I am so excited to present to you my first IshRa story - Forever.
So this inteded as a short story, and might turn out to be longer, I am not sure.
Without babbling further, I'll quickly post a quick intro followed by a little prologue. Do tell me what you peeps think. and be brutally honest! appreciations welcome. critiques welcome even more :) :)
thanks in advance.
Mridhu
Forever
Ishita Iyer was a dreamer. She was also the most boisterous advocate of love you could find. her beloved books and her parents' wonderful marriage made her believe and always want her own happily ever after.
left at the altar by her boyfriend of 4 years, she stops dreaming, and she stops believing. In love. in forever.
Until one day she met Raman Bhalla, and everything changed.
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Not the best intro, but hey, there it goes!
Thanks again. :) :) :)
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INDEX
Prologue - Page 1
Part 1 - Page 2
Part 2 - Page 5
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Prologue

"They" say love is blind.

Right.

"They" say love is forever.

Wrong.

Love.

Ishita thought gingerly as a sole tear fell down on the rumpled piece of paper, marring the already runny ink, making the contents almost illegible.

But she didn't need the ink anymore. Those words were etched in her heart and left an empty space in their wake.

I can't do this. I'm sorry. Love, subbu

Love.

Ishita's lips curled up in a humorless smile. The man had ditched her at the altar and signed his rejection with love.

This was the man she'd thought was her best friend. This was the man she'd spent hours talking to. This was the man she's shared her wildest dreams, her deepest fears. This was the man whom she thought knew her more than she knew herself. This was the man she'd wanted to marry.

This was the man she'd loved with all her being. This was the man she'd thought would love her forever.

Forever.

The silence around her weighed in on her. She needed to get out. Out of the room. Out of the memories. Out of her sorry state.

"Kanna dinner is ready" her mother's voice floated in.

Great timing, Ishita thought.

"Coming amma" Pushing herself on her feet, she walked out, tossing the crumpled note in the bin on her way out.

She was done with love. Forever.

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Interesting Start please Update soon and please PM me!
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great start and sounds interesting
cont. soon
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Originally posted by: Divancraze

Interesting Start please Update soon and please PM me!


Thank you. update coming up tomorrow :)
I'm sorry I do not keep a pm list . PlS do check in here for updates
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Originally posted by: anoos123

Good start.

Plz continue soon.


Thanks.

Originally posted by: pari...

Interesting start

Continue soon


Thanks paRI

Originally posted by: Pravalli

Interesting update

Continue soon


Thank you. Will update soon

Originally posted by: rk654

great start and sounds interesting

cont. soon


Thanks.
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Hey there! I am in awe of your writing style.😳

Looking forward to the first chapter.

Keep up the great work.👏

And yeah, welcome to the forum.😃
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Originally posted by: _DarkLady_

Hey there! I am in awe of your writing style.😳

Looking forward to the first chapter.

Keep up the great work.👏

And yeah, welcome to the forum.😃

haww, thanks! :) first chapter coming right up.
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hi,

I am back and this time sooner than i thought. :) So without further ado, let me just bring on the first part.
A little disclaimer though - my writing is still a bit rusty so this chapter ended up a bit choppy, not as free flowing as I would have liked. but hey, do read and comment away!
Cause, remember, your comments and critiques help - a lot!!
thanks,
Mridhu
PART 1
" Ishu, why can't you listen to me?"

Ishita sighed and closed her laptop. A normal day at the iyer household began like this. Her mother scuttering about, setting the table, handing her appa his coffee, putting out their breakfast and discussing her favorite topic.

Marriage.

" amma I do listen to you" a pointed look from her mother. " I just don't agree with you" she finished firmly, returning to her laptop. If she didn't finish this presentation today her boss would kill her.

Out of the corner of her eye, she noticed amma looking at her. And she could bet her salary that amma was thinking -
" how do I make this girl understand..."
"Vishwa you tell her" Ishita cooed,matching her mother syllable to syllable. That enticed a fond chuckle from appa.

Closing her laptop shut once more, she gathered her things. She wasn't getting any work done, might as well go to office early, she decided.
" ISHU - this is not a joke. You are 30 yea -"
" let her be Madhavi" appa cut her off.
" thank you" Ishita whispered, bending down to kiss his cheek. " but she is right, you know" he whispered back, shooting his wife a look who was back in the kitchen muttering.
" don't you start too, appa" she muttered.
30 years old. Not married. Kadavule, won't this girl understand she can't be single all her life. Lonely.

" amma I can hear you!" she called out.
Stupid. Stupid. Stupid.

That's all her mother needed to come out of the kitchen and start it again, " good because you can't.."
" yes I can" ishita muttered under her breath, making sure her mother didn't hear her
By now her mother had turned her attention to her father. " Vishwa, I spoke to Santosh yesterday"
Oh great - one more guy for her to atleast see, Ishita groaned inwardly.

" her son is around the same age. We both think it's a wonderful match"
That stopped Ishita rights in her tracks. She whirled around to face her mother, " you and your friend think what?"
Her mother smiled jubilantly. Having got her attention, Madhavi quickly walked towards her, " it would be perfect, Ishu. You've known each other since you were kids"

" it was just one stupid summer camp"
One whole summer camp, ishu" her mother said, eyes twinkling in excitement.

" which lasted 2 weeks - appa, help me here" she cried in exasperation, turning to her father. To her dismay, her father put down the paper and came to stand beside her mother, " it's not a bad idea, ishu. You've -"
" it's an EXCELLENT idea, Vishwa" her mother exclaimed.
Her father shot her mother a look, " as I was saying, it's not a bad idea.just think about it. It's ultimately going to be your choice, beta. We won't force you.but think about it"
"but Vishwa -"
" Madhu!" her father said sternly. Her mother pouted, but kept quite nonetheless.
Ishita frowned, thinking about what her father had just said. They has been through this a hundred times. Her mother would bring up the topic,she wouldn't want to even talk about it, but for her parents she would promise to think about it. Luckily for her, till now, every guy suggested by her mom and mom's friend had rejected her.
And everytime a rejection came she'd had a secret party in her room.
But this time... This time the person in question was...
No way!!
" I don't believe you want me to marry... Raman bhalla!!" she exclaimed indignantly, fixing her mother with a stern glare which yelled No Way.

But her mother wasn't looking at her. She was looking past her. Happiness and excitement shone in her mother's eyes and she was clasping her hands in glee.

Ishita didn't need to turn around to guess.

I hope it's rajinikanth there she muttered under her breath, turning around.

He was leaning casually against the doorway, arms folded beneath his chest, One eyebrow raised in question

" and what's wrong with Raman bhalla?"

Yup. The gods hated her

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