IshRa TS - | An Apology For A Proposal | Completed - Page 29

Originally posted by: AdyaXoxo

"An apology for a Proposal " when i first read the title in my PM box , i was like wow .. now this is something different ...

the title was intriguing and i was like if the title is so interesting , then the SS has to be mind-blowing..

and then i though AWW.. this writer is gonna be so swet ... and i definitely conversed wih one of the sweetest peron , a person who can give my extra-choco chip cake complex ..

This TS of yours di , brought us close ...

and i will always love it a bit more to ur rest ;p

u know whenever i love something ,i start making conjectures and so i did it on ur story//

luckily , it was correct

P.S1 - i was on cloud 9 when i got to know that ..

"I fell in love with her when we were together, then fell deeper in love with her in the years we were apart."

- Nicholas Spark

Separation is something very painful s what many people say , but actually only a person who has experienced it can understand the depth of it ,some say it makes us forget the person as the saying goes "out of sight out of mind" , some say it makes us fall deeper in love as the saying goes"distance makes a heart grow fonder" .

Funny isn't it ? hahah .. if u feel i am here to preach its nothing like that ;p

di , in this TS u potrayed how love may be our weakness or our strength ..

you know i will not call ishita here a mahan stri , because actually ishita did the correct step ... she did exactly what love is about .. .sacrifices .. nay .. thats just a part

i don't know whether t was ur intention to potrayed something so deep , but honestly i could see all of it...

u know ... ishitas action is justified and in one way not ..

she let go of her love because she felt they we're perfect for each other -thus its justified ..that was for the benefit of her love .

but its not justified as when raman confessed thatch loves u then why...

but still as the saying goes"its better to be late than ever"

now leave the philosophical part coming to the adjectives -

1)superb

2) mind blowing

3) excellent

4) terrific

5) awesome

6) outstanding

7) amazing

8) extra-ordinary

9) unique

10)impeccable

11)PERFECT

urghhh.. i need to improve my vocabulary ...

u know all these adjectives are quite less for this amazing TS

u know di , what i love the most about ur writing ,its ur ability to explain the feelings ..as a writer its very difficult to make the reader feel as if everything is happening around them and u definitely did make me feel so..srsly , pls tell me when on earth will u call yourself a writer ?u have to answer this question .. you know its very difficult to expiresss ur ideology to the reader nd you did ..

so u r a writer and an amzing one at that ..

get it ?

u remember u said u r not a writer because u got only 30 likes , so now you have 336 replies and 9874 views ...and thats quite a lot for a TS .. so u see ur works appreciated by smarties like me .. ;p

now to the parts which surely touched a chord

P.S 2 if you have less time , simply read it as everything ...

in the first part of the TS -

1)

Raman adored Ishita's words. That's what he liked the most about her. Her simple talks, natural beauty, her smile, her genuineness, her simplicity, those made him fall for her so easily as he was not interested in girls. But Ishita Vishwanaathan Iyer, she was the only one for him, he was ready to die. Her long, smooth hair blew upon his face, used to make his day beautiful. He knew, he was in love with her but he had no strength to confess it to her. But this 31^st, he had gathered some of his feelings of love to confess. He was all ready. But he was waiting for his destiny to support him.

2) the 2nd part i cant choose any as i loved all equally ..

3) similar dilemma

continue writing suvh amzing works ,, i am tired of editing the post ...

i love this TS a lot <3

and u know wat i love u more :*

huga and kisses always

XOXOXO

adya

Originally posted by: AdyaXoxo

i cant find my previous comment so i am unressing here only ;p

Originally posted by: liveistolove

A good TS 😊

Read all the 3 parts in a single go..

Short but sweet..3 year's story in 3 parts 👍🏼

End is what matters the most..Ishra together at the end is the best way to finish a story.. 👏

keep writing.. 🤗

Originally posted by: -DivyanKaran-

Wow..in a go😛. That means a lot for me dear.

Thank you so much for the appreciation. I hope, it was worth of time for you.

Thanks😃.

Originally posted by: -Pankhuri-

btw i liked the name of the story 😊😊