IshRa TS - | An Apology For A Proposal | Completed

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Three Shots

Hello my awesome friends!

How are you? This is Insha back with a three shots. To thank all of you is very less, because you all are my mentors. Thank you so much guys for always being there to support me. Love you YHMians.

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A very small introduction to the fellows of this story.

Raman: A 25 years old, college student.

Ishita: A 23 years old, college student.

Mihika: A 22 years old, Ishita's collegeous.


AN APOLOGY FOR A PROPOSAL

Part I

It was an another enjoyable and interesting morning for the fellows of Delhi University. It had to be basically. Because there was going to start a new year 2015 with loads of happiness for Ishita and Raman and their college lives were also going to end finally. They and their buddies were thinking to celebrate the 31st of 2014 in an awesome way, it was tonight.

Raman: "Guys..only some few hours are remaining for the new year. Have we planned anything special?"

"There is nothing in my mind right now." One said.

He noticed Ishita's silence who was sitting just beside him but was not there.

Raman shaking her hands, "Ishita, what are you upto? But, why are you so silent?"

Ishita: "Huh..nothing special. Actually, my suggestion is that we should spend this 31st night with our loved ones, someone whom we love the most. We have some special feelings for them. Don't we?" she smiled at the end.

"Yeah..that's such a nice idea Ishu." One smiled.

Raman adored Ishita's words. That's what he liked the most about her. Her simple talks, natural beauty, her smile, her genuineness, her simplicity, those made him fall for her so easily as he was not interested in girls. But Ishita Vishwanaathan Iyer, she was the only one for him, he was ready to die. Her long, smooth hair blew upon his face, used to make his day beautiful. He knew, he was in love with her but he had no strength to confess it to her. But this 31st, he had gathered some of his feelings of love to confess. He was all ready. But he was waiting for his destiny to support him.

"Raman..where have you been lost?" said Ishita patting his shoulder gently.

Raman: "Huh..no, I mean that's your amazing suggestion Ishita. It is."

Ishita: "Thanks Raman."

Everyone planned for a grand party tonight together to celebrate. Some girls lost the world in search of fashionable designer dresses where Ishita thought to wear something special this night. On the other hand, Raman was getting all his energies only to put on his lady love.

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Mihika calls Ishita in order to know what was she upto for tonight.

Mihika: "Ishu?"

Ishita: "Yeah..Mihika."

Mihika: "Ishu, what are you going to wear tonight. Let me tell you, you should look super gorgeous tonight. You are..but it should be more."

Ishita: "Okay sweety. I'd wear a kanjeeveram saree with the shades of black. Okay?"

Mihika: "Sure. Okay then, catch you at 8."

They cut the call.

*****

In evening, everyone was getting ready for the grand party where Raman was looking very hunk in a black shirt with a blazer and a formal pant. His getup was waiting for his love but he could not resist anymore to see how Ishita was dressed up. His imagination came true when he saw her in the party; she was looking beyond beautiful in the Kanzeeveram Saree with the shades of black on pure beauty. She had her hair hung up with the fragnance. Her eyes were the sign of her natural beauty. She was simply glowing in the party. She was a diamond.

Ishita stepped towards Raman.

Ishita: "What are you looking at Raman?"

Raman: "Ishita, do you have any idea, how gorgeous you are looking?"

She blushed at his expressions. That beautiful lady had no idea of his words, what he meant for. He was in love with her. Simple.

*****

At 12:30 o' clock.

"Oh my God Raman...I can't believe it. It's so funny! Aiyoo..Murugann!" Ishita was deadly laughing at a funny talk with Raman in a bus. After celebrating the 31st, they were getting back to the home. After spending a lot of time with the buddies, their eyes got teary. After all, they were going to be separated. Their semesters were finished and now they had to bright their future more. But this journey of their friendship was so beautiful, they couldn't forget. It was amazing. The crackers were being cracked by the people. There was a loud and huge celebration. Every streets and transports were decorated. The whole world was shining beautifully.

Ishita: "Hahahaa..! Raman, that was funniest, I tell you. How can they? Hahahaa..!"

Raman was only adoring her, the way she was laughing. His heart permitted him to speak out his heart.

Raman: "Ishita..I love you!"

Ishita: "What?"

Those three magical words left Ishita aghasted. She had not expected it at all. She was pure by her heart. She hadn't any developing feelings towards any by and now, Raman was proposing her directly.

Raman: "I love you Ishita! I can't live without you. Since I saw you, I fell in love with you. I don't know how but it's the reality. Ishita, would you marry me? I know, it's a difficult situation for you though but I really love you. We are friends since 5 years and we know well about our families too. Then..."

Ishita was stunned totally. Likewise, the ground has been removed from her land. She was clueless about it.

Ishita: "Raman..see.."

The bus stopped at the stoppage. They exit out of the bus expressionlessly.

Ishita continues, "Raman..see..I need time please. Whatever the decision I would take, it would be for my whole life. Undoubtedly, you are my best-est friend after Mihika and we are very close to each other. I was not aware of your feelings but still..I need time. I hope you would understand Raman." She looked down in embarrassement.

Raman: "Sure Ishita. BTW, once again, a very happy and prosperous new year."

Ishita: "Same to you Raman."

They smiled and left without sharing any eye-locks.

*****

"Ishu..what should you do? Should you accept Raman's proposal?" Ishita was asking the same question again and again to herself. She was very confused. Her heart was thudding for the confusion. All her memories were squirming down in her mind. How they became friends, then best friends, all the enjoyable trips with each other, those lovely long drives, being together always. Every moments were special for her so as Raman. She was confused thinking, did she love him? The night passed with the loads of her confusion but she had not found out the decision. No one had any idea, how would their next year's first morning would be. Everything was changed and nobody had thought about it for a once.

*****

Precap: Raman hates Ishita for refusing his proposal whereas Ishita breaksdown accepting his proposal in her deep inside soul.

*****

INDEX WITH DIRECT LINKS


Chapter II - Chapter II

Chapter III - Chapter III

COMPLETED


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Impossible.Girl thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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See I kept my promise first one to comment... Oops first one to reserve i think

Inshu didi love you for writing this
IshRa in college ... Good
Ishita's plan was so simple yet incredible
In black kanjeewaram ... Wow
Ishu looks gorgeous in black especially the one she wore on shagun sangeet.Was this like that ?
Raman's proposal was cute...
OMG...What was this precap ????
Continue soon
Edited by vidya_prasad - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res
Unres...
Insha di... It's marvellous,terrific,superb, osm and every adjective would still be an understatement ..
Awww...
Now let me list what all I love :-
(In short everything but still ) -
Hmm, , ishu is wearing shagun me sangeet ka sari .. Haina ?
Vaise she looks a stunner in anything but i love her in black ...
Accha leave this ...
Awww... I love this Raman..
U know I feel so bad for him he took so much courage to speak up ..
And confess but pffttt ...
But honestly ishita shed take her mind like she said it would be lifelong and she needs to decide carefully ..
And I agree with her .. Coz she may repent if this was not fictional na...
Coming to the point again .. .
So it's again Raman to RKB...
Ok ..I guess every one will hate me but I love these cliche things..
And especially transformation ..if u will show one...
But wait ...
OHMG ... This can't be your 3rd fiction ..
And di just edit the line .. I am not a writer .. Coz u r not just a writer u r an amazingly fantabulous writer ..
K?
Good.. . Now again to the TS ...
HAWWW .. it can't be a TS ... This has to be a SS at least ..
Ok .. . Please ... Pretty please with the cherry on the top
Accha wait I have more ...
See when apSHAGUN not there how can ishra happen ...
Vaise I don't mind <winks>...
Hmmm ... Vaise the bus wala scene is frm some movie ...
I have seen a tv show too .. . .
Ya I guess Dekha ek khwaab ...
The movie i don't know ...
But I prefer the way u portrayed it ,,,, <MUAHH>
Accha .. Vaise ... I love the precap .. . .like a lot wala lot ... K?
Ya wat more ,,,
Yes ,, ilu for PMing ,,,
Continue writing and PMing me like a sweetie pie ...
Muaahhh<3
Huga and kisses
Xoxo
Adya
Edited by AdyaXoxo - 10 years ago
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superb start continue it soon
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Insha ,thanks for another story dear.its completly different.e lo shagun be there in this story.if proposal reject means its turn to hate?different concept.ishita may be manipulated by some one.thanks for pm dear.lovely concept.raman turn to a angry young man.continue soon
Edited by janani_divan - 10 years ago
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Really Vry Beautiful... Continue soonnn
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nice one 👍🏼 Insha di 😊
luking forward

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it was superb..👏
way he proposed her was sweet..😳
precap is interesting..
why she isn't accepting his love openly..😭

update soon dear..😃


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👏hey insha you back with another ts.wow college life.nice concept dear.please add some nokjoke between them.(coz i imagining their small version) both Raman and Ishitha sooo cute.do continue asap.. Thanks for pm me
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Insha ,break the wall of suspence dear..after complition of college they are seperated in their own way.just im expecting,did raman planning to torture ishita?hmm exicted dear.

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