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Posted: 10 years ago
In my random search for songs today, I came across this. I am absolutely in love with it! The lyrics...they are absolutely perfectly fitting for Ranjan and Savita.


Lakh duniya kahe 'tum nahi ho'
Tum yahin ho, Tum yahin ho
Lakh duniya kahe 'tum nahi ho'
Tum yahin ho, Tum yahin ho

Meri har soch me, meri har baat me
Mere ehsaas me, mere jazbaat me
Tum hi tum ho
Tum har kahin ho
Ho o laakh duniya kahe tum nahi ho
Tum yahin ho, tum yahin ho
Ho o laakh duniya kahe tum nahi ho
Tum yahin ho, tum yahin ho

Tumne chhoda hai kab saath mera
Thaame ho aaj bhi hath mera
Koi manzil koi rehguzar ho
Aaj bhi tum mere humsafar ho
Jaaun chaahe jahaan tum wahin ho
Ho o o lakh duniya kahe tum nahi ho
Tum yahin ho, tum yahin ho
Ho o o lakh duniya kahe tum nahi ho

Tum yahin ho, tum yahin ho...

Khushboo banke hawaaon me tum ho
Rang banke fizaaon me tum ho
Koi gaaye koi saans goonje
Sab sureeli sadaaon mein tum ho
Tumko har roop me dil hai pehchanta
Log hai bekhabar par dil hai jaanta
Tu mere paas ho, dilnashin ho
Ho o o lakh duniya kahe tum nahi ho
Tum yahin ho, tum yahin ho
Ho o o lakh duniya kahe tum nahi ho
Tum yahin ho, tum yahin ho
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Posted: 10 years ago
"To step on"


Vik again dozed off on the couch, she helped clean up... like she always did at D II, ate her dessert in between ...in the kitchen, he wandered in with Lasya held in his arms
Lasya wore a polka dotted sleeveless shorts and cami for bed... her chunky dimpled arms smooth as butter, her hair all over her face like Uncle R's😳
She washed rinsed sand dried her hands as he ate off her bowl walking over

The baby itching her face pushing her longish curls away

"People pay big bucks to get their hair curled like this onakku natural curls... IVLAV CURLS"☺️ (so curly) CUTENESS" she cooed as she
gathered it all removed her lil sparkly scuncie gripped it between her teeth and deftly and tied one big fountain on top of her head,
he watched fascinated how practised and effortless her moves were...
Lasya gritted her rice grain like teeth unable to express
"Ondi ma... what happened kanna? Are u upset, u want to come to me? Vareya? I will show u dishwasher and 3 THREE SINK FAUCETS, ellam fountain madiri (like ur hair)" she giggled

He gently handed her, she got a kitchen tour faucet demo, exhaust demo... every giant frig was opened... she shook as the cold draft of air hit her face

He watched amused as she entertained her so simply😳
Brought her back to her destination, handing her back ..when she was done she squished the chubby cheeks pressing it all the way to Uncle R's chest

II left lipstick stains on her cheek... "CUTIE... enakku kudu onnu" (gimme one)

He bent down and gently grabbed her lipstick smudged lips, in a full kiss, with tongue and all

She looked on startled at what he was doing to her Mami and controrted her face and began to cry

"Like this peanut" he taught his niece... "This is Uncle R's fave kiss"
She reached and grabbed his lower lip, wiping it off with her thumb... "Are u masking the Bourbon with rasmalai?" she chuckled
He bent down and inhaled her neck, "I guess" he groaned... tired

"Good food II" he said gently

"Dont... u hated the makhani"

He rubbed his chin on her shoulder... like he was scraping dust off a wall

"Save it chollu da, save it... Mami doesnt need any compliments from u. " Ii taught her

She cooed watching II's lips move with rapt attention
She reached for II's sparkling diamond on her nose, and caught it... "Thats MY KINDA baby... she knows her stuff" II chuckled

"Lets go to bed" he nuzzled as Mahavir turned from the sink, she gave him a finger kangi

"I am sweaty and greasy... I have to shower" "U take her up I am on my way" "I bet Manny will understand" II offered


"I might have a new grease fightin soap" he muttered softly

"I used it, it just makes me want to use it every hour" she quivered, smiling

"Go out da... take her... I am almost done" she ordered

"They will do it II" he insisted

"I know... I am just being a pest" "they will soon ban me" she said smiling

He left with the baby, she cleaned up... and went out Vik was upstairs, she wanted to ask if they needed anything...

Ranjan and her were looking at something on the ipad, her hubs was nowhere in sight

The nanny talked on the phone in the front lawn...

"Bahar garmi hai aap andar baat karlo? Sun room mein ya aur kamre mein?" she offered

"Bhabhiji apni mummy se lad rahi hoon" she chuckled

"Amen!" II smiled
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"Lasya kahan hai?" she asked Ranjan and Manya

"Hey u dont have to do anything itne saare log hai Dad ke paas" she said

"Its the only thing I do back home at D II... finding tiny katoris or containers for leftover food is very therapeutic for me" II giggled

Manny looked at her strangely

"Gaaogey beta?" Ranjan asked

"She just came Dad I bet she wants to hang out" II said

Manya didnt protest, and insist she sing... II noticed

"Umm aapko kuch chahiye to main help karoon?" Ii asked

"OMG!! she is too formal Dad" Manya laughed out loud as if II cracked a joke

"Beta she is trying to help" Ranjan was offended

"Oh! I know... I get it... but Ishita I WAS HERE A MONTH AGO... TWO MONTHS AGO?" she waved two fingers

"Umm I know... I am sorry" II mumbled

"I probably know whats in every closet in each of the 24 rooms" Manny said proudly

II nodded wimpishly

AYYYO!! WHY CANT U SHUT UP
TEVAYA? WHY DID U HAVE TO OFFER? SHE TOLD YOU
ON YOUR FACE...SHE DOESNT NEED YOU
SHUT UP II
THIS VAI IS GOING TO RUIN U SOME DAY
(This motor mouth)

"I am hoping I can go to work tomorrow, if I dont see u in the morning I will see u at night?" she asked

"Beta... no if he has said no... it means no" Ranjan ordered

"OFCOURSE U WILL, Abhi I was talking to Sam... I told her I am here now... kuch plan kar" "Dad I will be here until u kick me out"

"Betaji, na beta na... aisi gallan na kar puttar" Ranjan became senti

Manny basked in the glow...

"Yes that would be so much fun... I cant wait" II jumped "If u can be here "

II... WILL SHE EVER LEARN?
SHE JUST GOT SNUBBED
NOPE!!!


"Ummm ya... lets see when she can get away from the trials of a joint family existence" Manny sniggered

"Its not that bad... mera matlab... umm.. Akka bhi rehti hai... even Amma Appa.. so now for me"

"Dad is a TEDDY BEAR" Manya reminded her

II nodded CLUELESS about what to say to her even... Manny had a snappish, defensive answer for everything

"Ya he is amazing"II nodded... a lil hurt

"Beta... jao so jao... I can take Lasya home" he coaxed II

"Arey AISE kaise? I AM TAKING her home.. when Vik wakes up... her him and I have a night cap date with Tan and Sam" Manya giggled

She knew II had the week off, yet did not invite her

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

She went up to find Uncle R and lasya curled up on the recliner by the bed fast asleep, she lay face down on his chest sprawled like a polka dotted flower her juddu/fountain was undone, he held the sparkly scuncie on his fingers

She gently took it and gathered up his hair and made a giant fountain on his head, like lil Sikh kids.
She kneeled by the chair and ogled... removed the scuncie off his hair, tousled it...
picked up Lasya's fat clenched fist, and inserted her finger... the baby was unmoved...
She grabbed a blanket from the bed and draped them...both

Went to take a shower... returned to find them still asleep

She gently picked up Lasya, as Manny and the nanny made their way up...

Lasya woke shivering, getting chills from the AC... she wrapped her in a throw off the upholstered chair

Manya looked around the dark moonlit room

"Its not blue any more?" she asked looking at the orange pattern on the sheets

"No" II said nervously

they left...

Lets go to bed, she curled up where Lasya lay on him moments ago

"Lets go to bed" she urged
He pulled the blanket securely over them...

Manny walked in "Oops! sorry, did she leave her teether?" she asked... taking in II's appearance, the
skimpy shorts and the cami... her braid sliding to the front... her choora filled wrists...

II fell off the chair in embarrassment... found the pink water filled ring under her foot...
R&B was unfazed...

"I am sorry I stepped on it" II whispered

"No... its OK" manny said
Walking away without smiling...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...Nisha, I don't know how you write these updates so realistically. The discomfort, feeling out of place, I really feel for II. 👏 II, Lasya, and R&B are so cute together!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow another pen portrait... Unravelling of Manny II relation...After the pampering and attention shes been getting II now struggles with a contender for attention...not only is Manny establishing her presence she is critical of II especially the intimacy between R& B and II ...thats the gut feeling one gets...and my morning begins with the Morning Raga
Edited by srividyamouli - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kalviswes

Awesome update...Nisha, I don't know how you write these updates so realistically. The discomfort, feeling out of place, I really feel for II. 👏 II, Lasya, and R&B are so cute together!!!!



THANK YOU SO MUCH😳😃 Some scenes come to me before hand some flow just when I begin to write. Today it just flowed. Someone asked me if choose the title first or the content.
I always write the content and pick a title based on the "drift"
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Posted: 10 years ago
I got up early to catch up on my reading ...read all updates that came over the weekend till this one.
I love the fact that II and R&B are getting closer...settling down with it. 😊
I don't like Manny too much though!
Love they way you bring Lasya up often...the chubby little potato😆
Edited by Seriousreader - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ati uttam, super, fantastic..Nisha this one flowed flawlessly, aww so sweet, I wish she had taken a picture of RB with his hair in a fountain...cho cho chweet! Thoda aur intense kar de yeh Manya aur II ka silent drama, waise on second thoughts her quick snappish answers are enough to put II in the discomfort zone. Want to see RB witness this first hand..although won't do much but will be perceptive enough to feel what's going on.

Aur ab sabse ahem sawaal, ek aur update ki ummeed hai aaj? Kripya Jawab den.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I typed this huge reply and my phone had to act crazy and everythingggot erased...!!

Anyway
I loved II today she is doing everything in her reach to make sure she establishes normal conversations with Manny...I'm proud of her...she is trying (y)

Manny and her snapping at everutging that II says is a senario i see haviny positive effects...i am like that when im upset or angry at somebody i ho on giving such snap shoy bullet through ypur head replies...just like that my frustration and anget vanishes...i hope manny soon falls short of her reasons to snap once she vents out and voices her insecurities this way...its not a good habbit to vent out but its a part if who she is...like its a part of who i am..!

R&B II and lasya scenes are always a delight...they are the perfect family to me...tiny little family inside a joint famlily...heart warming..and cutness perfrcted...there scenes make small lava's of warmth explode in my tummy when I read about them
Uncle R is just suchhh a brat..! 😳 kitchen romance and all...I loved the scene

Nisha these things u write are so close to real life...I can see these scenes plating around in some PR the other family...it feels like I'm surrounded by many II's ranjan's R&B's Manny's and everybody else each unique in their own way

I loved lasya's fountain 😳 my mom used to tie my hair up like that... Later it was ranked up to shamili sh air style all my childhood
Edited by namratha.shree - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

The entire Manny and II interaction is like something so real playing out right in front. Written fantastically - needless to say

It's just as interesting as I thought you would make it Nisha, spiced up with a dash of goood humour with II's self talk. II's "goofism" is at its best... simply loving her for it! And R&B sleeping with Lasya - our man is content. Cuts a perfect family picture😳

Your attention to detail is always brilliant in every update...II tidying up, R&B eating off her bowl, even the nanny talking to her mom !!!

Its all right for Manny to exercise her right in her house.. chalta hai, whatever happens at the end of the day II & Manny are on the same side of the fence when it comes to family well-being. Chachu clan has vested interest, not Manny.

Yep its not all right for Manny to snub II thus, but not everyone can be nice and pleasing. Maybe II will realise it with time and devise her own goofy way to tackle this undercurrent. Beech me R&B ka kya hoga😆

Stranger Anxiety reminded me the first time my mil saw my daughter at 3 months. She plain refused to stop crying in her arms... and quietened the minute my mom held her, given that my mom was there since her birth... but kya scene tha 😆...poor mil trying to so hard and my mom embarrassed


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Posted: 10 years ago
A quick question Nisha...
Based on the baby emoticon and the red seal of approval, are we gearing towards a baby and that too arriving towards Savita's b'day ( January na ?? ) The dates work great...I have calculated 😛

I know I sound like the elder in the family counting dates and months and all set to knit and prepare the baby's layette 😃😃, but Iam sure all of us would like to be forewarned !!

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