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Posted: 10 years ago
Neethi,
just read ur OS! 😊
Vaise no matter how busy I am, or no matter how much i do not feel like reading 😆
I always always cannot stop myself wen i get to know an OS by u is out there! 😊 Love u soo much 🤗

coming to d OS,
Firstly, Lovely choice of song 😃

Hayee..Ishita ka pyaar for raman

my fav portions:

"I'll dance so much that..."

"...that we'll probably have to put the cast back on!" he had joked in reply, 😆👏 soo cute! 😃

It broke his heart to see her tear-stained face, so he brought her hand to his lips, and kissing it softly, placed it on his heart and mouthed, "I'm sorry." - too touchy! 👏

When it comes to expressing emotions through writing, u r perfect Neethi! 👏 Even the simplest of things really come across beautifully.

Plus i can almost always see the scenes u write play right in front of me.

U know dis story was simple yet soo beautiful..esp d idea of him making her dance part.. too touchy..where do u get dese kind of lovely ideas yaar..

look at me, recently all my oses hv been so complicated 😆 n u made such a lovely OS out of such an uncomplicated idea 👏 hats off yaar! I wish i cud think that simply and yet write that eloquently.

i donno wat u do..but ur OSes are always magical.. this was another gem.




Edited by peace.. - 10 years ago
peace.. thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
and neethi,
lovely title of the OS!
Mehak_KPian thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nrn1486- Sweet and Typical IshRa wala OS! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: peace..

Neethi,

just read ur OS! 😊
Vaise no matter how busy I am, or no matter how much i do not feel like reading 😆
I always always cannot stop myself wen i get to know an OS by u is out there! 😊 Love u soo much 🤗

coming to d OS,
Firstly, Lovely choice of song 😃

Hayee..Ishita ka pyaar for raman

my fav portions:

"I'll dance so much that..."

"...that we'll probably have to put the cast back on!" he had joked in reply, 😆👏 soo cute! 😃

It broke his heart to see her tear-stained face, so he brought her hand to his lips, and kissing it softly, placed it on his heart and mouthed, "I'm sorry." - too touchy! 👏

When it comes to expressing emotions through writing, u r perfect Neethi! 👏 Even the simplest of things really come across beautifully.

Plus i can almost always see the scenes u write play right in front of me.

U know dis story was simple yet soo beautiful..esp d idea of him making her dance part.. where do u get dese kind of lovely ideas yaar..

look at me, recently all my oses hv been so complicated 😆 n u made such a lovely OS out of such an uncomplicated idea 👏 hats off yaar! I wish i cud think that simply and yet write that eloquently.

i donno wat u do..but ur OSes are always magical.. this was another gem.




And I love reading your comments!! They always make my day🤗
Especially your last line in this case! So flattering it is😃
Glad to know you liked the song.I wasn't sure if it would fit in here. I just knew I liked the song😆
And its always easier to write the about the simple stuff yar.. I can never weave complicated tales like you people! That's why I admire all the writers here who write stories with multiple parts because my stories usually start and end in one part only😆
Anyway, thanks again for the lovely comment dear!
Looking forward to your next update now😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: peace..

and neethi,

lovely title of the OS!


Thanks😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Mehak..

Nrn1486- Sweet and Typical IshRa wala OS! 😳


Thanks Mehak😊
peace.. thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nrn1486



And I love reading your comments!! They always make my day🤗
Especially your last line in this case! So flattering it is😃
Glad to know you liked the song.I wasn't sure if it would fit in here. I just knew I liked the song😆
And its always easier to write the about the simple stuff yar.. I can never weave complicated tales like you people! That's why I admire all the writers here who write stories with multiple parts because my stories usually start and end in one part only😆
Anyway, thanks again for the lovely comment dear!
Looking forward to your next update now😃


Even I wonder how people write FF's and SSes..n Software Symphonies- 19/20 threads 😲
Seriously like how much can people imagine!
Though I believe writing a simple story beautifully is altogether another art..only few master at it! n u definitely do. 😊

Btw i donno wen my next update is gonna be. 😕 kabhi bhi ho sakta hai.




Edited by peace.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohhh love this song one of my favorites... N you have matched the lyrics with story...
You have made this song a part of your story... :)
SA1234 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was really good..excellent song choice too..do write more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Neethi: very cute and innocent. I really love the song you used and you incorporated it into the story beautifully. Nice job!

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