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pari

@divazfankau

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#111

wow Beautiful update
I love the meaning sexy
super duper updated

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RIA ROY

@wrizaa

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#112

fabulous. ... i loved it a lot... 👏

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AdventureGirl14

@AdventureGirl14

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Such a cute OS.. loved the little moments you described between Raman and Ishita. Could completely relate to their characters!

And nice song selection!😊

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Sakshi

@sakshi.ekansh

Sparkler

+ 16

Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Amazing.. The depth of Ishra's relationship is not only based on PDA which "Shabbu" were expecting.. Their love is more of divine.. More of serene and deeper.. Loved the transformed IshRa you depicted.. South Indian loving Raman and Punjabi lover Ishita.. The ease with which their life is flowing is the sweet fruit of life which they have got after lot of patience and wait.. Its true..

Sabra ka phal meetha hi hota hai...

Loved it.. I cannot even touch the way you wrote.. Hope i don't disappoint people out here..

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janani

@janani_divan

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#115

@doc,what a adorable conversation B/w ishra..this os show there past never effect there future.great writer present a great os for us.raman described the word sexy in his own style is so different.murabba perfect title,first os suprb hit in pallu thread.
Thanks to @pallu who always entertain us and always satisfy us and always keep the forum active.
Thanks for pm @pallu.

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usaonly

@usaonly

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Doc it was lovely OS like the taste of jam prickle you mention. I like the simlply emotion you written in this story for Basic daily life husband wife working together the kids move around the environment like home. The way Shagun and Subbu compare IshRa in the past they can see the change in them when they together. The song also tell us the longer of patient the better we get in our life like the fruit if you are wait longer the taste will be sweeter. Thank you so much for the wonderful OSand PM and one more big thanks for English translation dear.👏👏

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peace..

@peace..

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Doc, just read ur OS!

Firstly thank u for introducing me to this song( i dont listen to too many songs) and then using this kind of a song for d story. brilliant 👏

Loved how Shagun/Subbu were forced to see through their initial perceptions of Ishra's relationship..wow..how beautifully did u bring it out!.. Ishra convo was natural, so beautiful, so Ishraish! 😃. And that murabba song at the background added to the flavours so much more! (btw i hate murabbas 😆 😲 i loved it here)

this line:

One hushed interaction between Ishita and Raman was enough to check Subbu and Shagun's delusion and their exit much like their entry went unnoticed by the two people who were busy filling memories into their jar of life.

beautiful! 👏

and then how they dint notice the saree and the chashma 👏

All in all beautiful..very deep meaning.. loved d concept.

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peace..

@peace..

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#118

All writers,

If possible, attach/embed the youtube link of the song to ur OS. I definitely helps those who have not heard the song before. 😊 Others do not mind re-listening to the song!

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peace..

@peace..

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: avni_19
Pallavi... omgg! I missed another chance. First I missed pic thon ab song thon! 😭

Seeing the song list, I hv this urge to write but its simply impossible bcz I hv my exams in may n june n im drown inside my books!

I wished I could contribute... 😭

Soo sooorrryyy pallavii but as soon as my exams get over, I will be writing an IshRa FF! :-D

I hope u understand my situation! Thankuuu 🤗

no problem dear, study hard 😊