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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: --mancityfan--
Very good lucky

You add the nuances in character perfectly

Wish writers wrote the episodes this way too

And great to read your piece after long ting

Thanks Leo 🤗

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: RollingStones
Lucky...this is sooo...😭
Beautiiful Piece yaaarrr...

I loved the Line...where Ruhi mentiones She'll call Raman if ever She has fight with Ashhwin...and her Reason ...aww...I can soo relate to it...infact i fell most girls will.

I love how you brings out the simplicity in Characters...

Please keep Writing...Your write Up's are always pure Bliss...

Hellooo RS 😃

Yaar rulaane ka iraada nahin tha, ab tum logon ke comments padhke mereko bhi rona aa raha hai But in a way I am glad this one touched you so much 😊

Yes, I added that line exactly because I think that's how a lot of daughters would feel about their fathers & mothers. If I had a problem with anyone in school when i was a kid, my mom would first ask me if I did anything wrong and I should learn to be patient 😆 but dad would be more concerned about 'fixing' it 😳

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Piu

@Non-existent

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Hi... Very Soulful OneShot...😃 I can totally see Raman's reluctance... Job well done.👏

Ekta Kapoor will be very happy reading this, you know why.😉

Haye, what about Neelu? Sabko set kar diya, Neelu ki shaadi nai karayi aapne!😆

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: _DarkLady_
Hi... Very Soulful OneShot...😃 I can totally see Raman's reluctance... Job well done.👏

Ekta Kapoor will be very happy reading this, you know why.😉

Haye, what about Neelu? Sabko set kar diya, Neelu ki shaadi nai karayi aapne!😆

Thank You 😳

@bold... that actually scares me 😆

Neelu... Oh i should have mentioned a line about her too... that she married Ramesh the driver or something... sorry 😆