Ishra ss:my first love (updated part 28-pg78 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Amazing update,raman caring about ishita is good.who is the guy misguided the raman?it may be subbu?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part5
"KYA" both raman and mihir shouted in unison

Mihika"haan!!aur waise mihir tera saath aur bhi koyi hai kya????"

Mihir"haan woh ra.."he was about to say raman's name but raman immediately stopped him by keeping his hand on his mouth

Mihir"nahi!nahi! koyi bhi nahi hain!!,waise mihku ek baat bol,are u sure ki unke koyi boyfrnd nahi hai?"

Mihika in an irritated tone"haan ab agar tera doubts clear hochuke ho toh mein rakhu phone"

Mihir"nahi,nahi ek last question plz"

Mihika"pooch lekin jaldi"

Mihir"woh mihku uss waqt hamare farewell ke din par usne ishita ji aur us ladke ko saath mein dekha tha aur usne un dono ko hug karte huwe bhi dekha tha"

Mihika"pehle yeh batao ki woh usne kaun hai?kis gadhe ne ishu aur uske so called boy frnd ko dekha?mein bhi toh jaanu ki woh gada kaun hain?"

Mihir"woh ram..."he was about say raman's name but raman immediately stamped his foot

"aaahh...yeh tu kya kar raha hai?asked mihir in pain

Mihika"mein ne kya kiya?"

Mihir"tu nahi mihika woh...woh ek bada sa machar ne kata"

Mihika"toh tum uss bade se machar se yeh pooch raha hai ki woh kya kar raha hai"

"haan mihku mein usse samjha raha hoon ki woh dubara aise na kare"Said mihir

Mihika "mihir tum kabhi nahi sudhroge hamesha buddhu ke buddhu hi rahoge ,ab yeh sab chod aur yeh bata ki woh gadha kaun hain jisne ishu aur uske so called boyfrnd ko ek saath dekh kar lovers samajh baita"

Mihir"mere ek dosth ne par usme uski bhi koyi galthi nahi thi,us ladke ne kud kaha tha ki woh aur ishita ji ek doosre se pyaar karte hain aur tum ne bhi toh uss ladke ko dekh kar kaha tah ki 'yeh lo aagaya tera hero'?"

Mihika"Ohhh!!! toh tum subbu ki baat kar rahe ho?aur woh gadha itna nicha gir sakta tha, yeh mein ne kabhi nahi socha "

Mihir"kaun subbu??shaayad wahi hoga"

Mihika "subbu ishu ka dost hain.woh aur ishu ke papa bachpan ke dost te toh uss tarah yeh dono bhi dost ban gaye lekin woh idiot isse dost se jyaada manta hain isliye hamesha ishu ke aage peeche ghoomta rehta hain aur mujhe yeh baat bilkul acha nahi lagta tha.aur woh hamesha hum dono ki beech mein aajata tha aur jab bhi mein ishu se uske kaaran jagadti hoon toh woh beech mein aakar usse bacha leta tha issliye mein ne usse LITERALLY nahi SARCASM ke note pe ishu ka hero bulaya tha"

raman mouthed a What after hearing this

Mihir"kya?mihku aise bhi koyi karta hain kya?Bechara kitna pareshaan ho gaya tha"

Mihika"kaun bechara??"

Mihir"ummm...mein...mein kitna pareshaan hogaya tha"

Mihika"aur waise mihir, tune mere dost ke peeche detective lagaya tha?how mean of u mihir,i jst hate u"

Mihir"aise koyi baat nahi hain mihku woh mere dosth ne unka photo dekh ke yeh sabh mujhe bataya"

Mihika "shut up mihir tu ne uss gadhe ka baat manke mujhe iss time pe disturb kiya?I just hate u mihir"by saying this she cut the cal

Mihir"mihika meri baat toh...phone kaat dhi????,bhai mihika ne phone kaat di"

Raman was busy thinking about subbu

Raman"toh usne mujhe jhoot bola"

Mihir"nahi bhai mein jhoot nahi bol raha hoon,usne sach mein mera phone kaat di"

Raman"how dare he?"

Mihir"haan bhai apne sahi kaha how dare she?usse mera phone nahi kaatna chahiye tha"

Raman"uske wajah se mein ishita se dhoor hogaya"

Mihir"nahi bhai aap mihku ke wajah se ishita ji se kaha dhoor huwe ho infact usike wajah se aap ke misunderstandings dhoor huwe hai"

Raman"arrey duffer mein mihika ke bare mein nahi woh idiot subbu ke baare mein baat kar raha hoon"

Mihir"sry bhai mujhe laga ki aap mihika ke baat kar rahe ho koyi baat nahi bhai hum usko dekhlenge"

Raman"nahi mihir,mein aisa kuch nahi karunga kyu ki aaj mein bahut khush hoon aur mein nahi chahta ki mein uske baare mein soch ke apna dimaag karab karoo aur haan agar woh phir se mere aur ishita ke beech aaya na toh tab mein usse achi sabak sikhaunga"

Mihir"hm sahi hain bhai,lekin ek problem hai"

Raman"kya?"

Mihir"mihika mujse naaraz hai bhai ab aap hi ko kuch karna hoga"

Raman"mein kuch nahi karne wala"

Mihir"kya?par aap hi ne toh kaha tha ki agar koyi problem hogi toh aap solve kardenge?"

Raman"haan mein ne hi kaha tha lekin ab nahi karunga"

Mihir "par kyu?"

Raman"tere girlfriend ke wajah se"

Mihika"usne kya kiya?"

Raman"usne kya kiya?pucho usne kya nahi kiya,kitne baar mujhe gadha gadha kehrahi thi,isliye ab uske galti ka sajaa tu bhukat"

Mihir"par bhai this is so unfair"

Raman"everything is fair in love and war my child"by saying this he goes out of the room

"ab mein kya karu?"says mihir to himself

"aaj raat yahi rukh ja raat bahut hogayi hai"shouts raman from outside

That's it guys.thanx alot for the encouragement.plz keep encouraging

Part 6 on pg 9

Edited by pari... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
read all part in one go.
worth reading
awesome
beautiful story.
love Cute mihir.
Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Pari ,your update is suprb,so funny raman and mihir.enjoying your story alot
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
ur mihir is so cuteee...
awsome update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Loved it...
Awesome update.
Love you for this update ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
pari dear ... Awesome update
Loved Raman-Mihir convo
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
PART 6

"aaj raat yahi rukh ja raat bahut hogayi hai"shouts raman from outside

AT BHALLA HOUSE

It was a pleasant morning, Everyone were busy in the preparations for the big day

In Raman's Room

Raman was thinking something sitting on his bed with ishita's photo in his hand.At the same time mihir enters the room.

Mihir"kya soch rahe ho bhai?aaj aapka itna bada din hain phir bhi tera muh kyun utra hua hain?"

Raman"kuch nahi mihir, ishita ke bare mein soch raha hun"

Mihir"kyu bhai?sare problems aur doubts toh sulaj gaye hain!!,ab mihku bhi mujse baat kar rahi hain,ab kya soch rahe hon?"

Raman"yahi ki shaayad ishita kush nahi hain iss shaadi se"

Mihir"bhai aap aisa kyu soch rahe ho?agar unhe yeh shaadi se koyi problem hoti toh woh yeh shaadi ke liye haan kyu kehti?"

Raman"wahi toh mujhe samaj mein nahi aaraha hain...usne yeh rishte ke liye haan toh keh diya hain lekin uske aankh kuch aur hi bata rahe hain...Uski smile muh pe aaraha hain par woh ankhon takh nahi pahunch rahi hain"

Mihir"par kyu bhai?"

Raman"yahi toh patha lagana hain"

Mihir"par kaise?"

Raman"koyi toh hoga jisko yeh sawal ka jawab pata ho"by saying this Raman looks at mihir constantly by keeping a dangerous smile on his face

Mihir"aap ke yeh smile toh danger indicate kar raha hain,bhai kya chal raha hain aap ki dimag mein?"...something hits in his mind."aaww don't say me bhai ki aap mihika ke sahare yeh jaan na chahte ho"

Raman"nahi yaar"

Mihir"thank god"

Raman"mein mihika ke sahare nahi tere sahare jaan na chahta,kyu ki tu hi puchega na mihika se"

Mihir"no way bhai kitna mushkil se woh mujse baat kar rahi hain!,mein uss se baat nahi karne wale"

Raman "arrey mere bhai,agar tujhe koyi problem hogi toh mein unhe sambhal lunga"

Mihir"aap ne kal bhi yahi dialogue bola phir mujse muh modh liya,...plz bhai mujhe chod dho agar aap chahte ho toh aap khud mihika se baat karlo"

Raman"tikhe tu mera aur uska meeting arrange kar par ek sharth,tujhe bhi mere saath aana hoga"

Mihir"done par bhai meeting na shaam ko rakh te hain abhi toda dher mein aapka engagement shuru hojayegana issliye agar aapko yeh baat manzoor hain toh mein abhi usse cal karta hoon"

Raman"tikhe "

Mihir calls mihika

Mihir"hello mihku kya kar rahi ho?"

Mihika"tayyar horahi hoon engagement keliye"

Mihir in a worried tone"ENGAGEMENT,no mihku you can't do this to me tumne khud kaha tha na ki tumne mujhe maaf kiya ab yeh kya hain?not fair mihku"

Mihika"arrey shut up buddhu ,mein ishu ke engagement ke liye tayyar ho rahi hoon"

Mihir"thank god!!!mein toh darhi gaya tha,waise mihku tu aaj shaam ko free hain?"

Mihika"haan,kyu?"

Mihir"toh mujhe aakar mere ghar ke paas waale coffee shop pe 4 baje milo kuch important baat karni hain"

Mihika"tikh, lekin agar tumne kal raat ki tarah bakwaas baatein ki toh dekh lena"

Mihir"nahi karunga ab rakh tha hoon bye"

Mihika"bye"

Mihir"bhai,woh maan gayi hain ab aap tension chodo aur jaldi se jakar tayyar hojawo"

Raman"tikhe"after saying this both raman and mihir gets ready

Everyone goes to the venue for the engagement

AT VENUE

Engagement was an grand affair,all the rituals were done in punjabi style,Raman was dressed up in a white sherwani and ishu was dressed up in a purple and white lehenga with little make up and a diamond chain adorning her neck and big diamond earings adorning her ear.she was looking stunning,raman was staring ishita through out the ceremony.Ishita was smiling through out the ceremony but it never reached her eyes

Everone left the venue after the engagement got completed.

AT BHALLA HOUSE

Being tired after the busy day everyone retired to their rooms.But Raman and mihir went to the coffee shop for meeting mihika

AT COFFEE SHOP

Raman and mihir were waiting for mihika and just then mihika arrives.mihir hugs mihika and makes her sit

Mihika"hi raman,i mean jiju"

Raman"hi"

Mihir"jiju?yeh tera jiju kab se bangaya?"

Mihika"jab se inka aur ishu ka shaadi fix huwa,ab ishu tera bhabhi hogi toh yeh mera jiju hi huwe na"

"kal tak toh GADHA GADHA keh rahi thi aur aaj jiju keh rahi hain"murmurs raman only audible to mihir

Mihika"aap ne kuch kaha?"

Raman"nahi i mean haan,mein
tumse ishita ke baare mein baat karna chahta hoon"

Mihika"kahiye"

Raman"woh...kya ishita ko kisine yeh shaadi ke liye force kiya?"

Mihika"woh...haan bhi aur nahi bhi"

Raman"huh???"

That's it guys.Thanq all for ur encouragement,plz give ur valuable likes and cmnts
Part 7 on pg 11

Edited by pari... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Suspense k bich end kr dia yar...
Dis is not fair..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
super yaar
I enjoyed ur ss
mihir-Raman conversation
mihika-mihir conversation...
everything was nice
well written
why you stopped here yaar...suspense mei stop kiya...not done
eagerly waiting for next
thanks for the PM

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