FF: DESIRE II Part 15A-Part21E

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#491

interesting update..well written..👏

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florine_20

@florine_20

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#492

It was awesome vee
the way they were each others strength in last few updates earlier raman assured her and then she too did the same when he was vulnerable.
Loved the updates

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shidin0117

@shidin0117

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#493

Hey superb cover page Vee, thanks Gan, those black and whites have their own charm. I suddenly got reminded of yesteryear old b/w movies of Raj Kapoor, Nargis, Dilip Kumar, Vyjayanthimala

Superb updates, thanks for describing Ashok as pot bellied and Shaggy and her skimpy blouses, pls do dress her up in leopard print sarees so that I can hate and laugh at her.

Loved Ruhi saying aunty nahi, meri Ishima hai and the family kissing and hugging together. What a lovely snapshot it would make.

Ishita comforting Raman inspite of her insecurities...lovely

Finish of this custody thing Vee, I really want the family drama, them coming to know abt Ishra marriage.

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.TIA.

@.TIA.

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#494

Wow Vee 👏 😃

Yet another awsome update 😳.

I love the way you have shown Ramans vulnerability n plight. His concern regarding Adi n now d fear of loosing Ruhi came across soo amazingly. I so wish this is the kind of stuff we got to see 😳

Ashok n Shaggys descriptions

N for the rest of it, well ☺️

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WhyAmIHereAgain

@WhyAmIHereAgain

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#495

Veee...what do i say to this update of urs...

This week m anyway running on my own pendulum of emotions.. (which u ppl r witness too...😆) n then you write sucha piece...

i just could hear shagun screeching...eeessshhhiiitttaaa...

she reminded me of this gif...

This update gave me so many pheels...

starting from

so when is the next update...

PS: I had to be different...😆

Edited by shalz_123 - 10 years ago

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Anju.s

@Anju.s

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#496

Vee finally read the last two parts.

I liked it that you showed what real custody battle should be and not the drama unfolded on the show.

Yeh meri aunty nahin mumma hai...best line.

And shagun being mumma is an aunty. 😆

Raman emotional turmoil. And ishita's insecurities regarding that raman may still be in love with shagun..but the reason affecting him is Adi.

Table turning in end was good..didn't expect it 😳

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Anamika

@Impossible.Girl

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#497

Oh Vee...Loved it

Superb Update

This shagun will never learn

Ru baccha was so scared

Continue asap

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143rhb

@143rhb

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#498

WOW what an update. Waiting for reaction form Amma & Toshiji.

Tough job for raman & ishita to manoyify their family.

Till then chup chup ke milna.

Please PM yaar.

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Veeann

@Veeann

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#499

Originally posted by: .TIA.
Wow Vee 👏 😃
Yet another awsome update 😳.
I love the way you have shown Ramans vulnerability n plight. His concern regarding Adi n now d fear of loosing Ruhi came across soo amazingly. I so wish this is the kind of stuff we got to see 😳

Ashok n Shaggys descriptions

N for the rest of it, well ☺️

Thanks Tia. I dislike Shaguns characterisation so much I fear I am unkind to her. But hey, whatever 😆

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Veeann

@Veeann

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#500

Originally posted by: shalz_123
Veee...what do i say to this update of urs...
This week m anyway running on my own pendulum of emotions.. (which u ppl r witness too...😆) n then you write sucha piece...

i just could hear shagun screeching...eeessshhhiiitttaaa...

she reminded me of this gif...

This update gave me so many pheels...

starting from

to

to

so when is the next update...

PS: I had to be different...😆