FF: DESIRE II Part 15A-Part21E

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Posted: 10 years ago

#471

Vee - your most recent update was fabulous! Blame it on the lack of sleep which is making me a bit more senti then usually, but I definitely teared up when Raman broke down. That's the RKB I grew to love on this show - one who shouldered so much grief, angst, & burden. One who persevered only to find the one woman who could help him & whom he could help. In the show, I have always felt Raman just wants to be THE go to person for someone in the world, and I can see that vibe in your story!

*sigh* thanks again for a fabulous fabulous update! I can't wait for the next part!

👏

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ABI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#472

Loved the way you wrote about Raman's emotional turmoil, how all those feelings of losing Adi returned to him when he saw Shagun and how he doesn't want the same to happen with Ruhi. The way Ishita comforted him through all that and promised him that she'll always love him was beautiful. I'm sure they can fight through anything as long as they are together.

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fugitives123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#473

I'm gonna start commenting on your update from the last part. Why?? Because that's what remains fresh in my mind😛

And that was...

The flashback part was really good...intense!!

You brought out the emotions of Raman and Ruhi really well and Ishita handled them both beautifully. Shagun was at her dramebaaz best and I could actually hear her shrill voice in my head. I have a question...wasn't Shagun finding out who Raman's new wife is at the court?? I was expecting her to be shocked/irritated/more shrill.

When Raman said "I'll kill her before I let her take Ruhi from us. I swear, I'll kill her", I was thinking it's time sometime did that!! Can u send her to jail where she irritates some inmate and gets tortured to death?😡😡

I'll leave you with that thought. 😆

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Divi.C

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Posted: 10 years ago

#474

Superb..hope this custody finished soon n i m really looking forward to see the reactions of bhallas n iyers when they come to know about them...

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usaonly

@usaonly

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#475

Wonderful update Vee now the court case will start. The case worker had seen both side of Ruhi parents and can judge by her experience who will be the best parents for Ruhi. So it is going tobe benefit Bhalla family. Back to office scence you always amazing me for not leave Romance for IshRa I just scare some staff might just pop up when they do thing like that. Both are yearning to be in each other arms. Thanks for the update and have a beautiful weekend dear.🤗

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Shravs

@shravsss

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#476

wow...

Vee it was a grt update...

I liked portrayal of shagun in your story more than the show...

I liked Ishra scene at office...

That showed every emotion...

They had in them at that point of time...

Ruhi... I So loved her...

I so loved Ishru Bond...

Now waiting to know , how Ishu gets in contact with Adi ...

P.S : How Ishra will handle their Family after revelation of Truth of their Marriage , is what im looking forward to... as Im pretty sure Ru custody will be given to them with no more drama, as ashok himself said he wont fight a loosing battle ...

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Heavens_Flower

@Heavens_Flower

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#477

If the weekend getaway was sensual then the courtroom drama was emotional...

Your writing evokes so many emotions in the readers. Exceptional play of words... You are truly talented. 👏

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janani

@janani_divan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#478

Its a great update by a great writer,raman insecurities are clearly visible in this update.off course ishita will support him.like raman doubting ashok,i also doubting ashok.
Waiting for next part.ruhi baby afraid of loss of her ishima and papa.loved it.
What about adi?till now he hating raman like previously he did..
Suspense killing me ..hope ruhi custody give to ishra.

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Veeann

@Veeann

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#479

Originally posted by: beckysharp
Vee,
How do you do this ? How can you come up with such superlative writing every time you update ! This was one of the most touching updates. Loved it. The turmoil, the fear the anger of Raman was so so so palpable, that I actually wanted to reach out and give him a hug.

I loved loved loved it !

I was giggling imagining Sangy with thinning hair and running to fat !

And don't you dare put a disclaimer when I say, you deserve to be a published author. Your books would fly off the shelves !

Aww Ash, you're so sweet. Thank you yaara. Yes, but disclaimer is still there, I don't have any delusions about this cliche M & B stuff.

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Veeann

@Veeann

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#480

Originally posted by: rutu83
lovely lovely updates
i loved the contrast you showed between the khannas and the bhallas - very in your face but very real sadly. gosh screeching shagun ☢️
continue soon :)

Thank you Rutu 😃

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