FF: DESIRE II Part 15A-Part21E

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Veeann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: krishy13

Vee...what's a small geographic boo boo (which idk if it even is wrong or not) compared to all the illogic & factual blunders we've seen on screen recently! 🤣 Your story is so good that you deserve to take creative liberties bc I know you won't take advantage of them...lol

Waise...I LOVED Puttar's surprise for Biwi! Leave it to the RKB to have this elaborate & thoughtful surprise planned for his dharampatni!

I can't wait to read the rest of Ch 17, which coincidentally 17 is my favorite number & so far this chapter is shaping up to be fabulously wonderful! 😃

Hey Krishy, because you love the number 17, I'll give you some hotwa romance in Part 17 . He he

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Veeann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: arshi21
Aye!! Cliffhanger :( I sooo wanna know what it is...a palace? Fort? Some heritage place I think...Haina ? Will have to wait I think :p

No, it's something else. He he.

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Veeann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: shadeslayer
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!! Absolutely fantastic update V!!!! I sooo love this romantic Puttar and Shy Biwi

Thanks Su. 😃

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Veeann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: fugitives123
I just typed an essay and then clicked on clear form...damn My iPhone for not having ctrl z

Shuru se shuru Karti hoon...

Vee that was fantastic!! Loved all of it but special mentions go to these scenes

She felt she desperately needed to be his wife in every sense...even though ruhi wanted to join them.

Ishra hug in front of mihir and him hooting and clapping followed by the abey chup...

His phobia and her holding his hand and kissing him...oooh that just oozed of romance

The part where she couldn't see anything so she sniffed him a lil to feel the comfort..too good! I could totally relate to it...It's amazing how a person's fragrance can make u think that everything is perfect around you.

Can't wait for the next update vee but need u to get well first...thanks for the lovely update despite not feeling well. Tc..muah!

Thanks Anu. I remembered I had given him a fear of small planes in the first or second update, so I used that to get in some romance. He he 😃

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Veeann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: avni_19
Wahh wahhh! Wt a strt to honeymoon! Itneee expensive trip hai yeh! But I loveddd itt soo muchh!!! Waiting for the honeymoon update! *facepalm* ! Lol ;-)

I heard u r nt keeping well! R u ok nw? Take care Veee Dii !

Promise, I'll update this weekend.

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WhyAmIHereAgain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#286

awesome update... ooh wow...one day rajasthan trip...naice... cant wait for the next installment😃

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ABI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#287

So happy that finally Ishita and Raman are on their honeymoon. I loved how Ishita came dressed with her Chooda and Thali. She finally can wear the symbols of her marriage out in the open, even if it's just for a day. Also loved Raman's surprise, with the flight and all the arrangements to make sure Ishita doesn't know where they are till they reach there. Now I can't wait for the actual honeymoon to begin.