FF: DESIRE II Part 15A-Part21E

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cloudy24

@cloudy24

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#301

Wow... jaisalmer😃romantic update... eagerly waiting for next😉

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#302

Phew! Managed to finish all the parts. God V this saga is just too beautiful. U r a rock star. Really impressed by how u have managed to get ur viewers hooked with such back to back awesome updates. ⭐️

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monalisa123

@monalisa123

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#303

Wow

The anticipation is killing me.

I loved everything about their honeymoon

With the details u provided, I can picture the enormous tent, the pool and everything else.

Impecable detailed writer you are

Thank you for the update

Can't wait for the next update

Edited by monalisa123 - 10 years ago

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fugitives123

@fugitives123

Navigator

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Posted: 10 years ago

#304

I'm having difficulty with the words...that's what ur update did to me...vee pls write a novel...coz babe u r awesome!!

What detailing...the tent and the deco and the view outside...and not to forget
Raman in trunks looking like a greek god...yep totally imaginable 😳 😳

The whole set up reminded me of jodhaa Akbar...and in lamhon ke daaman mein was playing in my head.

I hope jkr doesn't have cold feet...

Agla update kab o kab yaara?? Kyunki next mein toh...party all night...party all night!!
[:D/] 🥳

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beckysharp

@beckysharp

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#305

V, I lub ya, I lub ya , I lub ya ! Amazing amazing description ! Beautiful build up ! I'm loving it !

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maaloo

@maaloo

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#306

Vee .. oh V.. why .. why are you not the writer for the show? Your words and narration have taken me into another world.. Superb story telling dear.. waiting for the next edition.. with bated breath

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#307

I love the bashful ishita as much as bold one
Continue soon

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Heavens_Flower

@Heavens_Flower

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#308

It is said a picture is worth thousands words... Looks like we have to amend that to say your words are worth a picture coming alive... 👏

The description of the tent resort is so beautiful and the tension between this couple was so palpable...

Looking forward to the next installment...

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Aarohi Talegoankar

@Albeli26

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#309

intehaa ho gayi intezaar ki...
aai na kuch khabar humaari update ki...
yeh Hume hai yakin, bewafaa aap nahi
phir wajah kya hui,intezaar ki?????????

di raat ka wait nahi hoga plz plz ab next part updatre kar do

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Rinki

@IshraMiNeholic

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#310

Originally posted by: aarohi26
intehaa ho gayi intezaar ki...
aai na kuch khabar humaari update ki...
yeh Hume hai yakin, bewafaa aap nahi
phir wajah kya hui,intezaar ki?????????

di raat ka wait nahi hoga plz plz ab next part updatre kar do

Lolz... 😆