Pic-OSthon #2: Part 2 of TS by pretty_h on Pg 48 - Page 6

Originally posted by: peace..

Neethi!

U know i was so excited for dis one, so i just wanted to read it RIGHT NOW! Plus its YOUR OS, how cud i not take out time! 😃

The first line itself is choo cute- her pigtails flying behind her..chooo cute! awee

I LOVE dogs..I never had my own pet..but hv had lots of stray-dog friends in my neighbourhood.. 😉 They r d most adorable things..

n dis line was equally adorable..awee: grossed in her thoughts, she failed to hear the sudden patter of paws in the room, or the soft plonk on her bed, and looked up only in time to be smothered with wet licks all over her face.

lay on the floor, with his head on his paws, looking at her expectantly. --oye soo sweet!

must say..how beautifully did u pen down d doggy's behaviour n expressions 👏

n whistles on dis one: He looked up in response, and began licking her face again.

Muttu helped trigger d romance..haha 😆 pls make him d cv of d show..lol.

while Muthu bounded around them, wagging his tail gleefully. hayee!

They looked over at Muthu, who was jumping in the air, a few feet away, trying to catch hold of some floating bubbles. She laughed and shook her head at the hilarity of the sight. 👏👏👏 brilliant idea n add on in d writing!

den d whole ruhi getting lost in d mirror maze was such a marvellous idea..I seriously cannot stop praising u for dis 👏👏👏

Seriously Neethi u made me cry with the story..yes i have tears yaar.. it was soo heart touching! Ur Oses r such a pleasure to read..they r so feel good..especially d use of d language n d cute little scenes u r soo feel good. 👏👏 U create magic with words. 👏👏

Overall the whole concept was brilliant..out of this world. 👏👏 U even encorporated d pic perfectly too..d pic clicking idea was superb again 👏

I am telling I hv read each an every author on d forum by now. I have no doubt in telling you that you r d best author on d forum. Hands down. Your writing makes me so happy! 😃

I am so lucky u did d opening OS and then volunteered for dis one. I cant thank you enough. Lots and lots of Dua to you!

Originally posted by: nrn1486

Pallavi yaar.. you make me sharminda *blush blush*

I have honestly never received such amazing comments, so I don't even know how to reply now. Ek thanks se kaam nahi chalega😆

Seriously, though, I'm glad you liked all the doggy moments. And I'm glad you loved the OS as a whole!

But I wouldn't have thought of the idea, if you hadn't come up with this thread, and encouraged us participants so much. So, its all thanks to you, really😃

arey ab tum mujhe sharminda mat karo. 😆 u know d other day wen i made d special post for someone to take up d pic for an OS..i was quite doubtful that anybody wud agree..n see d chamatkaar...YOU agreed n that too soo quickly 👏👏 i dont think even d cvs did as much magic by bringing back muttu back as much u did with this OS. 👏

Originally posted by: shalz_123

Omg.. you got lost in an amusement park?😲 Scary, yar. I can't even imagine! how old were you?

@Bold: Lol😆😆

What sort of a teacher was she yar? Dogs have been man's best friends since forever😛

Aw so cute...nice one Neethi! I liked how you squeezed in a couple of IshRa scenes into this story :)

Originally posted by: DipaRB6

Aw so cute...nice one Neethi! I liked how you squeezed in a couple of IshRa scenes into this story :)

i agree 👏👏

Originally posted by: peace..

arey ab tum mujhe sharminda mat karo. 😆 u know d other day wen i made d special post for someone to take up d pic for an OS..i was quite doubtful that anybody wud agree..n see d chamatkaar...u agreed n that too soo quickly 👏👏 i dont think even d cvs did as much magic by bringing back muttu back as much u did with this OS. 👏

Originally posted by: nrn1486

@Bold: That statement I'll accept. Kyu ki CVs to kisi kaam ke nahi hain🤣

😆😆 But seriously.. i was disappointed somehow with d treatment of 'Mutthu back' track.. d initial tracks on muttu were choo cute!

Originally posted by: DipaRB6

Aw so cute...nice one Neethi! I liked how you squeezed in a couple of IshRa scenes into this story :)

Originally posted by: peace..

😆😆 But seriously.. i was disappointed somehow with d treatment of 'Mutthu back' track.. d initial tracks on muttu were choo cute!

Originally posted by: nrn1486

@bold🤣🤣

Your dad was so cute about that. Its like saying "Main to hu bhulakkad, at least you be responsible and come straight to the lost and found section"😆

And your teacher was mahaan only. Such a sweet idea for the essay it was!

BTW, thanks for the lovely comments yar😃